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評価: 51 / 1 Review / 2015/02/07 01:37:14

ariel_e
ariel_e 51 読みやすく伝わりやすい翻訳を心がけています。どうぞ宜しくお願い致します。
日本語

イギリスに行くなら絶対行った方がいい
数年前ロンドンに行ったとき、到着してからビリーエリオットのチケットを買おうとしたら完売だったので今回は日本で予約してから行きました
前から3列目くらいだったので、とても迫力があって夫婦ともに感動して、来てよかったと思いました。映画が大好きで何回も観ていたので、アドリブ以外のセリフはだいたい理解できました
シアターの場所もバス停が近いし、早く着いてもカフェが目の前にあるので時間がつぶせました
もしまた行くチャンスがあったらまた観に行きたいと思います

英語

If you come to London, go to the movie theatre
A few years ago, I went to London and then I was going to buy tickets for Billy Elliot but they were sold out. So this time I ordered some tickets before I left to London.
The seats were about third from the front and the movie was really exciting, so both I and my wife were impressed. I thought it was wonderful to come to the movie theatre.
I like movies and I have watched Billy Elliot many times, so I was able to understand lines without improvisations.
The theatre is near the bus stop, we could stay at a cafe near the theatre when we came to there too early.
I wish we could come to the theatre again.

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[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2015/02/09 01:04:40

元の翻訳
If you come to London, go to the movie theatre
A few years ago, I went to London and then I was going to buy tickets for Billy Elliot but they were sold out. So this time I ordered some tickets before I left to London.
The seats were about third from the front and the movie was really exciting, so both I and my wife were impressed. I thought it was wonderful to come to the movie theatre.
I like movies and I have watched Billy Elliot many times, so I was able to understand lines without improvisations.
The theatre is near the bus stop, we could stay at a cafe near the theatre when we came to there too early.
I wish we could come to the theatre again.

修正後
If you go to London, go to the movie theatre ["Billy Elliot" is a musical based on the movie of the same name]
A few years ago, I went to London and then I was going to buy tickets for "Billy Elliot" but they were sold out. So this time I ordered some tickets before I left for London.
The seats were about the third from the front and the movie was really exciting [confusing], so both my wife and I were impressed. I thought it was wonderful to come to the movie [this is a musical] theatre.
I love the movie version and I have watched it many times, so I was able to understand lines except for improvisations.
The theatre is near the bus stop, so we could stay at a cafe near the theatre when we went there too early.
I wish we could go to the theatre again.

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