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rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 22 Jun 2014 at 10:58
Comment お客様の過失で起きた過払いではないと思うので、I have mistakenly paid twice for the same order. という文章をお客様に非がないことをアピールする表現にされるとより良くなると思います。お金や責任を問う内容の翻訳は注意が必要だと勉強...

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 22 Jun 2014 at 09:45
original Thank you for contacting me. Right now, it seems that I have been charged twice for the same item. Please refund the overpayment for the item. Also, I had on more issue. Why has "My Order History" been deleted? Below I've included the Paypal transaction ID. Please confirm.	corrected Thank you for contacting me. Right now, it seems that I have been charged twice for the same item. Please refund the overpayment for the item. Also, I had one more issue. Why has "My Order History" been deleted? Below I've included the Paypal transaction ID. Please confirm.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 22 Jun 2014 at 18:28
Comment いくつか間違えもあるのですが、表現が優れた部分もあるので、むしろこのまま採用してもらった方が外国人のお客様のフィードバックだということがリアルに伝わって良いような気がしました。

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 23 Jun 2014 at 21:02
original <Dancers were great> I am glad that I watched SA.CHOOM on my third visit to Korea, after having watched Nanta and Jump. The moment at the end where everyone in the venue danced together was very enjoyable as the dance was simple but created a sense of unity. However, we had a difficult time finding the venue; we finally reached after asking the way from passers-by repeatedly. Hence, we recommend that you check in advance. It is crucial that you check the exit from the station which you should take. <Folk show> Although we were looking forward to the show, it turned out to be so-so. I had a good impression of the atmostphere at the beginning. I do not think I would be participating again.	corrected <Dancers were great> I am glad that I watched SA.CHOOM on my third visit to Korea, after having watched Nanta and Jump. The moment at the end where everyone in the venue danced together was very enjoyable as the dance was simple but created a sense of unity. However, we had a difficult time finding the venue; we finally reached after asking the way from passers-by repeatedly. Hence, we recommend that you check in advance. It is crucial that you check the exit from the station which you should take. <Folk show> Although we were looking forward to the show, it turned out to be so-so. I had a good impression of the atmostphere at the beginning. I do not think I would go to the show again.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

23 Jun 2014 at 21:02

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<Dancers were great>
I am glad that I watched SA.CHOOM on my third visit to Korea, after having watched Nanta and Jump.
The moment at the end where everyone in the venue danced together was very enjoyable as the dance was simple but created a sense of unity.
However, we had a difficult time finding the venue; we finally reached after asking the way from passers-by repeatedly. Hence, we recommend that you check in advance. It is crucial that you check the exit from the station which you should take.

<Folk show>
Although we were looking forward to the show, it turned out to be so-so. I had a good impression of the atmostphere at the beginning. I do not think I would be participating again.

corrected
<Dancers were great>
I am glad that I watched SA.CHOOM on my third visit to Korea, after having watched Nanta and Jump.
The moment at the end where everyone in the venue danced together was very enjoyable as the dance was simple but created a sense of unity.
However, we had a difficult time finding the venue; we finally reached after asking the way from passers-by repeatedly. Hence, we recommend that you check in advance. It is crucial that you check the exit from the station which you should take.

<Folk show>
Although we were looking forward to the show, it turned out to be so-so. I had a good impression of the atmostphere at the beginning. I do not think I would go to the show again.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 22 Jun 2014 at 00:11
Comment 一緒に観劇をした娘さんは中三だとあるので、3歳の子供でも高校生でもありませんよね。日本の教育制度も確認されておかれたほうがよろしいかと思います。その他は全般文章として成立していると思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 22 Jun 2014 at 22:51
Comment 個人的には☆５つです。依頼主の御意向としてはより表現力あふれる英訳を御希望されているとおもうのですが、外国人の方のフィードバックという意味では少々のぎこちなさが残るぐらいの方がよりリアルに伝わるのではないでしょうか。

