Ariel (ariel_e) — もらったレビュー

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If you come to London, go to the movie theatre
A few years ago, I went to London and then I was going to buy tickets for Billy Elliot but they were sold out. So this time I ordered some tickets before I left to London.
The seats were about third from the front and the movie was really exciting, so both I and my wife were impressed. I thought it was wonderful to come to the movie theatre.
I like movies and I have watched Billy Elliot many times, so I was able to understand lines without improvisations.
The theatre is near the bus stop, we could stay at a cafe near the theatre when we came to there too early.
I wish we could come to the theatre again.

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If you go to London, go to the movie theatre ["Billy Elliot" is a musical based on the movie of the same name]
A few years ago, I went to London and then I was going to buy tickets for "Billy Elliot" but they were sold out. So this time I ordered some tickets before I left for London.
The seats were about the third from the front and the movie was really exciting [confusing], so both my wife and I were impressed. I thought it was wonderful to come to the movie [this is a musical] theatre.
I love the movie version and I have watched it many times, so I was able to understand lines except for improvisations.
The theatre is near the bus stop, so we could stay at a cafe near the theatre when we went there too early.
I wish we could go to the theatre again.

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I was send a scanned pay slip in the package by a delivery company in New Jersey.
There are information on it.

The items and the number of them equated to the invoice mailed on Thursday.
They are going to arrive in Japan on next Tuesday, I will check them then.
But there are a different mistake on the Order No.0123.
I ordered two small size items.
Please send unsent articles with the one I ordered today.

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I was sent a scanned pay slip in the package by a delivery company in New Jersey.
There is information on it.

The items and the number of them equated to the invoice mailed on Thursday.
They are going to arrive in Japan on next Tuesday, I will check them then.
But there was a different mistake on the Order No.0123.
I ordered two small size items.
Please send unsent articles with the one I ordered today.

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Is there a Japanese interpreter in Vung Tau Vietnam?
If is there anyone who can do it, please tell us how much it costs.
Are the holidays going to start on February 8th?

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Is there any Japanese interpreter in Vung Tau Vietnam?
If there is, please tell us how much it costs per day.
Is it a holiday from February 8th in Vietnam?

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Is there a Japanese interpreter in Vung Tau Vietnam?
If is there anyone who can do it, please tell us how much it costs.
Are the holidays going to start on February 8th?

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Is there a Japanese interpreter in Vung Tau Vietnam?
If is there anyone who can do it, please tell us how much it costs per day.
Are the holidays in Vietnam going to start on February 8th?

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I agree that the serial number is printed at the behind of its headstock, but the number has disappeared.
It might be considered the number is erased by a former owner or by a cleaning.
Please be forewarned and buy it.

Thank you for your pointing. Could you teach me a difference of each models? I would like to know which point led you the decision.

wonderful quality gear

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I agree that the serial number is printed at the back of its headstock, but the serial number has disappeared.
It might be considered the number was erased by a former owner or by cleaning it.
Please understand before buying it.

Thank you for your point. Could you teach me a difference of each models? I would like to know which point led you to the decision.

wonderful quality gear

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This item is able to play on only Japanese player because it is made in Japan and has only Japanese region code. Can we ship your order? Do you want to cancel your order?
We have had new items in stock now. We send your order right away. Please wait until it will be delivered to your place.

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This item is able to be played on only a Japanese player because it is made in Japan with a different region code. Can we ship your order? Do you want to cancel your order?
We have had new items in stock now. We will send your order right away. Please wait until it will be delivered to your place.