Carmen (abmskayi) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Thank you for sending us the registration and documents of w8-BEN recently.
However, when we let the stock company read those documents received from your company, they asked us these 2 questions.

1. What is the TIN/SS# - Social Security and Tax Identification Number of the company?
2. Account type means “Retail” or “IRA”?

It seems that without the above data, we cannot transfer to DRS.
I feel sorry but I hope you can reply us as soon as possible.

Thank you.

修正後
Thank you for sending us the registration and documents of w8-BEN recently.
However, the stock company asked us two questions after reading the documents from your company.

1. What is the TIN/SS# - Social Security and Tax Identification Number of the company?
2. Does account type mean “Retail” or “IRA”?

It seems that without the above-mentioned data, we cannot transfer to DRS.
I'm very sorry for the trouble, but I hope you can immediately send us a reply.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
いかがなさいますか？↵
↵
Good afternoon. Thank you for your purchase.

Concerning the product you ordered, it was out of stock.
Though it is our pleasure to have your order, we are sorry about this.
We do not have blue. However, we have L size in white colour.

How do you think?

修正後
Good afternoon. ↵
↵
Thank you for your purchase.

Concerning the product you ordered, it was out of stock.
It is our pleasure to have your order, but we are sorry about this.
Although we do not have blue, however, we have an L size in white color.

How do you think?

元の翻訳
表示されてないけど私はもう自分のものを支払いましたか？
もし支払いましたの場合、いつものを取ってくれますか？

修正後
表示されていませんが、私はもう自分のものを支払いましたか？
もし支払っている場合、いつ商品を取ってもらえますか？

元の翻訳
As course in college will be ended after the first week of November, I can work as full time starting from the second week.

I have been worked for 10 months in Apple Premium Reseller as a part time.↵
My score of ASTO kept with over 9000 marks. I did Apple products selling mainly. Also, I did clearing work for iPhone’s water leakage and screen breakage.

As it is my first time to come to Canada in August, I have no confidence about my speaking. To utilize my 3 years’ experience in Japan, I will try hard. As I did Taekwondo during my University time, I am confident with my strength.

修正後
My college will end by the first week of November, so I am able to work full-time starting the second week of the month.

I worked part-time for 10 months at an Apple Premium Reseller in Japan. I maintain an Apple Sales Training Online (ASTO) score of 9,000 points or higher. I mainly sell Apple products and exchange iPhones that have gotten wet or had their screens cracked.

I am arriving in Canada at the start of August and I have no confidence in my English speaking skills. I will make the most of my three years of working experience in Japan and exert my best effort. I did taekwondo in college so I have confidence in my physical fitness.