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rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 09 Jul 2014 at 09:42
Comment 原文の意味をとらえられている文だと思いますが、細かい言い回しをもう少し英語らしい言い方にするよう気を付けると良いと思います。「place a deal」⇒「place an order」･「shipping destination」⇒「shipping address」

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 09 Jul 2014 at 10:27
original On 27th September (Saturday) , "AOMORI SHOCK ON 2014" will be held "AOMORI SHOCK ON 2014" is a new type festival you can enjoy Japanese "Sound" and AOMORI (Northern part of Japan ) "DIET". Miura Yamato and Blue TOKYO will be on stage 27th September. Please check out the detail in the official HP.	corrected Appear in "AOMORI SHOCK ON 2014", 27th September (Saturday) ! ↵ "AOMORI SHOCK ON 2014" is a new type festival you can enjoy Japanese "Sound" and AOMORI (Northern part of Japan ) "FOOD". DAICHI MIURA and Blue TOKYO will be on stage 27th September. Please check out details, such as advance ticket information, in the official HP.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 09 Jul 2014 at 10:40
original Daichi Miura's Special Live Concert in Izumo Taisha Shrine on Saturday, October 11th! After the Heisei era restoration, Daichi Miura will hold the first live concert at the shrine with a renovated look! The special live concert will take place at an open-air stage build at the Higashi-shin'en surrounded with the forest with divine atmosphere. It will be a special occasion you can witness only on the day! Date: Tuesday, October 11th, 2014. Doors open at 4:30 pm/Show starts at 5:00 pm Place: Izumo-taisha shrine (an open-air stage build at the Higashi-shin'en) *the show will be canceled if it should rain.	corrected Daichi Miura's Special Live Concert in Izumo Taisha Shrine on Saturday, October 11th! After "the Heisei era restoration" in last May, Daichi Miura will hold the first live concert at the shrine with a renovated look! The special live concert will take place at an open-air stage build at the Higashi-shin'en surrounded by the forest with divine atmosphere. It will be a special occasion you can witness only on the day! Date: Tuesday, October 11th, 2014. Doors open at 4:30 pm/Show starts at 5:00 pm Place: Izumo-taisha shrine (an open-air stage build at the Higashi-shin'en) *the show will be canceled if it should rain.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English

09 Jul 2014 at 10:40

original
Daichi Miura's Special Live Concert in Izumo Taisha Shrine on Saturday, October 11th!

After the Heisei era restoration, Daichi Miura will hold the first live concert at the shrine with a renovated look!
The special live concert will take place at an open-air stage build at the Higashi-shin'en surrounded with the forest with divine atmosphere. It will be a special occasion you can witness only on the day!

Date: Tuesday, October 11th, 2014. Doors open at 4:30 pm/Show starts at 5:00 pm
Place: Izumo-taisha shrine (an open-air stage build at the Higashi-shin'en) *the show will be canceled if it should rain.

corrected
Daichi Miura's Special Live Concert in Izumo Taisha Shrine on Saturday, October 11th!

After "the Heisei era restoration" in last May, Daichi Miura will hold the first live concert at the shrine with a renovated look!
The special live concert will take place at an open-air stage build at the Higashi-shin'en surrounded by the forest with divine atmosphere. It will be a special occasion you can witness only on the day!

