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元の翻訳
I registered my AMEX card, but it seems like a 30%-discount has not been applied. Can you tell me why this is the case?
Please apply the discount.

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I registered my AMEX card, but it seems like a 30%-discount has not been applied. Can you tell me why this happened?
Please apply the discount.

元の翻訳
I registered my AMEX card, but it seems like a 30%-discount has not been applied. Can you tell me why this is the case?
Please apply the discount.

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I registered my AMEX card as my payment method, but it seems like a 30%-discount has not been applied. Can you tell me why this is the case?
Please apply the discount.

元の翻訳
However, since I am making a shipment today, the delivery date will likely be sometime during x/x ~ x/x at the fastest.
If you could kindly accept the delivery date, I will send the item immediately.

Since it has already been quite a while since you had placed the order, I will be willing to offer you a refund. In that case, I will add extra $x to the refund as a compensation.

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However, I would like to make a shipment today and the delivery date will be sometime during x/x ~ x/x the earliest.
If you could kindly accept the delivery date, I will send the item immediately.

It has already been quite a while since you placed the order, I will be willing to offer you a refund. In that case, I will add extra $x to the refund as a compensation.

元の翻訳
Due to the Christmas season, a standard shipping may take 3 to 4 weeks to be delivered to you. I recommend you choose Expedited shipping.

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Due to the Christmas season, standard shipping may take 3 to 4 weeks for delivery. I recommend you choose Expedited shipping.

元の翻訳
Hello,

I am +++ who have just called you.

I know we have been in contact for a while, but again there was no detailes indicated on the invoice from the seller for the package #***.

So, I have attahced a document that shows that shows the e-mails that I and the seller exchanged.

In the document, you will find the package #, the numbers of items, the price, and the UPS tracking number.

I would very much appreciate a quick shipment of the package to Japan.

Thank you.

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Hello,

I am +++ who have just called you.

I know we have been in contact for a while, but again there were no detailes indicated on the invoice of the package from the seller #***.

So, I have attahced a document that shows the e-mails in which all conversations with the seller are included.

In the image, you will find the package #, the numbers of items, the price, and the UPS tracking number.

I would appreciate a quick shipment of the package to Japan.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
Hello,

I am +++ who have just called you.

I know we have been in contact for a while, but again there was no detailes indicated on the invoice from the seller for the package #***.

So, I have attahced a document that shows that shows the e-mails that I and the seller exchanged.

In the document, you will find the package #, the numbers of items, the price, and the UPS tracking number.

I would very much appreciate a quick shipment of the package to Japan.

Thank you.

修正後
Hello,

I am +++ who have just called you from Japan.

I know we have been in contact for a while, but again there were no details indicated on the invoice for package #*** to be filled up by the seller.

So, I have attached an image that shows the e-mails that I have exchanged with the seller.

In the image, you will find the package #, the numbers of items, the price, and the UPS tracking number.

I would very much appreciate a quick shipment of the package to Japan.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
Currently, the Philippine government does not allow any imports of plant products without a permission. “IMPORT PERMIT” is a document that indicates the import conditions of quarantine certificate for plant products. It can be obtained by submitting a document in the form of attached #1. The document will be issued in the form of attached #2.
Inspection for exports of plant products will be done in Japan in order to assure if the products correspond to the content of the permit. When products and the permit meet the import conditions of quarantine certificate for plant products of the Philippines, an approval number and a “PHYTOSANITARY CERTIFICATE” that indicates the details of approval (if necessary) will be issued.

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Currently, the Philippine government does not allow any imports of plant products without permission. “IMPORT PERMIT” is a document that indicates the import conditions of quarantine certificate for plant products. It can be obtained by submitting a document in the form of attached #1. The document will be issued in the form of attached #2.
Inspection for exports of plant products will be done in Japan in order to assure if the products correspond to the content of the permit. When products and the permit meet the import conditions of quarantine certificate for plant products of the Philippines, an approval number and a “PHYTOSANITARY CERTIFICATE” that indicates the details of approval (if necessary) will be issued.

元の翻訳
もう卒業もしたし、最近は家を建てようと頑張ってみたり、色んな事を整理しようとしてるかな。

東京とイギリスの田舎じゃ、やっぱり相当違うよね。東京のどこに住んでいるの？

自分は、かっこいいサーキットとか、色んな物を作りたいと思ってるんだ。クリエイティブに物を作るスペースがあって、ラッキーだと感じているよ。

このプロジェクトのベースにはAxial SCX10シャーシを使おうと思っているんだ。とっても良いスケールトラックで数年ずっと持ってたんだ。（flickrに写真も載せてるよ）次の行程に進むのに必要な材料や道具を揃えてから、自分でパーツを作っていこうと思うんだ。今のところは、結構シンプルなままだけど。見たかったら、出来上がりの写真も送るよ。

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もう卒業もしたし、最近は家を建てようと頑張ってみたり、色んな事を整理しようとしてるかな。

東京とイギリスの田舎じゃ、やっぱり相当違うよね。東京のどこに住んでいるの？

自分は、かっこいいサーキットとか、色んな物を作りたいと思ってるんだ。クリエイティブに物を作るスペースがあって、ラッキーだと感じているよ。

このプロジェクトのベースにはAxial SCX10シャーシを使おうと思っているんだ。とっても良いスケールトラックで数年ずっと持ってたんだ。（flickrに写真も載せてるよ）次の段階に進むのに必要な材料や道具を揃えてから、自分でパーツを作っていこうと思うんだ。今のところは、結構シンプルなままだけど。見たかったら、出来上がりの写真も送るよ。

元の翻訳
To whome it may concern,

Thank you very much for your reply and the picture.

Unfortunately, however, I would like to cancel the order this time.

I very much appreciate your response.

Can you suggest me an item that is same as what is shown in the picture?
I would like to consider placing an order of a suggested item.

Thank you,

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To whome it may concern,

Thank you very much for your reply and the picture.

Regrettably, however, I would like to cancel the order this time.

I very much appreciate your response.

Can you suggest me an item that is exactly the same as the picture?
I would like to consider placing an order of (buying) your suggested item.

Thank you,

元の翻訳
#19 is still at custom, because t no invoice is attaced to the outside of the box. Can you please send us an invoice of NZ$4.11?

Also, is it possible to specify the item as "shoe polish" on invoices from next time?

Awaiting your reply,
Thanks

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#19 is still at customs, because no invoice is attaced to the outside of the package. Can you please email us an invoice of NZ$4.11?

Also, is it possible to specify the item as "shoe polish" on invoices from next time?

Awaiting your reply,
Thanks