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元の翻訳
お申し込みをいただき、ありがとうごさいました。
そちらのカードによる問題が発生したため、ご注文をキャンセルさせていただきました。
どうか再度、お申し込み下さい。

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お申し込みをいただき、ありがとうごさいました。
そちらのカードによる問題が発生したため、ご注文をキャンセルさせていただきました。
どうか再度、お申し込み下さい。

元の翻訳
Sorry for keeping you waiting. I have checked the tracking information but it has not been renewed since it left Japan. Normally it would only take a week for arrival of the package, but I assume that it is delayed at customs. I regret to ask you to ask your nearby post office for the tracking number and confirm the current status. If there is anything that I could assist you with please contact me. Thank you.

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Sorry for keeping you waiting. I have checked the tracking information but it has not been renewed since it left Japan. Normally it would only take a week for arrival of the package, but I assume that it is delayed at customs. I am sorry for the trouble but please check with your nearby post office and confirm the current status with the tracking number. If there is anything that I could assist you with, please contact me. Thank you.

元の翻訳
Good day!
I purchased a long cardigan for myself this time.
I saw other items and found a variety of items which ↵
have a good looks.
I sell the items in Japan.
Do we have an exhibition of the brand that is going to be held in Japan↵
and abroad?

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Good day!
I purchased a long cardigan for myself this time.
I saw other items and found a wide range of great items.
I sell some items in Japan.
Do you have any plan of organizing an exhibition of your brand in Japan and abroad?

元の翻訳
弊社とのパートナーに興味を持っていただきありがとうございます。弊社のポリシーの一つが、Amazon MPセラーには販売しない事です。これは直接のビジネスをしたいと思っているからです。貴社がどこで販売したいのか、そして貴社について教えて頂けますでしょうか。両社にとっていいビジネスか検討させて頂ければと思います。
宜しくお願い致します。

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弊社とのパートナー提携に興味を持っていただきありがとうございます。弊社のポリシーの一つが、Amazon MPセラーには販売しない事です。これは直接のビジネスをしたいと思っているからです。貴社がどこで販売したいのか、そして貴社について教えて頂けますでしょうか。両社にとって良いビジネスか検討させて頂ければと思います。
宜しくお願い致します。

元の翻訳
How may days are required to be sent to Japan by air?
How can I find that you had sent a package to me?
If you prove that you had sent the package to me, I will ↵
arrange for payment immediately.

I would like to process it as early as you like.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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How may days are required to be sent to Japan by air?
How can I know that you have sent a package to me?
If you can prove to me that you have sent the package to me, I will arrange for payment immediately.

I would like to get this done as early as possible too.
Thank you for your cooperation.

元の翻訳
Dear Amazon,
Since I received your email last time, I made a contact with Payonia. I asked Payonia to check if the money has transferred to my card, but they said it had not yet.
They said that money will not be transferred if an incorrect account number is registered. I wonder where my proceeds from sales are. Will the money be transferred to my correct account?

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Dear Amazon,
Since I received your email last time, I made a contact with Payonia. I asked Payonia to check if the money had been transferred to my card, but they said it had not yet.
They said that the money would not be transferred if an incorrect account number was registered. I wonder where my proceeds from sales are now. Will the money be transferred to my correct account?

元の翻訳
Have you received the e-mail?
As I have not heard from you, I am writing to you.
If you have not received it yet, I will send it again.
As I would like to reply 00, I appreciate your understanding.
Regarding the makeup box, if you give me a permission, we can manufacture it in Japan.
I will be looking forward to your reply.

Could you agree to 00 for the payment, which is the same as the last time?
You said that you were going to take a picture of the model of the new item in February.
After you complete it, would you send it to me immediately?

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Have you received the e-mail?
As I have not heard from you, I am writing to you.
If you have not received it yet, I will send it again.
As I would like to reply to 00, I appreciate your understanding.
Regarding the makeup box, if you give me a permission we can manufacture it in Japan.
I will be looking forward to your reply.

Could you agree to 00 for the payment, which is the same as the last time?
You said that you were going to take a picture of the model of the new item in February.
After you complete it, would you send it to me immediately?

元の翻訳
Thank you for your speedy reply.
I have been able to meet the estimated deadline safely.
Thank you so much for taking time out of your busy schedule for me.

Once again, I sincerely thank you.

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Thank you for your speedy reply.
I managed to submit the quotation by the deadline.
Thank you so much for taking time out of your busy schedule for me.

Once again, I sincerely thank you.

元の翻訳
I received the tracking number of this item today.
I checked it and found that the multiple packages are listed as "3".
I ordered 5 pieces of this rug.
Would you check the vendor if they sent 5 pieces to me?
I had received fewer pieces of the rugs than the number I ordered twice.

