M.Harrell (cactuar_tamer) — 付けたレビュー

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Thank you always for your support.
Actually, the commodities from your company are in consideration for being sold in our stores.

I would like to ask a question regarding your product codes. Do you use UPC or EAN codes at your company?

If it these two codes then we can use them as they are in Japan, but if they are different codes we will reissue them on our end.

In case they are UPC or EAN, would you be able to give use the stickers to those codes so we could stick them onto the products?

Lastly, do the products we requested from your company have the product codes on them?

We kindly ask for confirmation.

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Thank you always for your support.
Actually, the commodities from your company are in consideration for being sold in our stores.

I would like to ask a question regarding your product codes. Do you use UPC or EAN codes at your company?

If you are using either one of these two codes, then we can use them as they are in Japan, but if they are different codes we will reissue them on our end.

In case they are UPC or EAN, would you be able to give use the stickers to those codes so we could stick them onto the products?

Lastly, do the products we requested from your company have the product codes on them?

We kindly ask for confirmation.

元の翻訳
There was the news to say that productive population(from 15 to 64 years old) fell down 80 million the other day. As for the labor force in Japan, the absolute number will decrease in future. If it becomes so, the fluidity of the talented person is indispensable.

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There was a news report the other day which said that productive population (those from 15 to 64 years old) fell by 80 million. As for the labor force in Japan, the absolute number will decrease in future. If so, the fluidity of the labor pool will become indispensable.

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This PC software can authenticate up to 3 people.
We can't find out the reason of product key's authentication error.↵
And so we will give a new product key to the customers to solve the problems.

Japan's Microsoft company have no relation to Microsoft Corporation in US.
Therefore support office will limit to accept Japan's Microsoft products .
Products are all authorized and so please feel free to use.

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This software can authenticate up to 3 people.
We can't find out the reason for the product key's authentication error, so we will give you a new product key to resolve the problems.

Microsoft of Japan has no relation to the Microsoft Corporation in the US.
Therefore, the support office will only provide support for Japan's Microsoft products .
The products are all legitimate versions, so please feel free to use them.

元の翻訳
Please correct me if I am wrong but is it right to presume what you're saying is that the package has not arrived yet?

As I wrote in my previous email, we have found out it is not possible to send you the product as it not possible to load onto the plane.

Please be assured that we have refunded you for this order.

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Please correct me if I am wrong but is it right to presume what you're saying is that the package has not arrived yet?

As I wrote in my previous email, we have found out it is not possible to send you the product as it cannot be loaded onto the plane.

Please be assured that we have refunded you for this order.