Date: Tuesday, October 11th, 2014. Doors open at 4:30 pm/Show starts at 5:00 pm
Place: Izumo-taisha shrine (an open-air stage build at the Higashi-shin'en) *the show will be canceled if it should rain.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 24 Feb 2014 at 13:40
original It makes blood donation seem easily accessible. A festival during the Christmas season iis the "Okayama Momotaro Matsuri (MOMOTAROH FANTASY)", the most well-known illumination event in Okayama during the winter season. At night, the town will be filled with beautiful illumination lights. Christmas trees in Okayama are decorated with "peaches." Illumination lights are positioned and composed to shape "Momotarou, the boy born from the peach." The most famous souvenir that fills souvenir shops is of course the Kibi-dango. According to a website specializing in Kibi-dango, there are more than 70 different types of Kibi-dango.	corrected It makes blood donation familiar. A festival during the Christmas season iis the "Okayama Momotaro Matsuri (MOMOTAROH FANTASY)", the most well-known illumination event in Okayama during the winter season. At night, the town will be filled with beautiful illumination lights. Christmas trees in Okayama are decorated with "peaches." Illumination lights are positioned and composed to shape "Momotarou, the boy born from the peach." The most famous souvenir that fills souvenir shops is of course the Kibi-dango. According to the website specializing in Kibi-dango, there are more than 70 types of Kibi-dango.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

24 Feb 2014 at 13:40

original
It makes blood donation seem easily accessible.

A festival during the Christmas season iis the "Okayama Momotaro Matsuri (MOMOTAROH FANTASY)", the most well-known illumination event in Okayama during the winter season.

At night, the town will be filled with beautiful illumination lights.
Christmas trees in Okayama are decorated with "peaches."

Illumination lights are positioned and composed to shape "Momotarou, the boy born from the peach."

The most famous souvenir that fills souvenir shops is of course the Kibi-dango.
According to a website specializing in Kibi-dango, there are more than 70 different types of Kibi-dango.

corrected
It makes blood donation familiar.

A festival during the Christmas season iis the "Okayama Momotaro Matsuri (MOMOTAROH FANTASY)", the most well-known illumination event in Okayama during the winter season.

At night, the town will be filled with beautiful illumination lights.
Christmas trees in Okayama are decorated with "peaches."

Illumination lights are positioned and composed to shape "Momotarou, the boy born from the peach."

The most famous souvenir that fills souvenir shops is of course the Kibi-dango.
According to the website specializing in Kibi-dango, there are more than 70 types of Kibi-dango.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 24 Feb 2014 at 13:43
original The city-run rental bicycle system in Okayama is called "Momo-chari." "Community cycle" is a bicycle sharing system. With this new transportation system, users can rent and return a bicycle at any of the cycle ports around Okayama city. All bicycles are made available for shared use only; bicycles are not assigned to individuals. Fee: 100 yen per ride, 400 yen per day. Commuter passes are available. "Okayama, the city of Momotaro" promotes itself with peach-colored flags on the street. Even a blood donor room is called "Momotaro." This Japanese Red Cross Society Blood Donor Room is located in the central area of Okayama city.	corrected The city-run rental bicycle system in Okayama is called "Momo-chari." "Community cycle" is a bicycle sharing system. With this new transportation system, users can rent and return a bicycle at any of the cycle ports around Okayama city. All bicycles are available only for shared use; bicycles are not assigned to individuals. Fee: 100 yen per a ride, 400 yen per a day. Commuter passes are available. "Okayama, the city of Momotaro" promotes itself with peach-colored flags on the street. Even a blood donor room is called "Momotaro." This Japanese Red Cross Society Blood Donor Room is located in the central area of Okayama city.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English

24 Feb 2014 at 13:43

original
The city-run rental bicycle system in Okayama is called "Momo-chari."

"Community cycle" is a bicycle sharing system.

With this new transportation system, users can rent and return a bicycle at any of the cycle ports around Okayama city. All bicycles are made available for shared use only; bicycles are not assigned to individuals.

Fee: 100 yen per ride, 400 yen per day.
Commuter passes are available.
"Okayama, the city of Momotaro" promotes itself with peach-colored flags on the street.

Even a blood donor room is called "Momotaro."
This Japanese Red Cross Society Blood Donor Room is located in the central area of Okayama city.

corrected
The city-run rental bicycle system in Okayama is called "Momo-chari."

"Community cycle" is a bicycle sharing system.

With this new transportation system, users can rent and return a bicycle at any of the cycle ports around Okayama city. All bicycles are available only for shared use; bicycles are not assigned to individuals.

