Tan Wen Ying (wying29) — もらったレビュー

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Thank you for the explanation about timesheet. I have no more questions about the time sheet now.

It is also noted that the next invoice totaling $1000 will be listed in details based on the projects.

Thank you for your support and looking forward to continue working with you.

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Thank you for the explanation about the time sheet. I have no more questions about the time sheet now.

I also acknowledge that the next invoice totaling $1000 will be listed in details based on the projects [?].

Thank you for your support. I look forward to continuing to work with you.

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About Manekineko (beckoning cat)
In the past, cat was a lucky charm for silkworm culturing in the past as it exterminate rats which eat the agriculture product and silkworm, but it is now used as a lucky charm for business prosperity since silkworm culturing has deteriorated.
It brings wealth by raising its right hand (front limb) and attract people (customers) by raising its left hand (front limb).
Usually, it is calico cat but now there are more species for different purposes like love life (pink) or protection against evil (black) according to various rumours.
All in all, it is a cute talisman.

Among the products on the catalogue, there are available stocks for the following norens.
It is $00, including the shipment fee.

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What is a maneki-neko? (Lucky cat, fortune cat etc.: literally beckoning cat)
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In the past, cats were considered as a mascot of luck for the sericulture or the silkworm culture because they got rid of rats eating the agricultural products and the silkworms; however, they are considered as a mascot of luck, after declining of sericulture, mainly for the prosperous business↵

A common belief is that the right paw raised maneki-neko brings wealth and that of left paw raised brings people (customers).
Maneki-neko is commonly a calico cat, but the breeds are increasing in these days and having various meanings, though various rumors, including the one with rose pink as fate of love and that of with black as a talisman.
Anyway, they are the cute mascots of fortune.

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Among the products listed on the catalogue, we can provide the following shop curtains.
Price of them are at $○ including the shipping fee.↵

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Noted.
We will refund to you upon the cancellation of the order.
We will send the 20 Dollar or 2000 Yen by post to Australia.
Please tell us your preference.
Would you mind to tell us your address?

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Noted.
We will refund you as we cancelled your order.
We will send 20 dollars or 2,000 yen by Japan Post to Australia.
Please tell us your preference.
Would you mind telling us your address?

元の翻訳
Noted.
We will refund to you upon the cancellation of the order.
We will send the 20 Dollar or 2000 Yen by post to Australia.
Please tell us your preference.
Would you mind to tell us your address?

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Certainly.
We cancelled the order and the refund will be with you soon.
There are two options of sending cash to Australia using Japan post: 20 in dollars or 2000 in Japanese yen.
Please tell us your preference.
And would you mind to tell us your address?

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The monochrome was taken in 1986. It was taken from the front of Shinjuku Center towards the west. On the left is Kyo-o Plaza Hotel. In fact, I chose this location because Mt Fuji is visible for the spot. You can't really see it in the picture but you can find it faintly on the right of the building which is located at the far middle-left of the photo. When I found this on the picture, I recall the touching moment as I could see Mt Fuji from the ground among the cluster of the buildings, instead of a higher platform. Now, the Tokyo Government Office is built. The colour version was taken in 2011.

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The monochrome was taken in 1986. It was taken from the front of Shinjuku Center towards the west. On the left is Keio Plaza Hotel. In fact, I chose this location because Mt Fuji was visible for the spot. You can't really see it in the picture but you can find it faintly on the right of the building which is located at the far middle-left of the photo. When I found this on the picture, I recall the touching moment as I could see Mt Fuji from the ground among the cluster of the buildings, instead of a higher platform. Now, the Tokyo Government Office is built. The colour version was taken in 2011.

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The wallpapers will be added every Friday. The additional wallpaper will be reminded through push notification.

Method of Settings↵
Settings>Wallpaper/brightness>Wallpaper option>Camera roll

It is also possible to share the photos, so tell your friends about the photos you like!

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The wallpapers are added every Friday. When the wallpapers are added, we will send you push notifications.

Setting Method↵
Settings>Wallpaper/brightness>Select a Wallpaper>Camera roll

You can also share the photos, so tell your friends about the photos you like!

iOS7,iOS7 wallpapers,744x1392,starry sky, star,meteors,shooting star,horoscope,night sky,sky,night view, landscape,wallpaper,photo,camera,shooting,lock screen, background,image,celestial object, reception, receiving, changing, healing,beautiful,lovely

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Starry sky wallpaper for iOS7 Change to a comforting starry sky photo-wit free additional astronomic object and horoscope photos taken by single-lens reflex camera every week!

The wallpapers of the beautiful collection of the starry landscape photographer Norihiko Maeda, who is famous by his landscape photography blog, is now available for iPhone.
It beautiful starry sky wallpaper is optimized for iPhone 5, iOS7(744x1392pixels) onward.
Looking at at the breathtaking, dazzling stars, you will feel as if you are drawn into the mysterious universe.

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Starry sky wallpaper for iOS7 Change to a heeling starry sky photo-with free additional photos depicting celestial bodies and constellations , taken with a digital single lens reflex camera every week!

The wallpapers of the beautiful collection of the starry landscape photographer Norihiko Maeda, who is famous for his landscape photography blog, is now available for iPhone.
It beautiful starry sky wallpaper is optimized for iPhone 5, iOS7 (744 by 1392 pixels) and later.
Looking at these breathtaking, dazzling stars, you will feel as if you were drawn into the mysterious universe.

元の翻訳
马克史莱博，出生于1960年俄亥俄州辛辛那提省， 自十五岁高中毕业起就不间断地写作。他的作品中有几部被出版，其中包括非文学历险记，单人吊杆的梦想之剧外的太阳马戏团。他的第一部作品，流浪王子，以癌症病童的夏日营为背景，在十个国家出版并制成了一部电影。

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马克史莱博，出生于1960年俄亥俄州辛辛那提省， 自十五岁高中毕业起就不间断地写作。他的作品中有几部被出版，其中包括非小说类的历险记，单人吊杆的梦想之剧外的太阳马戏团。他的第一部作品，流浪王子，以癌症病童的夏日营为背景，在十个国家出版后改拍制一部电影。

元の翻訳
The merchandise is delivered on October 4th.
Due to your absence, it was retrieved.
Please request the post office for redelivery for the merchandise.
You will be able to receive it.
No worries

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The merchandise was delivered on October 4th.
Due to your absence, it was retrieved.
Please make a request to the post office for the re-delivery of the merchandise.
In doing so you will be able to receive it.
There is no need to worry.