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元の翻訳
Please make the payment with your credit card this time.

修正後
I will make the payment with my credit card this time.

元の翻訳
That means we sell you the hocho, Japanese kitchen knife, for 38 dollars.

You will buy two hocho, and what name would you like to be engraved with them?

As for buying hocho, if you give us a mail, we will send you an invoice via paypal and ship it if accepted.

However, it may take a long time to deliver depending on the conditions of stock.

I will make a decision on what kanji letters to be engraved.

This price is offered only to you for now, and please let other customers know about it.

Once you have one, you will understand the reason our hocho are expensive for and the reasonableness of the price.

修正後
That means we sell you the hocho, Japanese kitchen knife, for 38 dollars.

You will buy two hocho, and what name would you like to be engraved with them?

As for buying hocho, if you give us a mail, we will send you an invoice via paypal and ship it if accepted.

However, it may take a long time to deliver depending on the conditions of stock.

I will make a decision on what kanji letters to be engraved.

This price is offered only to you for now, and please let other customers know about it.

Once you have them in your hands, you will understand the reason why they are expensive and will be aware that the price is reasonable.

元の翻訳
Should the goods you ordered not be available, we will pay you back.

修正後
If the item goes out of stock by any chance, we will pay you back.