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元の翻訳
I am also thrilled now. Let's start the project !
Once agreement for contract completed, we will act for the payment right away from the section concerned. With regards.

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I am also thrilled now. Let's start the project !
Once the agreement for contract is completed, we will act for the payment right away from the section concerned. With regards.

元の翻訳
We have three styles. The soft curve show modesty and grace. it's lightly and clean by using white color. A standard hotel style with line and accent color. Terms and conditions of membership. please use the feather Futon and the pillow over three month. We clean the linen goods every time. please make a declaration for changing it after using six month and we ask you ¥1000 for extra charge. Agree to the terms. Add the Option

修正後
We have three styles. The soft curve shows modesty and grace. it's light and clean by using white color. A standard hotel style with line and accent color. Terms and conditions of membership. please use the feather Futon and the pillow over three month. We clean the linen goods every time. Please make a declaration for changing it after using six month and we ask you ¥1000 for extra charge. Agree to the terms. Add the Option.

元の翻訳
We prepare 3 style. It creates elegancy and grace with soft curve. Coordinated only by white and shows brightness and cleanliness. Hotel standard style created by figure and accented colors. Terms and conditions of membership. Use down quilt and pillow for more than 3 months. Dry-clean linen every time. Ask for exchange after using 6 month. Commission charge is 1000 yen. Agree terms and conditions. Add for options.

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We prepare 3 styles. It creates elegancy and grace with soft curve. Coordinated only by white and shows brightness and cleanliness. Hotel standard style created by figure and accented colors. Terms and conditions of membership. Use down quilt and pillow for more than 3 months. Dry-clean linen every time. Ask for exchange after using 6 month. Commission charge is 1000 yen. Agree terms and conditions. Add for options.

元の翻訳
We have three styles.
Soft curve line makes elegance and grace.
It is coordinated with only white, and bright and clean.
It is the regular style of the hotel by line and accent color.
You can choose two tastes.
Terms and conditions of membership.
Down quilt and pillow should be used more than three months.
The linens will be taken to the cleaners every time.
As for exchange, we will correspond when you apply to us after six months usage.
We will ask you 1000 Yen of the commission fee.
Agree with the rules and regulations.
Add the option.

修正後
We have three styles.
Soft curve line makes elegance and grace.
It is coordinated with only white, and bright and clean.
It is the regular style of the hotel by line and accent color.
You can choose two tastes.
Terms and conditions of membership.
Down quilt and pillow should be used more than three months.
The linens will be taken to the cleaners every time.
As for exchange, we will correspond when you apply to us after six months usage.
We will ask you 1000 JPY of the commission fee.
Agree with the rules and regulations.
Add the option.

元の翻訳
In the future, we are going to sell daily necessities at amazon. The clients are purchases at Amazon. Although there is no items on the above listed URL except toile paper, we are going to increase listing daily necessities in the future.

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In the future, we are going to sell daily necessities at amazon. The clients are purchasers at Amazon. Although there is no items on the above listed URL except toilet paper, we are going to increase listing daily necessities in the future.

元の翻訳
Yes, I am very much interested in.
I am just looking for publishers in order to release apps to China.
Do you have any of ideas for good publishers?

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Yes, I am very much interested.
I am just looking for publishers in order to release apps to China.
Do you think of any good publishers?

元の翻訳
The memory of that summer we spent together is my lifelong best memory.
I really hope my niece will also experience a wonderful memory as we had in New Zealand.
I wish you and your family's happiness always.
I am looking forward to see you sometime soon.

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The memory of that summer we spent together is my lifelong best memory.
I really hope my niece will also experience a wonderful memory as we had in New Zealand.
I wish you and your family's happiness always.
I am looking forward to seeing you sometime soon.

元の翻訳
The memory which I spent you in summer is my treasure in my life.
I hope my niece will have such wonderful experience in New Zealand.
I always hope for you and your family's happiness.
I will visit you someday surely.

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The memory which I spent you in summer is a treasure in my life.
I hope my niece will have such wonderful experiences in New Zealand.
I always hope for you and your family's happiness.
I will visit you someday surely.

元の翻訳
I would like to send this package by FedEx. However, the dimensions of the box exceed girth 130 inches. So, I cannot choose FedEx. Can you please split the package ID so that you can send them by FedEx?

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I would like to send this package by FedEx. However, the dimensions of the box exceed girth 130 inches. So, I cannot choose FedEx. Can you please split the package ID so that I can send them by FedEx?

元の翻訳
1. 君たちのことが恋しくなるよ。これはただのさよなら出会ってまたいつか会えるさ。世界は狭いんだから。

2. 私たち皆んな素晴らしい時を過ごしたよ。もうこんなに時が経ったなんて信じられないよ。

3. あなたたちと一緒に働けたらなと思っているよ。

4. 私もユニバーサルに応募してるんだよ…一緒に働かせてくれ〜！

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1. 君たちのことが恋しくなるよ。これはただのさよならだ。またいつか会えるさ。世界は狭いんだから。

2. 私たち皆んな素晴らしい時を過ごしたよ。もうこんなに時が経ったなんて信じられないよ。

3. あなたたちと一緒に働けたらなと思っているよ。

4. 私もユニバーサルに応募してるんだよ…一緒に働かせてくれ〜！

元の翻訳
1)みんなのことを忘れない、これは永遠のさよならではない。またね！地球は小さいよ。

2)一緒にいい時間を過ごしたな。時間が経つのが早い。

3)できれば、一緒に仕事したい。

4)私もユニバーサルに応募した…仕事に行く時、、私も連れて！

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1)みんなのことを忘れない、これは永遠のさよならではない。またね！地球は小さいよ。

2)一緒にいい時間を過ごしたな。時間が経つのが早い。

3)できれば、一緒に仕事したい。

4)私もユニバーサルに応募した…　一緒に働きたいです！

元の翻訳
１．、皆さんとお目にかかれなくなりさみしくなります。さようならといわなければなりませんが、いつか再会しましょう。私たちの惑星は小さいです。

２．全員が楽しかったです。時間のたつのがなんと早い事でしょう。
３．皆さんと一緒に働けると良いのですが。
４．私もユニバーサルに応募しています。一緒に働かせてください。

修正後
１．皆さんとお目にかかれなくなりさみしくなります。さようならといわなければなりませんが、いつか再会しましょう。私たちの惑星は小さいです。

２．私たち全員が楽しかったです。時間のたつのがなんと早い事でしょう。
３．皆さんと一緒に働けると良いのですが。
４．私もユニバーサルに応募しています。一緒に働かせてください。

元の翻訳
1) 寂しいですが、あくまでただのお別れです。またお会いしましょう。私たちの惑星は小さいのですから。
2) とても素敵な時間を過ごしたので、どのようにして時間がすぎたのか信じられません。
3) あなた方とお仕事できることを願っています。
4) わたしも世界に通用しますので、どうかあなたと働かせて下さい！

修正後
1) 寂しいですが、あくまでただのお別れです。またお会いしましょう。私たちの惑星は小さいのですから。
2) とても素敵な時間を過ごしたので、どのようにして時間がすぎたのか信じられません。
3) あなた方とお仕事できることを願っています。
4) わたしもUniversalに応募しています。どうかあなたと働かせて下さい！