yoppo (yoppo1026) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
After that, we have the item returned, but the clock of the item itself did not work and a part was damaged.
We wanted to refund the customer after we repaired the item, but the customer requests a full refund although the item is in a damaged condition.
Therefore, there has been little progress in the talks.
-The item is returned only for the customer's own convenience (i.e. mistaken size)
-The item is returned dammaged.
For the above 2 reasons, we would like to refund the price by deducting the repair cost.

修正後
After that, we have the item returned, but the clock of the item itself did not work and a part was damaged.
We wanted to refund the customer after we repaired the item, but the customer requests a full refund although the item is in a damaged condition.
Therefore, there has been little progress in the talks.
-The item is returned only for the customer's own convenience (i.e. mistaken size)
-The item is returned damaged.
For the above 2 reasons, we would like to refund the price by deducting the repair cost.

元の翻訳
Reason8 NFRs は来週入手可能- account name をHiyaと呼びます。
少し時間がかかるが、Reason8は来週リリースされる予定です。
review copy を受け取ることに関心のある人は皆、ご自分のPropellerhead のaccount name を送信ください。
事をすばやく理解するためにsimple format をお使いください。name,media, account nameのようにお願いします。
まだPropellerhead のaccountがない方のない方につきましてはホームページを開きaccountを作成してください。
私はprapellerhead をパスし２０１４年９月３０日火曜日にあなたのaccountはReason8に恵みが与えられるべきです。
追加文書は新しい商品Reason8を通してすぐにお伝えいたします。

修正後
Reason8 NFRs は来週入手可能- account name をHiyaと呼びます。
少し時間がかかりますが、Reason8は来週リリースされる予定です。
review copy を受け取ることに関心のある人は皆、ご自分のPropellerhead のaccount name を送信ください。
事をすばやく理解するためにsimple format をお使いください。name,media, account nameのようにお願いします。
まだPropellerhead のaccountがない方のない方につきましてはホームページを開きaccountを作成してください。
私はprapellerhead をパスし２０１４年９月３０日火曜日にあなたのaccountはReason8に恵みが与えられるべきです。
追加文書は新しい商品Reason8を通してすぐにお伝えいたします。

元の翻訳
Hello, gentleman and madam
Thank you for your message.
I would appreciate you to use my
shop in this time.
I 'm very pleased to deal with you.
I would make shipment a item for you within days.
Please wait for the some time for your
order to arrive.
Thank you very much.

I would ship your order by SAL service in a few days.

I would ship your order by registered SAL in a few days.

I would ship your order by EMS within days.

修正後
Hello, gentleman and madam
Thank you for your message.
I would appreciate that you used my
shop this time.
I 'm very pleased to deal with you.
I would make shipment of an item for you within days.
Please wait for the some time for your
order to arrive.
Thank you very much.

I would ship your order by SAL service in a few days.

I would ship your order by registered SAL in a few days.

I would ship your order by EMS within days.

元の翻訳
I enveloped the item with vinyl pack you have used when you have shiped it to us.
And we protected it with tapes like the item can't be exposedto outside.
Have the item been naked condition unenveloped?
If it is naked condition, the vinyl pack would be broken by the contents check at the customs.
As the additional security, we enveloped to protect it with air cushion.
If the item was boken, the accident would happen in the shipping.
Naturaly the insurance for the reskhedge should be countermeasure.
We recomend to apply the insurance to your local post office.

修正後
I enveloped the item with vinyl pack you have used when you have shipped it to us.
And we protected it with tapes like the item can't be exposedto outside.
Have the item been naked condition unenveloped?
If it is naked condition, the vinyl pack would be broken by the contents check at the customs.
As the additional security, we enveloped to protect it with air cushion.
If the item was boken, the accident would happen in the shipping.
Naturaly the insurance for the reskhedge should be countermeasure.
We recommend to apply the insurance to your local post office.

元の翻訳
Dear, sorry so much for your trouble made from us.
Your buying products have send at Augast 12th,
although this deliverly is not used tracking service.
Becouse of saving the cost.

If the products don't still arrive at your home,
Please check at your nearest post office whether it arrived at there.
In this case, the products can be kept staying at there.

If it have not arrived at there, we will pay back to you at moment.
You don't need to be care about it.

we will correspond this trade surely with faithful up to finish.

Sorry, but please take it.

修正後
Dear, sorry so much for your trouble made from us.
Your buying products have send at August 12th,
although this deliverly is not used tracking service.
Because of saving the cost.

If the products don't still arrive at your home,
Please check at your nearest post office whether it arrived at there.
In this case, the products can be kept staying at there.

If it have not arrived at there, we will pay back to you at moment.
You don't need to be careful about it.

we will correspond this trade surely with faithful up to finish.

Sorry, but please take it.

元の翻訳
何を言うのですか。納期になると、翻訳されたすべてのものを持つことができると思いますか？
二つの追加の注意事項：
- 明日の終わりまでにENテキストを持っていないなら、10月6日の元の発表日に戻って行かなければなりません。
- あなたの週末の仕事のために50ユーロのボーナスを提供することができます。

作成することが納期に間に合うかどうか、連絡してください。

修正後
どうでしょうか。時間以内に全てを翻訳することができると思いますか？
二つの追加の注意事項：
- 明日の終わりまでにENテキストを持っていないなら、10月6日の元の発表日に戻って行かなければなりません。
- あなたの週末の仕事のために50ユーロのボーナスを提供することができます。

作成することが納期に間に合うかどうか、連絡してください。

元の翻訳
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修正後
■ History
Around 2003
Women Entrepreneurship School becomes popular, and rush trenders are begun to be paid attention by TV and magazines

November 2006
IT companies are paying more attention on blog promotion. Utilizing the trend leader, part of the current womedia, in blog promotion is rapid growth. It is the foundation of current social media marketing business.

元の翻訳
Thank you for sending account form.

There are some questions when I was filling in it.
Is it necessary to fill in 「Accts. Payable Name」?
What shall I write down?

Is it also necessary to fill in 「Freight Forwarder」?
Since I have a coorperation with freight forwarder from Florida to Japan,
could I write down the company's name?

修正後
Thank you for sending account form.

There are some questions that I found when I was filling in it.
Is it necessary to fill in ”Accts. Payable Name”?
What shall I write down?

Is it also necessary to fill in ”Freight Forwarder”?
I have a coorperation with freight forwarder from Florida to Japan.
Could I write down the company's name?

元の翻訳
I am a buyer in Japan.
I am selling import items (about 3million yen per month mainly apparels) for popuar shopping sites, such as BUYMA and Amazon.

Your items are very popular in Japan. Because I would love to sale them, I would like to sell wholesale.
Please give me the wholesale prices and the terms of trade.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

修正後
I am a buyer in Japan.
I am selling import items (about 3million yen per month mainly apparels) for popuar shopping sites, such as BUYMA and Amazon.

Your items are very popular in Japan. As I would love to sale them, I would like to sell wholesale.
Please give me the wholesale prices and the terms of trade.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.