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Fm yokohama「E-ne! ～good for you～」


March 3（Tue）12:00 - 16:00
Fm yokohama「E-ne! ～good for you～」

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Fm yokohama「E-ne! ～good for you～」


March 3（Tue）12:00 - 16:00
Fm yokohama「E-ne! ～good for you～」

*Comments only appearance.
*Please kindly note that due to certain circumstances, the broadcast contents are subject to change without prior notice, thanks for the understanding.

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I have a question about new features that will be implemented in the next Ver.

How will be the URL when the new page is displayed in different URL? Is it still up in the air?
I am concerned about the URL structure and if the title will be taken correctly.

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AAA is a file sharing software that was caught on in Japan a while ago. It is famous only in Japan.

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I have a question about new features that will be implemented in the next Ver.

How will the URL be when the new page is displayed in different URL? Is it still undecided?
I am concerned about the URL structure and if the title will be taken correctly. ↵
I am sorry for the troublesome question.

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AAA is a file sharing software that was caught on in Japan a while ago. It is famous only in Japan.

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The private cloud foundation structure automatizes infrastructural works and make possible easy access to cloud computer.

The reputation for each products is not so difference.

I got the first prior point in the selection as they did accurate answer for delivery SE and had so strong motivation for leading the proposal positively.

O could only coordinate SE that will correspond the actual delivery works at most.
They were given one more chance to re-try,but they could not response for the ask
because starting date to structure was coming to close.

To do the proposal at forward stance with prospect for rival's approaching and client's request.
To input the information directly to BU relative staff too, and ask a support.

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The private cloud foundation structure automatizes infrastructural works and make possible easy access to cloud computer.

The reputation for each products is not so difference.

I got the first prior point in the selection as they did accurate answer for delivery SE and had so strong motivation for leading the proposal positively.

O could only coordinate SE that will correspond the actual delivery works at most.
They were given one more chance to re-try, but they could not response for the ask
because starting date to structure was coming to close.

To do the proposal at forward stance with prospect for rival's approaching and client's request.
To input the information directly to BU relative staff too, and ask a support.

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on January 14th, 2015, New song "Rafflesia" which is the theme song of　the TV drama "First Class" starring Erika Sawajiri on Fuji TV network was released. This entered the Oricon daily chart at No. 2 and its weekly chart as No. 4 as the first appearance。
On April 18, 2015, the first anniversary live "SOLIDEMO 1st ANNIVERSARY LIVE" will be hold at Ebisu the Garden Hall.

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On January 14th, 2015, New song "Rafflesia" which is the theme song of　the TV drama "First Class" starring Erika Sawajiri on Fuji TV network was released. This entered the Oricon daily chart at No. 2 and its weekly chart at No. 4 as the first appearance。
On April 18, 2015, the first anniversary live "SOLIDEMO 1st ANNIVERSARY LIVE" will be held at Ebisu the Garden Hall.

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Thank you for lowering the price at this time. The payment has been processed, so please confirm the payment. Would you please let me know before you place products, especially the product A? I am willing to purchase all "Cat and Girl" product of the product A. If you additionally place the product A, please let me know. I will consider purchasing them immediately. Also, I will purchase some other products from you. I will let you know once i decide. Please send me the pictures of new products. I am looking forward to arrival of the products.

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Thank you for lowering the price at this time. The payment has been processed, so please confirm the payment. Would you please let me know before you list products, especially the product A? I am willing to purchase all "Cat and Girl" product of the product A. If you additionally place the product A, please let me know. I will consider purchasing them immediately. Also, I will purchase some other products from you. I will let you know once I decide. Please send me the pictures of new products. I am looking forward to the arrival of the products.

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Hello.
Thank you for buying.
I am very sorry, but this product has sold by other people two days ago.
we apologize that out merchandise management was not enough.
I would like suggest the product as as substitute such that you wanted to buy.
This product is the used one, but is still a good condition.
We really apologizes that this trouble was happened.

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Hello.
Thank you for buying.
I am very sorry, but this product was sold out by other people two days ago.
We apologize that our merchandise management was not enough.
I would like to suggest the product as a substitute such that you wanted to buy.
This product is the used one, but is still a good condition.
We really apologizes that this trouble was happened.

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I am sorry for my late reply.

I has been in the hospital for about one month because of my fracture.
Now I resume my work.
Because the goods is not in stock, I will give you the refund.
Very sorry for your long-time waiting.

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I am sorry for my late reply.

I have been in the hospital for about one month because of my fracture.
Now I resumed my work.
Because the goods are not in stock, I will give you the refund.
Very sorry to make your wait for a long time.

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Hello.

Your products have been well received from my customers and have been getting the highest grade.
The customers were all satisfied.

However, recently, some of them are not like before.

They say, like, "it is roughly printed" or "products are different from photos".

I would like to continue to sell your products. Also, I want to spread them through Japan.

I'm afraid to ask you if you could grade up your products.

Thank you.

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Hello.