Fee: 100 yen per a ride, 400 yen per a day.
Commuter passes are available.
"Okayama, the city of Momotaro" promotes itself with peach-colored flags on the street.

Even a blood donor room is called "Momotaro."
This Japanese Red Cross Society Blood Donor Room is located in the central area of Okayama city.

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 13 Jan 2014 at 23:00
original メールありがとう、返事が遅くなって申し訳ない。商品交換ができないのは残念ですが、不良品を添え状と、発送通知書の底についている無料返品ラベルと一緒に倉庫へ返品いただき、不具合の原因コードを選択して、オンラインで再び商品をご注文いただけます。不具合に対する措置として、次回のご注文時には10%の値引きをいたします。チェックアウトの際に、プロモーションコードにOCST10を入力いただければ、10%の値引きを適用いたします。このコードは一度のみで、2014年1月31日までの期限となりますので、ご注意ください。何か他にお手伝いできることがあれば、お気軽にご連絡下さい。よろしくお願い致します。	corrected メールと返信が遅くなったことへの謝罪をありがとう。商品交換ができないのは残念ですが、不良品を添え状と、発送通知書の下の方についている無料返品ラベルと一緒に倉庫へ返品いただき、不具合の原因コードを選択して、オンラインで再び商品をご注文いただけます。不具合に対する措置として、次回のご注文時には10%の値引きをいたします。チェックアウトの際に、プロモーションコードにOCST10を入力いただければ、10%の値引きを適用いたします。このコードは一度のみで、2014年1月31日までの期限となりますので、ご注意ください。何か他にお手伝いできることがあれば、お気軽にご連絡下さい。よろしくお願い致します。

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese

13 Jan 2014 at 23:00

original
メールありがとう、返事が遅くなって申し訳ない。

商品交換ができないのは残念ですが、不良品を添え状と、発送通知書の底についている無料返品ラベルと一緒に倉庫へ返品いただき、不具合の原因コードを選択して、オンラインで再び商品をご注文いただけます。

不具合に対する措置として、次回のご注文時には10%の値引きをいたします。チェックアウトの際に、プロモーションコードにOCST10を入力いただければ、10%の値引きを適用いたします。このコードは一度のみで、2014年1月31日までの期限となりますので、ご注意ください。

何か他にお手伝いできることがあれば、お気軽にご連絡下さい。

よろしくお願い致します。

corrected
メールと返信が遅くなったことへの謝罪をありがとう。

商品交換ができないのは残念ですが、不良品を添え状と、発送通知書の下の方についている無料返品ラベルと一緒に倉庫へ返品いただき、不具合の原因コードを選択して、オンラインで再び商品をご注文いただけます。

不具合に対する措置として、次回のご注文時には10%の値引きをいたします。チェックアウトの際に、プロモーションコードにOCST10を入力いただければ、10%の値引きを適用いたします。このコードは一度のみで、2014年1月31日までの期限となりますので、ご注意ください。

何か他にお手伝いできることがあれば、お気軽にご連絡下さい。

よろしくお願い致します。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 05 Jan 2014 at 14:42
Comment 端的で自然な英文でわかりやすく、勉強になりました。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 05 Jan 2014 at 14:38
original Everyone has their own aspirations. Hoping they all would go forward to the goals. We ask for your continued will in the new year!	corrected Everyone has one's own aspirations. Hoping they all would go forward to the goals. We ask for your continued will in the new year!

