Tearz (tearz) — もらったレビュー

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こんにちは、
申し訳ございませんが、残念なお知らせです。こちらの小包が誤って分類されてしまいました。
日本向けの大型荷物の中に含まれていなければならないのですが、
誤って他の梱包に入れられてしまいました。
数日以内には追跡いたします。
生産元から日本までの配送はおよそ1週間を要しますが、
今回は2週間ほどかかります。
心よりお詫び申し上げます。
宜しくお願い致します。
Jack

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こんにちは、
申し訳ございませんが、残念なお知らせです。こちらの小包が誤って分類されてしまいました。
日本向けの大型荷物の中に含まれていなければならないのですが、
誤って他の梱包に入れられてしまいました。
ですので、この小包は一度運送会社に戻され、その後日本に送られます。↵
数日以内には追跡いたします。
生産元から日本までの配送はおよそ1週間を要しますが、
今回は2週間ほどかかります。
心よりお詫び申し上げます。
宜しくお願い致します。
Jack

元の翻訳
Thank you for the information. I did not know about the website. I would imagine the contents of A and B are the same.
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I'm sorry but I don't quite understand your sayings since I am not a native English speaker.
Since Google Analytics is not compatible with Ajax measurement, trying with A would gain more access.

If the volume of posts commenting on A is increased, it may cause inconveniences to other users, so I will refrain from doing so.

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Thank you for the information. I did not know about the website. I would imagine the contents of A and B are the same.
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I'm sorry but I don't quite understand your sayings since I am not a native English speaker.
Since Google Analytics is not capable of Ajax measurement, trying with A would gain more access.

If the volume of posts commenting on A is increased, it may cause inconveniences to other users, so I will refrain from doing so.

元の翻訳
返品交換ポリシー
返品ポリシー（返金）

海外からのご注文分は返品対象外。
返品は30日以内有効。
商品は着用および改造不可、受領時と同じ状態であること。
商品は元のパッケージの状態で返品すること。万が一元のパッケージを処分してしまった場合は、同サイズのものを代用すること。
セール品の返品は不可
配送料及び手数料は返金対象外。Soludos®による製造時の（初期）不良あるいは品質不良による返品または商品交換が行われた場合は、靴の代金及び送料が返金される。

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返品交換ポリシー
返品ポリシー（返金）

海外からのご注文分は返品対象外。
返品は30日以内有効。
商品は着用および改造不可、受領時と同じ状態であること。
商品は元のパッケージの状態で返品すること。万が一元のパッケージを処分してしまった場合は、同サイズのものを代用すること。
セール品の返品は不可
配送料及び手数料は返金対象外。Soludos®による製造欠陥・品質不良が原因で、返品または商品交換が行われた場合は、靴の代金及び送料が返金される。

元の翻訳
販売御担当者様、

ご連絡ありがとうございます。

残念ながらご提供頂いた請求書は、在庫を購入したことを示す請求書ではないため御社の登録手続きを進めることができません。

サプライヤから在庫を購入したことを示す請求書をこちらにご提出下さいますようお願い致します。

こちらのメールに直接返信する形でそれらの文書をお送り下さい。

ご連絡お待ちしております。

The Amazon Payments Team （アマゾン支払チーム）

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販売御担当者様、

ご連絡ありがとうございます。

残念ながらご提供頂いた請求書は、在庫を購入したことを示す請求書ではないため御社の登録手続きを進めることができません。

製造業者から在庫を購入したことを示す請求書をこちらにご提出下さいますようお願い致します。

こちらのメールに直接返信する形でそれらの文書をお送り下さい。

ご連絡お待ちしております。

The Amazon Payments Team （アマゾン支払チーム）

元の翻訳
As you point out, Google Analytics cannot measure properly.
Probably the below analytical tool would work properly, and it's free of charge.
*Since I am not from an English speaking areas, I use the same product in th different language version.

My thoughts for the measurement is that the dwell time of IE and smart phone users are extremely short.
IE I guess is due to the bug as mentioned previously.

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As you pointed out, Google Analytics cannot measure properly.
The analytical tool I linked below would most likely work properly, and it's free of charge.
*Since English is not my native language, I use the same product in a different language.

My initial thoughts for the measurement is that the dwell time of IE and smart phone users are extremely short.
IE I guess is due to the bug I mentioned previously.

元の翻訳
こんにちは、
回答ありがとうございます。

返信が遅くなり申し訳ございません。
実際にこの問題を一緒に取り組んでいくことになります。大至急クレジットカード会社に連絡を取っていただけますか？

商品をそのままあずかって頂く場合のご迷惑料としておいくらであれば受け取っていただけますでしょうか？
こちらより提示できる金額は一番頑張ってGPB27となります。
もしご了承いただけない場合は返品をお願い致します。
商品返品部を確認後、返金させて頂きます。

（返品時は）DHL、FedEx、TNT、UPSなどをご使用にならないで下さい。
関税が高くなる場合、こちらで返品の品物の受領の署名が致しかねます。
下記配送先まで返品をお願い致します：

発送が完了次第、商品の追跡ができるよう、関連の追跡番号及びウェブサイトをご連絡下さい。
ご協力宜しくお願い致します。

良い一日を。

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こんにちは、
回答ありがとうございます。

返信が遅くなり申し訳ございません。
実際にこの問題を一緒に取り組んでいくことになります。↵
急いでクレジットカード会社にご連絡されたのはなぜですか？

商品をそのままあずかって頂く場合のご迷惑料としておいくらであれば受け取っていただけますでしょうか？
こちらより提示できる最大限の金額は27イギリスポンドとなります。
もしご了承いただけない場合は返品をお願い致します。
商品返品部を確認後、返金させて頂きます。

（返品時は）DHL、FedEx、TNT、UPSなどをご使用にならないで下さい。
関税が高くなる場合、こちらで返品の品物の受領の署名が致しかねます。
下記配送先まで返品をお願い致します：

発送が完了次第、商品の追跡ができるよう、関連の追跡番号及びウェブサイトをご連絡下さい。
ご協力宜しくお願い致します。

良い一日を。

元の翻訳
The program has been found and currently under modification.

