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rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 22 Feb 2015 at 00:14
original Can I pick a date? (For example, search only contributions that are posted until 1 week before.	corrected Can I pick a date? (For example, search only contributions posted until 1 week before.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 19 Feb 2015 at 07:12
original This diaper is expensive for the initial cost but it might be able to save cost in long-term in cooperation with a hospital. The baby's health data is going to send to the family doctor When the baby has some health problem. The family doctor is able to know how the baby is before arriving at the hospital. It is cost-effective so it might become more cheap medical cost. Also you can ask expert the baby's problem on web so you don't have to go to hospital.	corrected The initial cost of this diaper is expensive, but it may lead to a reduction in long-term medical costs in cooperation with a hospital. The baby's health data are sent to the family doctor when the baby has some health problem. The family doctor is able to know how the baby is before arriving at the hospital. It is cost-effective so it might become more cheap medical cost. Also you can ask an expert the baby's problem on the website so you don't have to go to hospital.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

19 Feb 2015 at 07:12

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This diaper is expensive for the initial cost but it might be able to save cost in long-term in cooperation with a hospital. The baby's health data is going to send to the family doctor When the baby has some health problem. The family doctor is able to know how the baby is before arriving at the hospital. It is cost-effective so it might become more cheap medical cost. Also you can ask expert the baby's problem on web so you don't have to go to hospital.

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The initial cost of this diaper is expensive, but it may lead to a reduction in long-term medical costs in cooperation with a hospital. The baby's health data are sent to the family doctor when the baby has some health problem. The family doctor is able to know how the baby is before arriving at the hospital. It is cost-effective so it might become more cheap medical cost. Also you can ask an expert the baby's problem on the website so you don't have to go to hospital.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 18 Feb 2015 at 15:24
Comment 最後の訳が抜けているのでは？

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 10 Oct 2014 at 17:19
Comment 素晴らしいと思います。

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