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元の翻訳
Iya Kazura Bridge.
One of the three most unusual bride, which is a 45 meters long suspension bridge made of the plant called Shirakuchikazura.
It is lit up at from 19:00 to 21:00 every night.

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Iya Kazura Bridge.
One of the three most unusual bridge, which is a 45 meters long suspension bridge made of the plant called Shirakuchikazura.
It is lit up from 19:00 to 21:00 every night.

元の翻訳
市場単価と市場価値は参考用のみです。

通貨の換算は、請求額の確定日の営業終了時での為替レートに基づいています。

市場価格が有効でない長期債・中期債にとって、額面価格は市場価値の柱への横たわりとなるでしょう。

払い込み所得額は、合計額を差し引いた給付額となります。もし銀行が給付額を超過して請求した場合、我々は請求の満額最終清算として給付額を差し引きます。

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市場単価と市場価値は参考用です。

通貨の換算は、請求額の確定日の営業終了時の一般的な為替レートに基づいています。

市場価格が入手できない債券/手形については、額面価格が下の市場価格欄に示されます。

払い込み所得額は、総手数料を差し引いた給付額となります。もし銀行手数料が給付額を超過して請求された場合、当行は請求の満額最終清算として給付額全額を差し引きます。

元の翻訳
これらのユーザーアカウントデータへのリクエスト数35,051件のうち、インドからの要求は2014年前期の4,559件から5,473件へ上昇した、とFacebookは述べた。

また、インド国内の5,832個のコンテンツをブロックし、その件数は2014年の前半6ヶ月を通して4,960件に上った。それでもFacebookがブロックした全てのコンテンツの半分にも満たない。

「我々は、法執行機関と通信情報技術省内のインドコンピューター緊急事態対策チームにより最初に報告された、混乱や不安を招くような反宗教的内容やヘイトスピーチのコンテンツに対し、インド国内のアクセスを制限しました。」とFacebookは説明した。

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Facebookによると、ユーザアカウントのデータを要求された35,051件のうち、5,473件がインドによるもので、2014年上半期の4,559件からへ増加した。

また、インド国内では5,832個のコンテンツをブロックしたが、これは2014年上半期の4,960件から増加している。Facebookがブロックした全てのコンテンツの半分どころではない。

「おもに法執行機関とMinistry of Communications and Information TechnologyのIndia Computer Emergency Response Teamが報告してきたコンテンツへのアクセスを制限しました。混乱や不調和を招く可能性のある反宗教的内容のコンテンツやヘイトスピーチなどです」とFacebookが説明している。

元の翻訳
Thank you for your contact about the arrival of the commodity without any problems.
Would you like it?

Although we are looking for the stocks of A, B, and C, we have not found them yet.
You can buy D and others from the URL below.

The commodity is the same one you bought before.
The rest of it is very a few in stock.
There is a possibility that it is sold out when you order.

Please consider about that, and we will contact you discounted price if you tell us commodities you want to order at once with the same way as you did the last time.

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Thank you let us know that you have received the product without problems.
Do you like it? (Or I hope you are happy with it.)

Although we are looking for the stocks of A, B, and C, we have not found them yet.
You can buy D and others from the URL below.

The product is the same one you bought before.
There are limited numbers of stock.
Please note that we deliver this item on a first-come and first-serve basis.

Please consider that. We will let you know the discounted price if you tell us products you want to order as you did the last time.

元の翻訳
Did you family arrive at Japan safely?
You must be tired because of the long flight, so please take a rest .
Let me know when the date you can meet us is decided.
Then I will contact with my aunt Fusako.
Will you come to Omiya by train at the day?
If so, I will go to Omiya to pick you up.
You can reply to me in English.

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Did your family arrive at Japan safely?
You must be tired because of the long flight, so please take a rest .
Let me know when the date you can meet us is decided.
Then I will contact my aunt Fusako.
Will you come to Omiya by train at the day?
If so, I will go to Omiya to pick you up.
You can reply to me in English.

元の翻訳
I inquired to Casio.

In general, most watches have manuals written in English, however, there is no English manual for the watch.

I did not know about that, so I would like to apologize to you for this.

Would you send me a return request ? Then I will give you a full refund.

Once you obtain the full refund, would you delete the negative feedback?

Not only I, but other shops are selling the watch.
I am afraid but I thought it was too much that you gave me the negative feedback like this.

修正後
I inquired at Casio.

In general, most watches have manuals written in English, however, there is no English manual for the watch.

I did not know about that, so I would like to apologize to you for this.

Would you send me a return request ? Then I will give you a full refund.

Once you obtain the full refund, would you please delete the negative feedback?

Not only I, but other shops are selling the watch.
I am afraid to say that such a negative feedback is too much for me.