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元の翻訳
We are very sorry for the late reply.
RMA is 12.
As we mentioned before, the refund rate for unsealed item will be 50% of its price according to rule.
However, after some internal considerations about your mistaken order, we intend that refunding you 80%.
Once the item is return, we have to send it back to Japan, inspect it, and need to sell as a second hand so that it costs us.
It would be appreciated if you could understand that this offer is the best we can do and agree with it.

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We are very sorry for the late reply.
RMA is 12.
As we mentioned before, the refund rate for unsealed item will be 50% of its price according to our rule.
However, after some internal considerations about your mistaken order, we intend to refund you 80%.
Once the item is returned, we have to send it back to Japan, inspect it, and need to sell as a second hand so that it costs us.
It would be appreciated if you could understand that this offer is the best we can do and if you could agree with it.

元の翻訳
I'm sorry that we kept you waiting.
RMA is 12.
Regarding a refund, we will make 50% refund for opened products as we said before. However, considering that you selected a wrong item, we feel sorry to refund only half the price of the product. So we plan to make 80 refund for you.
We will need to send the returned item back to Japan and then conduct inspection. After that we will sell the item as an used item. It costs to do all these things.
Please understand that this is the best proposal we can offer. We would appreciate it if you could accept this.

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I'm sorry that we kept you waiting.
RMA is 12.
Regarding a refund, we will make 50% refund for opened products as we said before. However, considering that you selected a wrong item, we feel sorry to refund only half the price of the product. So we plan to make 80% refund for you.
We will need to send the returned item back to Japan and then conduct inspection. After that we will sell the item as an used item. It costs to do all these things.
Please understand that this is the best proposal we can offer. We would appreciate it if you could accept this.

元の翻訳
Thank you for the additional offer. I would like to buy "A" in addition. Just to be sure, does this painting, as well as the other three, come with COA? Please let me know the total cost for the 4 paintings. Please give me the best price that you can, with the consideration that there may be continuous purchases. Thank you.

Thank you for your reply. As the payment has been completed, kindly confirm the receipt of payment and ship the items. I am looking forward to receiving the items. I look forward to working with you again in future.

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Thank you for the additional offer. I would like to buy "A" in addition. Just to be sure, does this painting, as well as the other three, come with COA? Please let me know the total cost for the 4 paintings. Please give me the best price that you can offer, with the consideration that there may be my continuous purchases. Thank you.

Thank you for your reply. As the payment has been completed, kindly confirm the receipt of the payment and ship the items. I am looking forward to receiving the them. I look forward to working with you again in the future.

元の翻訳
Thank you for the additional offer. I would like to add A on my order. Just to make sure, Do this picture and other three pictures come with COA? Please let me know the total cost of these four pictures. I'm planning to continuously purchase your pictures so I would like you to give me as low price as possible.

Thank you for returning message. I completed payment so please confirm and ship the products. I'm looking forward to receiving the products. Thank you very much.

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Thank you for the additional offer. I would like to add A on my order. Just to make sure, do this picture and other three pictures come with COA? Please let me know the total cost of these four pictures. I'm planning to continuously purchase your pictures so I would like you to give me as low price as possible.

Thank you for your reply. I completed the payment so please confirm and dispatch the products. I'm looking forward to receiving them. Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
I visited the Japanese post office today and spoke to the post master regarding the huge delay in delivering your package.

As the applications to investigate the issue have already been submitted, they are currently awaiting for the investigation results from the US postal service.

It appears that a reply is normally received 2-3 weeks after the submission of the investigation request.

I am very sorry for the inconvenience caused and seek your patience to wait till the end of this month.

In the case that the package is lost, I assure you that you will receive a full refund.

Additionally, in apology for the situation, I would like to offer you a waiver on shipping fees on your next purchase.

Thank you for your kind understanding.

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I visited the Japanese post office today and spoke to the post master regarding the huge delay in delivering your package.

As the applications to investigate, the issue has already been submitted, and they are currently awaiting for the investigation results from the US postal service.

It appears that a reply is normally received 2-3 weeks after the submission of the investigation request.

I am very sorry for the inconvenience caused and seek your patience to wait till the end of this month.

In the case that the package is lost, I assure you that you will receive a full refund.

Additionally, in apology for the situation, I would like to offer you a waiver on shipping fees on your next purchase.

Thank you for your kind understanding.