- Until the aforementioned program is improved the current inventories are revised, the entire registration for new merchandises will be suspended.
- Upon uploading a new CSV file, an error check will be routinized and performed to see if any prohibited items are included within the data that was uploaded for real.
--> The headcount for the holistic data management will be filled to enhance future effeciency.

We have contacted the seller by email,
and the entire listed items were removed.
Thank you for your kind understanding.

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The program has been found and currently under modification.

- Until the aforementioned program is improved the current inventories are revised, the entire registration for new merchandises will be suspended.
- Upon uploading a new CSV file, an error check will be routinized and performed to see if any prohibited items are included within the data that was uploaded for real.
--> The headcount for the holistic data management will be filled to enhance future effeciency.

We have contacted the seller by email,
and the entire list of listed items were removed.
Thank you for your kind understanding.

元の翻訳
With regard to the lessen scheduled at a cafe in Shinjuku on Sept 1, could I postpone it?
Things at work has started getting busy all of the sudden, and I am likely to be working on weekends until the end of Oct.
I was supposed to take a trip to Singapore next month, but it's likely to be cancelled...
I will get in touch with you once things started going back to normal. If our schedue meet then, I would like to take your lesson again.
I am very sorry for the inconvenience caused.
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Could you please schedule a lesson for me from 14:00 on 9/6, or 18:00 on 9/7? Would the venue be okay to meet you at ~ station?

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With regard to the lesson scheduled at a cafe in Shinjuku on Sept 1, could I postpone it?
Things at work has started getting busy all of a sudden, and I am likely to be working on weekends until the end of Oct.
I was supposed to take a trip to Singapore next month, but it's likely to be cancelled...
I will get in touch with you once things start getting back to normal. If our schedules meet then, I would like to take your lesson again.
I am very sorry for the inconvenience caused.
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Could you please schedule a lesson for me from 14:00 on 9/6, or 18:00 on 9/7? Would the venue be okay to meet you at ~ station?

元の翻訳
It seems that my transaction failed due to the attempt with an expired credit card.
Please charge me urgently then I can settle the payment with another credit immediately.
My apologies for bothering you repeatedly.

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It seems that my transaction failed due to the attempt to pay with an expired credit card.
Please charge me urgently then I can settle the payment with another credit immediately.
My apologies for bothering you repeatedly.

元の翻訳
It seems that my transaction failed due to the attempt with an expired credit card.
Please charge me urgently then I can settle the payment with another credit immediately.
My apologies for bothering you repeatedly.

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It seems that my transaction failed because I attempted to pay with an expired credit card.
Please charge me urgently so I can settle the payment with another credit immediately.
My apologies for bothering you repeatedly.

元の翻訳
Have you had a chance to ship the merchandise already?
If completed, kindly advise the tracking number.

Your prompt response is appreciate as I am considering an additional order.

If my order has happened to be unshipped as of yet, since it's too late, I would request for a full refund and like you to know this would be it.

* If we do not hear from you by 23:59 on September 1 at Japan Standard Time, this case will be reported to "PayPal".

*

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Have you had a chance to ship the merchandise already?
If completed, kindly inform me of the tracking number.

Your prompt response is appreciated as I am considering an additional order.

If my order has happened to be unshipped as of yet, since it's too late, I would request for a full refund and like you to know this would be it.

* If we do not hear from you by 23:59 on September 1 at Japan Standard Time, this case will be reported to "PayPal".

*

元の翻訳
Tomorrow, I will request to change the due date for the cheque. However, the bank he has business with says the cheque is valid still after passing the due date. Since I will be on leave from next week, I would like to take over those merchandises in the warehouse within the next few days. Would you please let me know the contact person at the ware house and his contact information? Without receiving them, we won't be able to pay for the next purchase. We are sorry for bothering you, but please proceed to ship those inventories in the warehouse to us at the earliest opportunity.

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Tomorrow, I will request to change the due date for the cheque. However, the bank he has business with says the cheque is valid still after passing the due date. Since I will be on leave from next week, I would like to take over those merchandises in the warehouse within the next few days. Would you please let me know the contact person at the warehouse and his contact information? If we do not receive these items, we won't be able to pay for the next purchase. We are sorry for bothering you, but please proceed to ship the merchandise in the warehouse to us at the earliest opportunity.

元の翻訳
If I ordered today, when would it be delivered?
I would like to receive it in a week or so, and could you expedite the shipment?
I am willing to pay for the shipping surcharge.

Would it work with EMS to get it delivered within 4 to 7 days?

Thank you in advance.

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If I ordered today, when would it be delivered?
I would like to receive it in a week or so, and could you expedite the shipment?
I am willing to pay for the additional shipping charge for express shipment.

Would it work with EMS to get it delivered within 4 to 7 days?

Thank you in advance.