Your products have been well received from my customers and have been getting the highest feedback.
The customers were all satisfied.

However, recently, some of them are not well like before.

They say, like, "it is roughly printed" or "products are different from photos".

I would like to continue to sell your products. Also, I want to spread them through Japan.

I'm afraid to ask you if you could increase the quality of your products.

Thank you.

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Thank you for your reply.

Card number on the payment is the following.
Card number: 0000
Expiration date: 0000

Regarding snowboard wear size, I have usually worn a size S or SS.
(Height is 165cm, Body Weight is 56kg)
Also regarding contents of the tour, I understand that there is not a dog sledding 3 consecutive days.
Thank you for your concern.

I look forward to your reply.

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Thank you for your reply.

Card number on the payment is the following.
Card number: 0000
Expiration date: 0000

Regarding snow wear size, I usually wear size S or SS.
(Height is 165cm, Body Weight is 56kg)
Also regarding contents of the tour, I understand that there is not a dog sledding 3 consecutive days.
Thank you for your concern.

I look forward to your reply.

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I am not satisfied with the rating.
Today I received the item from Germany.
It says "The storing period has expired and a receiver does not request receiving it" in Japanese
and it also says "Non reclame=The storing period has expired" in French."
The buyer said that there was not enough document for it, but it was wrong.
The cause of this problem is that the buyer did not receive the item during the storing period.
As the post office listed it on the item clearly, I would like you to check it in the picture.

It must be against the policy to rate the seller negatively although the buyer did not receive the item.

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I am not satisfied with the feedback.
Today I received the item from Germany.
It says "The storing period has expired and a receiver does not request receiving it" in Japanese
and it also says "Non reclame=The storing period has expired" in French."
The buyer said that there was not enough document for it, but it was wrong.
The cause of this problem is that the buyer did not receive the item during the storing period.
As the post office listed it on the item clearly, I would like you to check it in the picture.

It must be against the policy to rate the seller negatively although the buyer did not claim to receive the item.

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This is about the the evaluation that I do not understand.
I received the returned product from Germany today.
It says that "No request of the recipient and storage period is over" in Japanese, and "Non reclame” in French meaning that the storage period is over.
The buyer says about the missing documents, but there was no such fact.
This problem is in only that the buyer did not take the a product within a storage period.
Ii is clearly stated on the package by the post office and I want you confirm it.

Is not it a violation of policy to give the seller a negative evaluation although one neglected receiving the product?

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This is about the the feedback that I do not understand.
I received the returned product from Germany today.
It says that "No request of the recipient and storage period is over" in Japanese, and "Non reclame” in French meaning that the storage period is over.
The buyer says about the missing documents, but there was no such a fact.
This problem is in only that the buyer did not take the a product within the storage period.
Ii is clearly stated on the package by the post office and I want you to confirm it.

Is not it a violation of policy to give the seller a negative feedback although one neglected receiving the product?

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I would like to order another jacket of ICON additionally. The size is large.
As I already paid for the 5 that I ordered last time,
they must be in the process of manufacturing.
Would you please send them after you finish manufacturing them in advance?
Please send the one that I ordered this time afterwards.

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I would like to order another jacket of ICON additionally. The size is large.
As I already paid for the 5 that I ordered last time,
They must be in the process of manufacturing.
Would you please send them after you finish manufacturing them in advance?
Please send the one that I ordered this time afterwards.

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We do not reissue the participation ticket of the hands shaking regardless of the reason including loss and theft, etc. We appreciate your understanding.
The participation ticket of the hands shaking is effective only during the hours designated on the day.
You are not allowed to take a film and record the artists while they are performing.
The number of the CD by reservation and participation ticket of the hands shaking on the day is limited. We will finish it when we sell them out. We appreciate your understanding in advance.
You can pay only in cash. We do not accept the credit card, etc. We appreciate your understanding in advance.

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We do not reissue the participation ticket of the hands shaking regardless of the reason including loss and theft, etc. We appreciate your understanding.
The participation ticket of the hands shaking is effective only during the hours designated on the day.
You are not allowed to take a photo or a film and record the artists while they are performing.
The number of the CD by reservation and participation ticket of the hands shaking on the day is limited. We will finish it when we sell them out. We appreciate your understanding in advance.
You can pay only in cash. We do not accept the credit card, etc. We appreciate your understanding in advance.

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If we witness the act that violates the notes and if you do not follow the instruction of the staff on the day, we might stop the event or ask you to leave the hall. We appreciate your understanding in advance.

We might check the personal belongings of those who participate in the hands shaking or accept it for the purpose of reinforcing the security by putting the top priority on the safety of the customers and performers.
If you are not cooperative with the above items, we might refuse your participation to the hands shaking. We appreciate your understanding in advance.

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If we witness the act that violates the notes and if you do not follow the instruction of the staff on the day, we might stop the event or ask you to leave the hall. We appreciate your understanding in advance.