I cancelled this order 5 days ago.
Why was the item sent today?
Could you contact UPS and return it?
In case where the item arrives, please tell me how to return it without↵
paying for the shipping charge.

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I received the tracking number of this item today.
I checked it and found that the multiple packages are listed as "3".
I ordered 5 pieces of this rug.
Would you check with the vendor if they sent 5 pieces to me?
I had received fewer pieces of the rugs than the number I ordered twice.

I cancelled this order 5 days ago.
Why was the item sent today?
Could you contact UPS and request them to return it to you?
In case the item arrives, please tell me how to return it without paying for the shipping charge.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting us. Apologies for sending a wrong product. I confirmed the the photo of the original box with the name of PENTAX. Would you be able to return the product to the address below? As soon as we confirm the product we will refund the full amount. Please let us know the returning shipping cost as well so that we can refund through PayPal. We would appreciate if you could use the parcel which we can track. We sincerely apologise about this matter.

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Thank you for contacting us. We are sorry for sending a wrong product. I confirmed that the photo of the original box shows the name of PENTAX. Would you be able to return the product to the address below? As soon as the product is received on our end, we will refund the full amount. Please let us know the returning shipping cost as well so that we can refund through PayPal. We would appreciate if you could return the product with a tracking number. We sincerely apologize about this matter.

元の翻訳
I have notice that the mail has not reached but, I had to send a different address. I am sorry If I sent many times.
Although it is an estimate of the previous product, I want the estimated quotation of both compression fitting methods and hot tap methods. In addition, explosion-proof is not required. These are what I taught model number.

640i-7-3(x)-1
640i-7-3(x)-2

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I noticed that the mail was not received, so I sent it with a different address. I am sorry If I sent you several emails.
Although it is an estimate of the previous product, I want a quotation for both compression fitting methods and hot tap methods. In addition, explosion-proof is not required. These are the model numbers I am considering:

640i-7-3(x)-1
640i-7-3(x)-2

元の翻訳
Best entertainment!
I could enjoy the musical, but I couldn't get some sense of humor of the details since I am not good at English. Regarding the Thriller, there was no need to worry about such thing! I knew all of the Michael Jackson's songs and performers were all professionals. Boys were cute. 2 and half minutes passed by like a flash. I recommend you to see it.

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Best entertainment!
I could enjoy the musical, but I couldn't get some sense of humor in details since I am not good at English. Regarding the Thriller, there was no need to worry about such thing! I knew all of the Michael Jackson's songs and performers were all professionals. Boys were cute. 2 and a half minutes passed by like a flash. I recommend you to see it.

元の翻訳
こんにちわ。貴方のリストは美しいですね！

ところで、どうやってそんな大きな写真をe-bay記述エリアに載せたのですか？（どのようなプログラムを使ったんでしょうか。どうやったのですか？）

また、何のプログラムを使ってテキストをあのフォーマットに変換したのでしょうか？

よろしくおねがいします。

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こんにちわ。貴方の出品ページは素晴らしいですね！

ところで、どうやってそんな大きな写真をe-bay記述エリアに載せたのですか？（どのようなプログラムを使ったんでしょうか。どうやったのですか？）

また、何のプログラムを使ってテキストをあのようなフォーマットに変換したのでしょうか？

よろしくおねがいします。

元の翻訳
Thank you for your e-mail.

I have many items I would like to add to this manual to make it up-to-date. I will let you know the details later.

I'm not good with English. I use translation web site such as Google Translator to communicate with everyone. So I do not use Skype. The communication method would be by e-mail.

We will use Drop Box for exchanging data with you from next time. Please let me know of your e-mail address.

I hope to establish a long working relationship with you.

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Thank you for your e-mail.

I have many items I would like to add to this manual to make it up-to-date. I will let you know the details later.

I'm not good at English. I use a translation website such as Google Translator to communicate with everyone. So I do not use Skype. The communication method would be by e-mail.

We will use Drop Box for exchanging data with you from next time. Please let me know of your e-mail address.

I hope to establish a long working relationship with you.