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 19 Jun 2014 at 13:17
Comment 関根優那ですね。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 19 Jun 2014 at 19:23
original Thank you for your message. Of course I will pay for the product once I receive it. However, I have not received anything yet for now, and I request a refund.	corrected Thank you for your message. Of course I will pay for the product once I receive it. However, I have not received anything yet for now, so I request a refund.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 19 Jun 2014 at 09:03
Comment 3, 4行目を修正すると文全体がよくなると思いました。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 19 Jun 2014 at 00:52
Comment 最初のThis is unacceptableの和訳は妥協してはいけない部分だと思います。「ちょっと頂けない」どころではなくて「ありえない」の方がよろしいのではないでしょうか。全体的には読みやすい内容になっていました。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 19 Jun 2014 at 15:01
original I made a purchase on your website on March 25, 2014, but my purchase status shows "void" while my credit card has been transacted. What does this mean? Therefore, I would like you to make a refund of 135, 65 $ or send me the product again. Please contact me as soon as possible.	corrected I made a purchase on your website on March 25, 2014, but my purchase status shows "void" while my credit card has been transacted. What does this mean? Therefore, I would like you to issue me a refund of $135.65 or send me the product again. Please contact me as soon as possible.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 18 Jun 2014 at 22:48
original * "LIONS CHANNEL" is a weekly program to support the team. Live: 10:00–10:30pm on every Monday Repeat: 1:00-1:30pm on every Tuesday http://www.teletama.jp/sports/	corrected * "LIONS CHANNEL" is a weekly supporting program for Seibu Lions. Live: Mondays 10:00–10:30pm Repeat: Tuesdays 1:00-1:30pm http://www.teletama.jp/sports/

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 18 Jun 2014 at 18:18
Comment 和文のニュアンスが若干読みきれていない印象を受けました。

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 18 Jun 2014 at 14:57
original It was found tht laravel framework has been used, and I checked it and solved it by myself. Other than that, please correct the bug. Unless the bug is corrected,I cannot open the website.	corrected As it was found that laravel framework has been used, I checked it and solved it by myself. Other than that, please fix the bug I have requested the other day. Unless the bug is fixed, I cannot open the website.

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 18 Jun 2014 at 16:11
original <purchase, a settlement period＞ Please settle an account at any time. Specifically, please confirm at the sale site of the mu-mo shop. [instructions] "2 shot photography event" The photography has the possibility of the shift sequentially. In the case of "2 shot cheki" we will use the cheki which we prepared. We do not permit chekis which you brought. Thank you for your understanding innadvance. *In the case of "2 shot Sha-mail ," it should be the photography by your cell-phone. Your smartphone is also available.	corrected <purchase/ settlement period＞ Please settle your payment at any time. For more details, please confirm at the sale site of the mu-mo shop. [Caution] "2-shot photography event" The photo shooting session may take turns. In the case of "2-shot cheki", the cheki to be used will be prepared at our end. The use of chekis you'd bring will not be allowed during the session. Thank you for your understanding in advance. *During the "2-shot picture message" session, cellphones including smartphones are allowed for taking photos.

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English

18 Jun 2014 at 16:11

original
<purchase, a settlement period＞
Please settle an account at any time.

Specifically, please confirm at the sale site of the mu-mo shop.

[instructions]
"2 shot photography event"
*The photography has the possibility of the shift sequentially.
*In the case of "2 shot cheki" we will use the cheki which we prepared. We do not permit chekis which you brought. Thank you for your understanding innadvance.

*In the case of "2 shot Sha-mail ," it should be the photography by your cell-phone. Your smartphone is also available.

corrected
<purchase/ settlement period＞
Please settle your payment at any time.

For more details, please confirm at the sale site of the mu-mo shop.

[Caution]
"2-shot photography event"
*The photo shooting session may take turns.
*In the case of "2-shot cheki", the cheki to be used will be prepared at our end. The use of chekis you'd bring will not be allowed during the session. Thank you for your understanding in advance.

