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I can contact with Samuel. Now I ask the staff of my bank to transfer money to Samuel. I think I can send money by tomorrow or day after tomorrow. But it takes time to send money to foreign country. So I think Samuel can check the transaction about 20th so it doesn't meet the deadline. When does your company open USD account? Also when will your company start after Chinese New Year?

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I can contact with Samuel. Now I ask the staff of my bank to transfer money to Samuel. I think I can send money by tomorrow or day after tomorrow. But it takes time to send money to foreign country. So I think Samuel can check the transaction around 20th so it doesn't meet the deadline. When does your company open USD account? Also when will your company start after Chinese New Year?

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A washing machine and a dryer machine are not equipped, but there is a coin laundry within three-minute walk.
The personal computer main body and the monitor display are equipped in all of individual rooms.

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A washing machine and a dryer machine are not equipped, but there is a coin laundry within three-minute walk.
All individual rooms have a personal computer main body and a monitor display.

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Hello.When transferring overseas from Japan, it is necessary to describe the payee's address.Sorry to trouble you, could you tell me the location of your company?Also, from OO Bruce I heard that your account is as follows, but is the transfer place correct?

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Hello. When transferring overseas from Japan, it is necessary to describe the payee's address. Sorry to trouble you, could you tell me the location of your company? Also, from OO Bruce I heard that your account is as follows, but is the transfer place correct?

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Hi
When making a payment from Japan to foreign country, you need to note the address of the person receiving it. Can you tell me your company address?
Also Bruce of ○○ told me your account is below, is it correct?

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Hi
When making a payment from Japan to foreign country, you need to write the address of the person receiving it. Can you tell me your company address?
Also Bruce of ○○ told me your account is below, is it correct?

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I am sorry for making trouble this time.
I checked with ebay regarding your inquiry.
About invoice of credit we cannot find out as seller.
Ebay will check the content of invoice.
So can you contact to ebay?
I think it's ok to send the email to ebay.
The contact info is attached.
It would be great if you can do that.
Thanks.

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I am sorry for making trouble this time.
I checked with ebay regarding your inquiry.
About invoice of credit we cannot find out as seller.
Ebay will check the content of invoice.
So can you contact ebay?
I think it's ok to send the email you sent me to ebay.
The contact info is attached.
It would be great if you can do that.
Thanks.

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I am sorry for the inconvenience caused this time.
As for the inquiry, I checked it to eBay.
As for the credit request, unfortunately, the seller cannot cope with it.
Regarding the request, eBay will check.
Therefore, could you please contact eBay?
You can send the e-mail sent me to eBay as it is.
I attached the contact method.
I am sorry to trouble you but could you please cope with it.
Thank you.

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I am sorry for the inconvenience caused this time.
As for the inquiry, I checked it to eBay.
As for the credit request, unfortunately, the seller cannot cope with it.
Regarding the request, eBay will check.
Therefore, could you please contact eBay?
You can send the e-mail which you sent me to eBay.
I attached the contact method.
I am sorry to trouble you but could you please cope with it.
Thank you.

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Thank you for your agreement on our company plans. I have a favor to ask. Could you set the price of RT800 up as $170 on Amazon we manage?

Our offer could be much trouble for you. That's why we are planning set the period for this busses plan.
If there are no any changes in coming over-a-year, we don't mind changing the price back to reasonable price for you. Please let me know if you need much shorter one, regarding the period.

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Thank you for your agreement on our company plans. I have a favor to ask. Could you set the price of RT800 up as $170 on Amazon we manage?

Our offer could be much trouble for you. That's why we are planning set the period for this business plan.
If there are no any changes in coming over-a-year, we don't mind changing the price back to reasonable price for you. Please let me know if you need much shorter one, regarding the period.

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Notes to avoid purchasing wrong products:
The AF of this lens might not work on your camera.
If you are not sure, please ask us whether this lens works on your camera or not before making your order.