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 02 Jan 2014 at 21:43
Comment 主語の工夫(英文と前後逆にしたり、日本語では時にはおかなかったり)をするとそれだけでかなり自然な日本語になると思います。意味的には正確な訳文だと思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 15 Dec 2013 at 10:57
Comment 意訳等も程よく加わっていてとてもわかりやすい訳文だと思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 15 Dec 2013 at 11:05
original I do not support the part refund unfortunately. Fraud due to partial refund in ebay is all the rage now. I have to stop the account of the other party and to encounter the other day fraud. I think return is whether due process if there is a problem with the product. I will refund after the arrival to the product.	corrected I do not support the part refund unfortunately. Fraud due to partial refund in ebay is all the rage now. I had encountered a fraud the other day, and had to stop the account of the other party. I think return is whether due process if there is a problem with the product. I will refund after the arrival of the product.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 27 Nov 2013 at 14:44
original Thank you for the reply. It buys completely. ( 70 ) How much is it? I hope for 280 dollars. Send a bill to the following PayPal address if it is possible to understand. Please send an invoice in PayPal. PayPal　Adress: kanemura.hisanori@hotmail.co.jp It hopes for the long relationship. Then, it thinks that it wants to buy a product from you continuously. We request, being good.	corrected Thank you for the reply. I will buy all of them. ( 70 ) How much are they? I want it for 280 dollars. Send a bill to the following PayPal address if you confirm. Please send an invoice though PayPal. PayPal　Adress: kanemura.hisanori@hotmail.co.jp I hope for the lasting relationship with you. Then, it thinks that it wants to buy a product from you continuously. We request, being good.

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 27 Nov 2013 at 14:57
original Okinawa prefecture and Okinawa tourism convention bureau held (Okinawa MICE contents trading show) in Okinawa convention center at November 22. This show, which is held every year in order to promote MICE attract and PR key person and abroad outside the prefecture the charm of Okinawa as a MICE venue, it will be held for the sixth time this time. IIn addition to 73 people buyers are invited from 7 market of Beijing, Shanghai, Taiwan, Korea, Hong Kong, Thailand, Singapore, and 130 more than a total, including 48 people buyers Society stakeholders and travel companies were invited from Japan this year participated.	corrected Okinawa prefecture and Okinawa tourism convention bureau held (Okinawa MICE contents trading show) at Okinawa convention center at November 22. This show, which is held every year in order to promote MICE attract and PR key person and abroad outside the prefecture the charm of Okinawa as a MICE venue, it will be held for the sixth time this time. Besides 73 buyers who are invited from 7 market of Beijing, Shanghai, Taiwan, Korea, Hong Kong, Thailand, and Singapore, more than 130 people participated in it, including 48 people concerned with congress and buyers of travel agencies who are invited as domestic participants.↵

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English

27 Nov 2013 at 14:57

original
Okinawa prefecture and Okinawa tourism convention bureau held (Okinawa MICE contents trading show) in Okinawa convention center at November 22.

This show, which is held every year in order to promote MICE attract and PR key person and abroad outside the prefecture the charm of Okinawa as a MICE venue, it will be held for the sixth time this time.

IIn addition to 73 people buyers are invited from 7 market of Beijing, Shanghai, Taiwan, Korea, Hong Kong, Thailand, Singapore, and 130 more than a total, including 48 people buyers Society stakeholders and travel companies were invited from Japan this year participated.

corrected
Okinawa prefecture and Okinawa tourism convention bureau held (Okinawa MICE contents trading show) at Okinawa convention center at November 22.

This show, which is held every year in order to promote MICE attract and PR key person and abroad outside the prefecture the charm of Okinawa as a MICE venue, it will be held for the sixth time this time.

Besides 73 buyers who are invited from 7 market of Beijing, Shanghai, Taiwan, Korea, Hong Kong, Thailand, and Singapore, more than 130 people participated in it, including 48 people concerned with congress and buyers of travel agencies who are invited as domestic participants.↵

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 27 Nov 2013 at 15:07
original Hi, Thanks for your reply and letting me know that some items were missing. I am terribly sorry that it even took a long time until I get back to you despite your honesty. Please accept my sincere applogies, that was all my fault.	corrected Hi, Thanks for your reply and letting me know via e-mail that some items were missing. In spite of your sincere response to me, I forgot what you had wrote in the message. Please accept my sincere applogies, that was all my fault.

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