We might check the personal belongings of those who participate in the hands shaking or accept it for the purpose of reinforcing the security by putting the top priority on the safety of the customers and performers.
If you are not cooperative with the above points, we might refuse your participation to the hands shaking. We appreciate your understanding in advance.

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Thank you very much for your contact.

We apologize for causing your concerns and troubles for products not having been delivered yet even after one month from your order.
As for the product, we have already shipped it on 3/Feb.

Please kindly contact your nearest post office if there is any packs for you. There is a possibility that the pack is kept at post office due to your absence when it was delivered.
Could you kindly let us know again in case you couldn't find it at post office as well?

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Thank you very much for your contact.

We apologize for causing your concerns and troubles for products not having been delivered yet even after one month from your order.
As for the product, we have already shipped it on February 3rd.

Please kindly contact your nearest post office if there is any packages for you. There is a possibility that the package is kept at the post office due to your absence when it was delivered.
Could you kindly let us know again in case you couldn't find it at the post office again?

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The assembly was held to praise the achievement of the late Shinsuke Asai in March 2nd, in Toranomon hills forum.

This event is held to look back the deed of the late Shinsuke Asai, the honorary chairman of MPI Japan Chapter, who passed away in January 9 and to reconfirm the movement to revitalize this business world and develop young resources treading his footsteps.

Over 250 people having connection to MICE came to the place and they shared memories about him enjoying his pictures, images of his speech, his message, and displayed goods related to him.

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The assembly was held to praise the achievement of the late Shinsuke Asai in March 2nd, in Toranomon hills forum.

This event is held to look back the deed of the late Shinsuke Asai, the honorary chairman of MPI Japan Chapter, who passed away in January 9 and to reconfirm the movement to revitalize this business world and develop young resources treading his footsteps.

Over 250 people from all over Japan having connection to MICE came to the place and they shared memories about him enjoying his pictures, images of his speech, his message, and displayed goods related to him.

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On March 2, "a ceremony to praise the achievements of late Mr. Shinsuke Asai" was held at Toranomon Hills forum

The event was as the place to look back toward the achievement of Honorary Chairman late Shinsuke Asai, who operated the aggressive activity aiming at MICE business in Japan and passed away on last January 9, and reconfirm the activities such as the industry activation or developing upbringing, inheriting his will.

There were over 250 of the MICE people gathering from the whole country, and participants talked their memories each other while watching photographs of his past days and movies of his lecture, the messages, the articles of the relation which are displayed.

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On March 2, "a ceremony to praise the achievements of late Mr. Shinsuke Asai" was held at Toranomon Hills forum

The event was as the place to look back toward the achievement of Honorary Chairman late Shinsuke Asai, who operated the aggressive activity aiming at MICE business in Japan and passed away on last January 9, and reconfirm the activities such as the industry activation or developing upbringing, inheriting his will.

There were over 250 of the MICE people gathered from the whole country, and participants talked their memories each other while watching photographs of his past days and movies of his lecture, the messages, the articles of the relation which are displayed.

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The award ceremony of the "Sports Promotion Award" heldin Kosaikai Museum of Chiyoda-ku Kojimachi.

"Sports Promotion Award" recognizes the organizations, groups and companies that contributed to the town development by sports tourism and sports. In 2008, Sports Health Industry Federation and Japan Sports Tourism Promotion Organization found as "Regional Sports Promotion Award" and in 2012, renamed its name as "Sports Promotion Award".

In addition, after the award ceremony, presentations and discussion by the winners is performed, and the methods for activating the region utilizing the sport is unveiled.

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The award ceremony of the "Sports Promotion Award" held in Kosaikai Museum of Chiyoda-ku Kojimachi.

"Sports Promotion Award" recognizes the organizations, groups and companies that contributed to the town development by sports tourism and sports. In 2008, Sports Health Industry Federation and Japan Sports Tourism Promotion Organization found as "Regional Sports Promotion Award" and in 2012, renamed its name as "Sports Promotion Award".

In addition, after the award ceremony, presentations and discussion by the winners is performed, and the methods for activating the region utilizing the sport is unveiled.

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Thailand government Convention and Exhibition Bureau (TCEB) carried out "Japan MICE road show 2015" in Tokyo Imperial Hotel on March 3.

Including the presentation of Thailand MICE by Mr. Bichaya, TCEB Meeting Incentive Convention Director, 11 companies and 20 people from Thailand hotels and airlines participated in business meetings. 41 people from major travel agencies of Japan and land operators participated and had the business meetings with suppliers about the latest Thailand MICE circumstances.

Also, I will be held in Osaka in March 5th.

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Thailand government Convention and Exhibition Bureau (TCEB) carried out "Japan MICE road show 2015" in Tokyo Imperial Hotel on March 3.

Including the presentation of Thailand MICE by Mr. Bichaya, TCEB Meeting Incentive Convention Director, 11 companies and 20 people from Thailand hotels and airlines participated in business meetings. 41 people from major travel agencies of Japan and land operators participated and had the business meetings with suppliers about the latest Thailand MICE circumstances.

Also, it will be held in Osaka in March 5th.