元の翻訳
Today, I went to postal office in Japan.
I talked about long delay of your cargo with postal chief.
I have always handed in document of traking survey.
I wait for the result of it from postal office in USA.
Usually, they answer the inquiry in two or three weeks after handing in documents.
I am very sorry about that.
Please wait for it in end of this month.
I promise you that I reimbuse you all if your cargo lost.
And also, you will get free postage from next dealings for my apology.
Please accept this matter.

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Today, I went to a postal office in Japan.
I talked about the long delay of your package with a postal chief.
I have always handed in a document of tracking investigation.
I wait for the result of it from a postal office in USA.
Usually, they answer to the inquiry takes two to three weeks after handing in the documents.
I am very sorry about that.
Please wait for it by the end of this month.
I promise you that I refund you all if your package is lost.
And also, you will get free postage for your next dealing as my apology.
Please accept this matter.

元の翻訳
Today, I went to Japan Post Office and discussed with a postmaster the significant delay your package had been experiencing.

Tracking investigation request form has already been submitted and we are waiting for the result of the investigation from the post office in the united states.

They said that the result usually comes back after two to three weeks.

I'm sorry for the inconvenience but please kindly wait until the end of this month.

In the case the package got lost, we promise to make a full refund for your purchase.

Also, I will give you a free shipping fee for your next order as my apologies.

Thank you for your understanding.

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Today, I went to Japan Post Office and discussed with a deputy officer the significant delay your package had been experiencing.

Tracking investigation request form has already been submitted and we are waiting for the result of the investigation from the post office in the United States.

They said that the result usually comes back after two to three weeks.

I'm sorry for the inconvenience but please kindly wait until the end of this month.

In the case the package got lost, we promise to make a full refund for your purchase.

Also, I will give you a free shipping fee for your next order as my apologies.

Thank you for your understanding.

元の翻訳
Today I went to Japanese post office and I discussed with the chief that a packed I sent to you had been greatly delayed.

I already submitted the document of tracing research and I'm on the stage that I'm waiting for the research result from US post office.

Generally the answer is coming 2-3 weeks later after the document is submitted.

I'm very sorry for your inconvenience but I would like you to wait for it until the end of this month.

I promise I will refund you the full amount if the package is lost.

And when you purchase next time, I will do postage for free as my apology.

Thank you for your understanding.

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Today I went to Japanese post office and I discussed with the chief that a package I sent to you had been significantly delayed.

I already submitted the document of tracing research and I'm waiting for the research result from US post office.

Generally it takes 2 to 3 weeks to receive the answer after the document is submitted.

I'm very sorry for your inconvenience but I would like you to wait for it by the end of this month.

I promise I will refund you the full amount if the package is lost.

And when you purchase next time, I will do postage for free as my apology.

Thank you for your understanding.

元の翻訳
Dear ◯◯◯◯
Thank you for your help always.

I filled in to reissue paper of PIN number and sent you it long before.
Would you receive the letter？

When would you send me new PIN number by post ?
Please cope with it immediately.

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Dear ◯◯◯◯
Thank you for your help always.

I filled in a reissue document of PIN number and sent you it long time ago.
Did you receive the letter？

When would you send me the new PIN number by post ?
Please cope with it immediately.

元の翻訳
I was wondering if I could order the following product.
But before ordering I'd like to ask you some questions.

what I want to order:
64GB
-black:50
-brown:50

How much would one product be?
-How could I pay the price after a discount?
-How much does the special-delivery fee cost?
-When could you send me after ordering?

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I would like to order following products.
But before ordering, I'd like to ask you some questions.

Ordering quantities:
64GB
-black: 50
-brown: 50

How much would one product be?
-How could I pay the price after a discount?
-How much does the express-delivery fee cost?
-When could you send me after ordering?

元の翻訳
ご安心ください。全てはすぐに解決します。彼が貴アカウントを見つけたので、貴方へ今後の承認プロセスを連絡、同アカウントの制限を完全に解除します。アランからのお電話をお待ちください。まもなくです。

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ご安心ください。全てはすぐに解決します。彼が貴アカウントの状態に気づき、貴方へ今後の承認プロセスを連絡、同アカウントの制限を完全に解除します。アランからのお電話をお待ちください。まもなくです。

元の翻訳
1, Thank you for your business.
When do the items that we listed will be reflected on Amazon?
If our method to list the items has any problem, please let us know.
Sorry for taking you time, but we hope you will deal with the problem.

