[Translation from Japanese to English ] Please translate below. Nice to meet you. I would like to let you know tha...

Original text

翻訳お願いします。

初めまして。私と～は2016年12月27日、日本時間21時16分に同じ場所愛知県で
～になることを達成しました。
もしよろしければあなたの～達成者リストに私たち二人をリストに加えて頂きたいです。
よろしくお願いします。

Translation / English

Please translate below.

Nice to meet you. I would like to let you know that ～ and I achieved to be ～ in the same place, Aichi prefecture, at 21:16 JST on December 27, 2016.
I would like you to add us two to your ～ achievers' list if you don't mind.
Thank you in advance.

Translation / English

Please translate.

This is my first time to write. X and I have achived to become XX here, same plece in Aichi prefecture at 21:16 Japan time on Dec. 27th in 2016.
If it is acceptable for you, I would like you to add us to your achiever list.
Best Regards,

elephantrans- almost 8 years ago
"plece"を”place"に訂正致します。

Translation / English

Hello.

I and ~ accomplished becoming ~ on December 27th at 9:16pm Japan time, at the same place, Aichi, Japan.

If possible, please add us to the ~ Achievers List.

Thank you!!