*During the "2-shot picture message" session, cellphones including smartphones are allowed for taking photos.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 18 Jun 2014 at 09:21
original 1 すべての部品を床におきます。 (PlaseはPlaceの打ち間違いと仮定します) 2 ベース (台) にクロスバーを接続してください。 3 ボルトを固く締めてください。 4 ハンモックのフレームの棒をベースに接続してください。 5 ボルトを固く締めてください。 6 フックとワッシャーを、ハンモックサイズに合うような適切な穴に取り付けてください。 7 蝶ネジを締めて、フックを固定してください。 8 写真のようにハンモックをかけます。最初、ハンモックは重量がかかったときにわずかに垂れる程度が適切です。ハンモックが伸びるにしたがって、適切に調整してください。 9 注意: 子供だけでハンモックを使わせないでください。ブランコのようにつかわないでください。ハンモックは常に台の脚の間にあるようにしてください。台の脚を超え他ところに座らないでください。常時フックと蝶ネジが固く締まっていることを確認してください。	corrected 1 すべての部品を床におきます。 (PlaseはPlaceの打ち間違いと仮定します) 2 ベース (台) にクロスバーを接続してください。 3 ボルトを固く締めてください。 4 ハンモックのフレームの棒をベースに接続してください。 5 ボルトを固く締めてください。 6 フックとワッシャーを、ハンモックサイズに合うような適切な穴に取り付けてください。 7 蝶ネジを締めて、フックを固定してください。 8 写真のようにハンモックをかけます。最初、ハンモックは荷重がかかったときにわずかに垂れる程度が適切です。ハンモックが伸びるにしたがって、適切に調整してください。 9 注意: 子供だけでハンモックを使わせないでください。ブランコのようにつかわないでください。ハンモックは常に台の脚の間にあるようにしてください。台の脚を超えたところに座らないでください。常時フックと蝶ネジが固く締まっていることを確認してください。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese

18 Jun 2014 at 09:21

original
1 すべての部品を床におきます。 (PlaseはPlaceの打ち間違いと仮定します)
2 ベース (台) にクロスバーを接続してください。
3 ボルトを固く締めてください。
4 ハンモックのフレームの棒をベースに接続してください。
5 ボルトを固く締めてください。
6 フックとワッシャーを、ハンモックサイズに合うような適切な穴に取り付けてください。
7 蝶ネジを締めて、フックを固定してください。
8 写真のようにハンモックをかけます。最初、ハンモックは重量がかかったときにわずかに垂れる程度が適切です。ハンモックが伸びるにしたがって、適切に調整してください。
9 注意: 子供だけでハンモックを使わせないでください。ブランコのようにつかわないでください。ハンモックは常に台の脚の間にあるようにしてください。台の脚を超え他ところに座らないでください。常時フックと蝶ネジが固く締まっていることを確認してください。

corrected
1 すべての部品を床におきます。 (PlaseはPlaceの打ち間違いと仮定します)
2 ベース (台) にクロスバーを接続してください。
3 ボルトを固く締めてください。
4 ハンモックのフレームの棒をベースに接続してください。
5 ボルトを固く締めてください。
6 フックとワッシャーを、ハンモックサイズに合うような適切な穴に取り付けてください。
7 蝶ネジを締めて、フックを固定してください。
8 写真のようにハンモックをかけます。最初、ハンモックは荷重がかかったときにわずかに垂れる程度が適切です。ハンモックが伸びるにしたがって、適切に調整してください。
9 注意: 子供だけでハンモックを使わせないでください。ブランコのようにつかわないでください。ハンモックは常に台の脚の間にあるようにしてください。台の脚を超えたところに座らないでください。常時フックと蝶ネジが固く締まっていることを確認してください。

rated this translation result as ★★ English → Japanese 17 Jun 2014 at 22:58
Comment おそらくこの商品を購入しようという人は、どこにでも売られている時計ではなく、ミッキー、ディズニー、ファンタジア55周年といったその商品だけが持つ特別なブランドに価値を求めると思うので、もう少し正確な情報をまとめられるとよりよい文章になるのではないかと思いました。

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 17 Jun 2014 at 19:09
original Thank you for your reply. I have double checked it. When I set the volume to the maximum and set my ear close to the speaker, I somehow hear little sound. However, nothing more than that comes out. There's no error on the settings. I am getting sure it is defective. I have a big trouble on this. I will ask repairman to confirm the issue.	corrected Thank you for your reply. I have double checked it. When I turn the volume to the maximum and put my ear closer to the speaker, I could barely hear the sound. However, I could confirm nothing louder than that. There's no error on the settings. I'd assume it is broken after all. I am very confused. I will ask the repairman to confirm the issue.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 17 Jun 2014 at 19:19
Comment 「国際的に高い評価」、「図板面の状態」の対訳が抜けておられましたが、一つ一つの表現などを丁寧にお調べになって良く書かれた文章だと思いました。