2. We are sending the item by express mail free of charge.
Could you please give us a positive feedback, if the item arrives?
Thank you for your shopping.

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1, Thank you for your business.
When will the items that we listed be reflected on Amazon?
If our method to list the items has any problems, please let us know.
Sorry for taking your time, but we hope you will deal with the problem.

2. We are sending the item by express mail free of charge.
Could you please give us a positive feedback, if the item arrives early?
Thank you for your shopping.

元の翻訳
1. Thank you for the continuous business.
When do our registered product appear at Amazon?
Are there any problems with our products registration? If so, please let us know.
Thank you very much.
2. We send the products, which are purchased in this limited time, by Express post.
We appreciate if you give us a good feedback when you receive your products early.
Thank you for shopping with us!

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1. Thank you for the continuous business.
When do our registered products appear at Amazon?
Are there any problems with our products registration? If so, please let us know.
Thank you very much.
2. We send the products, which are purchased in this limited time, by Express post for free.
We appreciate if you give us a good feedback when you receive your products early.
Thank you for shopping with us!

元の翻訳
Yes, I would like to get the new mobile product.
Could you please send me the coupon code as soon as possible?

I see that the sweets have reached you.
They're famous sweets from Kyoto that are even eaten by the Japanese royals.
Please enjoy them with everyone else.

I look forward to working with you again going forward.
Thank you!

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Yes, I would like to get the new model product.
Could you please send me the coupon code as soon as possible?

I see that the sweets have reached you.
They're famous sweets from Kyoto that are even eaten by the Japanese royals.
Please enjoy them with everyone else.

I look forward to working with you again.
Thank you!

元の翻訳
How about the progress ?

According to the investigation by our company, many shops do not comply with the price setting yet.
The shops that have not complied with the price change yet are listed as below. I would appreciate you prompt attention to this matter.
Please contact us if there are anything we can support.

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How about the progress ?

According to the investigation by our company, many shops do not comply with the price setting yet.
The shops that have not complied with the price change yet are listed as below. I would appreciate your prompt attention to this matter.
Please contact us if there are anything we can support.

元の翻訳
I'm sorry that I made you misunderstand.
Please ship the package for cash on delivery as planned.
Thank you.

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I'm sorry that I made you misunderstood.
Please ship the package for cash on delivery as planned.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
A
32 pages in a week? If it was my dad’s assistant he could probably do it but… can you really do it? Or rather for me it feels like I’d have a lot of trouble with things piling up.

B
“Oh, Recently in my work place we “installed a Joba” (a type of fitness machine).
“Let’s try it in first!”

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A
32 pages in a week? If it was my dad’s assistant he could have probably done it but… can you really do it? Or rather for me it feels like I’d have a lot of troubles with things piling up.

B
“Oh, Recently in my work place we “installed a Joba” (a type of fitness machine).
“Let’s try it in first!”

元の翻訳
A
32 pages in one week? My father's assistant should have the time....I wonder if they could do it? On the other hand, I feel it may add to their work.

B
"Hey, recently JOBA has been introduced to the workplace"
"Make an announcement!"

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A
32 pages in one week? My father's assistant should have that in time....I wonder if they could do it? On the other hand, I feel it may add to their work.

B
"Hey, recently JOBA has been introduced to the workplace"
"Make an announcement!"

元の翻訳
It is possible to ship on the 18th of February but we cannot specify an arrival day.
It’s important that if you place an order again you can swiftly secure the items.
With tracking the usual time it will take until it arrives will be from about 2 weeks to a month.
If all that is okay, we will put it up for display on eBay afterwards.
Thank you very much.

It is possible to deliver 3 items.
If that is okay, we will put the 3 items up for display on eBay afterwards.
Please reply soon.
We’re patiently awaiting your reply.

Understood.
From now on we will put it up for display on eBay.
After confirming it’s correct, please place your order.

In the worst case, if we run out of stock we will contact you another time.

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It is possible to ship on the 18th of February but we cannot specify an arrival day.
It’s important that if you place an order again you can swiftly secure the items.
With tracking it usually takes about 2 weeks to a month before arrival.
If all that is okay, we will list it on eBay afterwards.
Thank you very much.

It is possible to deliver 3 items.
If that is okay, we will put the 3 items up on eBay afterwards.
Please reply soon.
We’re patiently awaiting your reply.

Understood.
From now on we will put it up on eBay.
After confirming it’s correct, please place your order.

In the case we run out of stock we will contact you again