Very beautiful body and optical system!!
On the whole, beautiful optical system!
By our visual inspection for the optical system, we could not find any mold, large cloud, and lens glue deterioration which affect picture quality.
No noticeable scratch on the front- and rear-glass, their coating is also beautiful.

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Notes to avoid purchasing wrong products:
The AF of this lens might not work on your camera.
If you are not sure, please ask us whether this lens works on your camera or not before making your order.

Very beautiful body and optical system!!
On the whole, beautiful optical system!
By our visual inspection for the optical system, we could not find any mold, large cloud, and lens glue deterioration which affect picture quality.
No noticeable scratch on the front and rear glasses, and their coating is also beautiful.

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During Christmas season, the distribution of goods are much congested.

The item would not be delivered before Christmas unless you use Expedited Delivery.

Unfortunately we cannot deliver the item before Christmas.

Two days after you receive this mail, we will cancel your order.

Once you ship the item, please send an e-mail with the picture showing how you shipped the item as an attachment.
After I confirm it, I will issue a refund.
After the item is delivered to our delivery center , I will issue a refund.

Following the rule of Amazon, 〇% of the amount of money will be deducted from the item price.

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During Christmas season, the distribution of goods are very busy.

The item would not be delivered before Christmas unless you use Expedited Delivery.

Unfortunately we cannot deliver the item before Christmas.

We will cancel your order in two days after you receive this mail, .

Once you ship the item, please send an e-mail with the picture showing how you shipped the item as an attachment.
After I confirm it, I will issue a refund.
After the item is delivered to our delivery center , I will issue a refund.

Following the rule of Amazon, 〇% of the amount of money will be deducted from the item price.

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Yay! To my family and friends, even I forgot that it was my birthday, so thanks for celebrating for me!
I wonder how long it's been since someone sang the birthday song for me.
I am so touched! A BIG thank you to everyone!
I love you guys!

I think I already asked before, but when is your birthday again?
I'm sorry for asking again and again. I'll take note of it this time.

Yes, I think I told you before that the package arrived. Sorry for being so careless!
At noon today, I received a phone call from the post office and they told me that they sent the package to my place on the 14th.
I wonder why it doesn't show up properly on their tracking system...
Anyhow, I'm glad it did.

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Yay! To my family and friends, even I forgot that it was my birthday, so thanks for celebrating for me!
I wonder how long it's been since someone sang the birthday song for me.
I am so touched! A BIG thank you to everyone!
I love you guys!

I think I already asked before, but when is your birthday?
I'm sorry for asking again and again. I'll take note of it this time.

Yes, I think I told you before that the package arrived. Sorry for being so careless!
At noon today, I received a phone call from the post office and they told me that they sent the package to my place on the 14th.
I wonder why it doesn't show up properly on their tracking system...
Anyhow, I'm glad.

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Oops! I am really happy that you celebrate my birthday, because all of my family completely forget it!
I heard the birthday song for the first time in may nears.
I was so moved! Really thanks!
I love you!

Probably I had asked you before, but when is your birthday?
I am sorry to ask you many times. I will write down the date on my memo this time to memorize it.

Year, you told me that you received the parcel before. I am sorry. I forgot about it.
I received a call from the post office in the daytime today, and they told me that it was delivered safely on the 14th.
I wonder why it has not been reflected on the tracking system. It's a mystery.
Anyways, I rest assured.

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Oops! I am really happy that you celebrate my birthday, because all of my family completely forget it!
I heard the birthday song for the first time in may years.
I was so moved! Really thanks!
I love you!

Probably I had asked you before, but when is your birthday?
I am sorry to ask you many times. I will write down the date on my memo this time to memorize it.

Year, you told me that you received the parcel before. I am sorry. I forgot about it.
I received a call from the post office in the daytime today, and they told me that it was delivered safely on the 14th.
I wonder why it has not been reflected on the tracking system. It's a mystery.
Anyway, I rest assured.