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 20 Jun 2014 at 09:22
Comment 和文の内容からも常識的に考えてもLA SIESTAが人名でないことは察しがつくと思います。基本的な配送関連の用語を確認されることをオススメします。

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 17 Jun 2014 at 22:08
Comment 宣伝告知の翻訳は表現を読み込むのがなかなか難しいですよね。お互い頑張りましょう。

rated this translation result as ★★ English → Japanese 17 Jun 2014 at 19:15
Comment 頑張って書いておられるなという気持ちが伝わってきます。文章を区切るなどして内容をまとめてから英訳をされるとより明確な表現になると思いました。

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 17 Jun 2014 at 22:52
original Thank you for message. I'm sorry from bottom of the heart. You said that wrong items arrived.　I would like to confirm them.　So, Could you show me picture? I'm sorry for inconvenience.	corrected Thank you for message. I'm sorry from the bottom of the heart. You said that wrong items have arrived.　I would like to confirm them.　So, could you show me the picture? I'm sorry for your inconvenience.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 16 Jun 2014 at 18:16
original Thank you for your feedback about the meeting schedule with ABC. We'd like to hold the meeting from 3:30 PM to 4:00 PM. In addition, we are not concluding NDA until we start detailed study as a company direction. Therefore, we like to discuss what we can disclose at this moment this time.	corrected Thank you for your feedback about the meeting schedule with ABC. We'd like to hold the meeting from 3:30 PM to 4:00 PM. In addition, we are not concluding NDA until we start detailed investigation as a company direction. Therefore, we'd like to discuss with what we could disclose at this moment.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 16 Jun 2014 at 09:51
original I am sorry but I have mistakenly put this item up for auction as new item even though the item is actually USED one. Therefore, please allow us to cancel this deal. Again I apology for any inconvenience caused very much. I am sorry but I have mistakenly put this item up for auction even though the item is out of stock. This is totally our fault, therefore I would like to cancel the deal with our offer you a full refund plus $3 of compensation fee. Again I apology for any inconvenience caused very much. I am sorry but the item’s price has been mispriced accidentally. Therefore, please allow us to cancel this deal. Again I apology for any inconvenience caused very much.	corrected I am sorry but I have mistakenly put this item up for auction as new item even though the item is actually USED one. Therefore, please allow us to cancel this deal. Again I apologize for any inconvenience caused very much. I am sorry but I have mistakenly put this item up for auction even though the item is out of stock. This is totally our fault, therefore I would like to cancel the deal with our offer you a full refund plus $3 of compensation fee. Again I apologize for any inconvenience caused very much. I am sorry but the item’s price has been mispriced accidentally. Therefore, please allow us to cancel this deal. Again I apologize for any inconvenience caused very much.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

16 Jun 2014 at 09:51

original
I am sorry but I have mistakenly put this item up for auction as new item even though the item is actually USED one. Therefore, please allow us to cancel this deal. Again I apology for any inconvenience caused very much.

I am sorry but I have mistakenly put this item up for auction even though the item is out of stock. This is totally our fault, therefore I would like to cancel the deal with our offer you a full refund plus $3 of compensation fee. Again I apology for any inconvenience caused very much.

I am sorry but the item’s price has been mispriced accidentally. Therefore, please allow us to cancel this deal. Again I apology for any inconvenience caused very much.

corrected
I am sorry but I have mistakenly put this item up for auction as new item even though the item is actually USED one. Therefore, please allow us to cancel this deal. Again I apologize for any inconvenience caused very much.

I am sorry but I have mistakenly put this item up for auction even though the item is out of stock. This is totally our fault, therefore I would like to cancel the deal with our offer you a full refund plus $3 of compensation fee. Again I apologize for any inconvenience caused very much.

I am sorry but the item’s price has been mispriced accidentally. Therefore, please allow us to cancel this deal. Again I apologize for any inconvenience caused very much.

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