翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

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日本語

はい私は新しいモデルの商品が欲しい。
すぐに　クーポンコードを送って下さい。

お菓子届いたんですね
日本の王室でも食べられている京都の有名なお菓子です。
みなさんで召しあがって下さい。

これからもあなた方とたくさん取引をしたい。
これからもよろしく。

英語

Yes, I would like to get the new mobile product.
Could you please send me the coupon code as soon as possible?

I see that the sweets have reached you.
They're famous sweets from Kyoto that are even eaten by the Japanese royals.
Please enjoy them with everyone else.

I look forward to working with you again going forward.
Thank you!

レビュー ( 1 )

yxn667はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2015/02/19 12:56:49

元の翻訳
Yes, I would like to get the new mobile product.
Could you please send me the coupon code as soon as possible?

I see that the sweets have reached you.
They're famous sweets from Kyoto that are even eaten by the Japanese royals.
Please enjoy them with everyone else.

I look forward to working with you again going forward.
Thank you!

修正後
Yes, I would like to get the new model product.
Could you please send me the coupon code as soon as possible?

I see that the sweets have reached you.
They're famous sweets from Kyoto that are even eaten by the Japanese royals.
Please enjoy them with everyone else.

I look forward to working with you again.
Thank you!

[aliene]

Thanks for the review!