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Do you happen to know any old books similar to 〇〇?
If it is an interesting book, I'd like to purchase it.

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Do you know any old books similar to 〇〇?
If it is a fascinating book, I would like to purchase it.

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One other thing to note, regarding the pricing error, we admit the fact that our response was not satisfactory.
Currently we have added an extra headcount in order to avoid such errors and conduct our item registration.
Nevertheless, if an error occurred and with a warning from your end, we promise to reinvestigate the issue within 24 hours and revise the price as appropriate.

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One other thing to note, regarding the pricing error, we admit the fact that our response was not satisfactory.
Currently, we have added an extra headcount in order to avoid such errors and conduct our item registration.
Nevertheless, if an error occurred and a warning comes from your end, we promise to re-investigate the issue within 24 hours and revise to suitable price.

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"Together" Release Thanksgiving Event at Kanto Area

※Please understand that our staff might touch your shoulders or arms during induction.
※Re-selling, duplicating and forging the tickets are strictly prohibited.

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"Together" Sale Launch Thanksgiving Event in Kanto Area

※Please understand that our staff might touch your shoulders or arms to guide you. Please attend only if this is acknowledged by you.
※Re-selling, duplicating and forging the event number tickets and hand-shaking event tckets are strictly prohibited.

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*Applicable CD for the event is scheduled to be delivered to the stores on Tuesday, June 17.
*Those stores issuing the event numbering ticket will also be the venues for the handshaking event.
*Only the limited quantity of the numbering tickets for the event is available.

<Notice>
*Baggage inspection or baggage room may be established for the safetiness of our customers, artists, or talents.
*Those event venues are administered with high security, however if you happend to find suspicious individual or objects, please let our security guards know.

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*Applicable CD for the event is scheduled to be delivered to the stores on Tuesday, June 17 afternoon.
*Those stores issuing the event numbering ticket will also be the venues for the handshaking event.
*Only the limited quantity of the numbering tickets for the event will be available.

<Notice>
*Baggage inspection or baggage room may be established for the safety of our customers, artists, or talents.
*Those event venues are administered with a high security, however if you happened to find suspicious individual or objects, please let our security guards know.

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Purchase on TSUTAYA ONLINE and products received at SHIBUYA TSUTAYA are out of our support.
Purchasing CD at the event area will not gain any bargain nor T points.

<To participate in the event>
Purchase any of products below for the event on June 17 (TUE) when the products are stocked at store, and you will be given a numbered ticket for the event.
Please bring the numbered ticket and two handshake participation right tickets with yourself. Handshake participation right tickets are included in the first edition CD.

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Purchase on TSUTAYA ONLINE and products received at SHIBUYA TSUTAYA are excluded for our support.
Please understand that, purchasing CD at the event area will not subject to the various discounts or T points.

<To participate in the event>
Purchase any of products below for the event from June 17 (TUE) at store, and a numbered ticket for the event will be issued.
Please bring the numbered ticket and two handshake participation right tickets in the limited edition CD with yourself.

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"Together" Sale Anniversary ~ Thanksgiving Event ( Kanto Area)

Thanks a lot for always supporting us!!
Cheeky Parade members will appear each music shop, and show you our gratitude!

<<Content of Event>>
Handshake event of each group at store

<< Place, Members and Date of Event>>
■Kanto Area 1
Place: HMV Lumine Est Shinjuku
Members: Asami Watanabe, Seran Mizorogi, Marine Yamamoto, and Hina Nagai
(We are sorry that there has been a member change since we announced on June 12. We appreciate your understanding.)

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"Together" Sale Launch ~ Thanksgiving Event ( Kanto Area)

To all fans, thank you so much for always supporting us!!
Members will appear at CD shop at each location, and show you our gratitude directly!

<<Content of Event>>
Handshake event of each group at store

<< Store Location, Members and Time of Event>>
■Kanto Area 1
Place: HMV Luminest Shinjuku
Members: Asami Watanabe, Seran Mizorogi, Marine Yamamoto, and Hina Nagai
(We are sorry that there has been a member change since we announced on June 12. We appreciate your understanding.)

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「Together」selling ceremony Thanksgiving Event(Kanto‧Kansai)

To every fans, we are really appreciate your support until now!!
Our members will pass on our appreciation directly in the music store in all part of country!!

<event content>
Shake hand event with different group in different branch☆

<Branches‧Members‧Assembling time >
Coming soon

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"Together" Product Launch Thanksgiving Event (Kanto‧Kansai)

To every fans, we are really appreciate your continuous support!!
Our members will convey our gratitude directly in the music store in all part of country!!

<Event Content>
Hand shake event with a different group in a different branch☆

<Branches‧Members‧Assembling time >
Coming soon