元の翻訳
こんにちは。私は、あなたから購入したカメラがほしいものではなく、返品したい旨お伝えします。私が買ったそのカメラは私が思っていたモデルではなかったのです。もし何か質問があれば返信して下さい。

こんにちは。この売買をキャンセルしなければなりません。この件の処理については先ほどの投稿ですでに賛同したとおりです。

フィルターがないとおっしゃりたいのでしょうか？添付の写真について言及してください。お支払いはしますが、詳細をよく知りたいと思います。

こんにちは！お願いします。緊急にカムコーダー（一体型ビデオカメラ）が必要なのです。今日中の払い戻しは可能でしょうか？

もっと写真はありますか？

オイルとシャッターについては理解しかねるのですが・・・何が問題でしょうか。カメラは正常に動きますか？
メーター（計器）は正常に動きますか？

このカメラ用のレンズはいくつかお持ちですか？

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こんにちは。私は、あなたから購入したカメラはいらないので返品したい旨をお伝えします。私が買ったそのカメラは私が思っていたモデルではなかったのです。もし何か質問があればお返事ください。

こんにちは。この取引はキャンセルしなければなりません。この件の処理については先ほどの投稿ですでに同意したとおりです。

フィルターがないとおっしゃりたいのでしょうか？添付の写真についてご説明ください。お支払いはしますが、詳細をよく知りたいと思います。

こんにちは！お願いします。緊急にカムコーダー（一体型ビデオカメラ）が必要なのです。今日中の払い戻しは可能でしょうか？

もっと写真はありますか？

オイルとシャッターについては理解しかねるのですが・・・何が問題でしょうか。カメラは正常に動きますか？
メーター（計器）は正常に動きますか？

このカメラ用のレンズはお持ちですか？

元の翻訳
The main tour of this trip, the Stonehenge.
The reason I went to London for the first time was to go to the Stonehenge.
I wanted to know how it would feel like when I stand on this Power Spot myself.
As I thought, I felt a lot of cleansed air. I couldn't approach it very close because of the protection, but at the closest point, I felt heat like from the sun.

It was 1h30min, but you have to change for a shuttle bus, so it was a pity that I could only stay there for an hour.

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The main tour of this trip, the Stonehenge.
The reason I went to London for the first time was to go to the Stonehenge.
I wanted to know how it would feel like when I stood on this Power Spot myself.
As I thought, I felt a lot of cleansed air. I couldn't get too near because of the preservation, but at the closest point I felt some kind of heat like the sunlight.

It was 1h30min tour, but you have to get on a shuttle bus, so it was a pity that I could only stay there for an hour.

元の翻訳
I have joined this tour on my own. I was worried at first, whether I have properly booked, or whether the rendezvous point war correct, but that was unnecessary. The person in charge, Kevin, was indeed good at talking, and explained the tour with humor. It was a fun trip as he explained not only the Stonehenge and Bath, but many other things along the way. He has mistaken "Gold" for "Metal", or "a slope" for "a hill", but that was not so much of a problem. Kevin also told me where I could have dinner.

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I have joined this tour on my own. I was worried at first whether I have properly booked, or whether the meeting point was correct, but that was unnecessary. The person in charge, Kevin, was indeed good at talking, and explained about the tour with humor. It was a fun trip as he explained not only about the Stonehenge and Bath, but also about many other things along the way. He has mistaken "Gold" for "Metal", or "a slope" for "a hill", but that was not so much of a problem. Kevin also told me where I could have dinner.

元の翻訳
ジョンの妻です。USDAにあなたが依頼されているフォームを送りました。そのフォームに捺印の上、私にＥメールで返信していただきます。確認しておきたいのですが、これは私が日本で送らなければならないメールです。私はあなたのこともこのＥメールに追加します。
あなたがその猫たちを引き取ったらすぐにこのメールに返信して、私に知らせて下さい。よろしくお願いします。
添付しました、日本のとおるさん宛てに届けられたサーバルキャットに必要な健康証明のページをご確認下さい。
必要なものがお揃いでしたら、どうかご連絡下さい。ご助力ありがとうございました。

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ジョンの妻です。USDAにあなたが依頼されているフォームを送りました。USDAにはそのフォームに捺印の上、私にＥメールで返信していただきます。確認しておきたいのですが、これは私が日本で送らなければならないメールです。私はあなたのこともこのＥメールに追加しておきます。
あなたがその猫たちを引き取ったらすぐにこのメールに返信して、私に知らせて下さい。よろしくお願いします。
添付しました、日本のとおるさん宛てに届けられたサーバルキャットに必要な健康証明のページをご確認下さい。
必要なものがお揃いでしたら、どうかご連絡下さい。ご助力ありがとうございました。

元の翻訳
We apologize as the item arrives late.
The item sent from Japan to Germany might be stopped at the customs.
We will check it.
If you do not receive it until the 10th this month, we will refund you in full.
We appreciate your cooperation.

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We apologize it is taking long for the item to arrive.
The item sent from Japan to Germany might have been stopped at the customs.
We will investigate on this.
If you do not receive it before the 10th day of this month, we will refund you in full.
We appreciate your kind understanding.