Tearz (tearz) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
I appreciate your proposal very much, but as a result of our internal discussion, we recognize that we need to confirm the item's condition and return it to the supplier.
We feel very sorry to bother you, but would you please accept my proposal?
As soon as the item is delivered to us, we will immediately issue you a refund for $658.94 + $50 + return shipping fee you will be paying.
Please be sure to insure the luggage as we will not be able to refund in case of lost on its way back.
We will let you know our address if you accept this proposal.

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I appreciate your proposal very much, but as a result of our internal discussion, we recognize that we need to confirm the item's condition and return it to the supplier.
We are very sorry for having to take up your time, but could you please accept my proposal?
As soon as the item is delivered to us, we will immediately issue you a refund for $658.94 + $50 + return shipping fee which you will be paying for.
Please be sure to insure the luggage as we will not be able to make refund in case it is lost on its way back.
We will let you know our address if you accept this proposal.

元の翻訳
There are lots of things in Japan that are hard to find in the world.
Amongst of all, I would like to introduced to you about shrines.
The image is of a shrine in Kyoto.
Although it is only a part of it, there are many Japanese lanterns situated infront of this.
Other than this, there are so many kinds of shrines and one of them enshrines a fox as a deity.
A shrine is also a place for relaxation and refreshment, so I feel very calmer there.
If you visit Japan, this is one place I would like you to see by all means!

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There are a lot of things in Japan that are hard to find in the world.
Amongst these, I would like to tell you about Shinto shrines.
The image is of a shrine in Kyoto.
Although it only shows a part of it, there are many Japanese lanterns situated in front of it.
Other than this, there are so many kinds of shrines and one of them enshrines a fox as a deity.
A shrine is also a place for relaxation and refreshment, so I feel much calmer there.
If you visit Japan, this is one place I would like you to see by all means!

元の翻訳
これは馬鹿げているとお思いになるかもしれませんが、私の母からの要望です。

彼女はわさびが大好きで、代金をお支払してあなたからいくつか配送して頂くことは可能でしょうか？日本のわさびが一番だと彼女は思っています。彼女にしてみると、こちらで生産されるものはあまり良くないようです。

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馬鹿げているとお思いになるかもしれませんが、これは私の母からの要望です。

彼女はわさびが大好きなのですが、代金と配送料をお支払いすることであなたからいくつか送って頂くことは可能でしょうか？日本のわさびが一番だと彼女は思っています。彼女にしてみると、こちらで生産されるものはあまり良くないようです。

元の翻訳
Hello,
Thank you for shopping with us this time.
We are sorry, but we have shipped the same item twice due to the shipping miss.
Please accept our sincere apologies.
Of course you needn't return it to us.
And if it troubles you, you may keep and use it without disposal.
We shall be careful lest it would not happen again, ↵
and we would be very pleased to serve you again.
We are very glad to have met you through eBay this time.
Should you have any questions about Japanese products, please don't hesitate to contact us.

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Hello,
Thank you for using our store on this occasion.
We are truly sorry, but due to a delivery error we have shipped the same item twice.
Please accept our sincere apologies.
It goes without saying that returning the item will not be necessary.
Should it be a bother to dispose of it, there is no problem in using it since it is brand new.
We will make sure something like this does not happen again, so we would be delighted if used our store again.
We are very glad to have met you through eBay this time.
Should you have any questions about our Japanese products, please do not hesitate to contact us.

元の翻訳
The content of this customers' feedback is very questionable. Isn't there a possibility that a wrong item was shipped to this customer?
Firstly, we have never delivered item A in the past.
Also, we have neither the stock of A in our warehouse nor an employee that uses A.
Further, the item A is packed in the manufacturer exclusive cardboard box for shipment. The possiblity of getting another item mixed up is zero percent. Therefore, not only deleting the feedback rating, I strongly demand foro the comment deletion.

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The content of this customers' feedback is very questionable. Isn't there a possibility that a wrong item was shipped to this customer?
Firstly, we have never delivered item A in the past.
Also, we have neither the stock of A in our warehouse nor an employee that uses A.
Further, the item A is packed in the manufacturer exclusive cardboard box for shipment. The possiblity of getting another item mixed up is zero percent. Therefore, not only deleting the feedback rating, I strongly demand for the comment deletion.

元の翻訳
I am sorry to bother you in the midst of your busyness, but I hope to get in touch with you more closely.

I get very anxious without hearing any news from you.

Also, regarding the item, I accept your request.

Please ship it as soon as we receive it.

I would like to make it in November somehow.

I am glad to know that you are arranging additional 4 pieces for the inconvenience.

I have faith in you.

As for those inventories you have received already, please ship them today.

The item sells well towards the end of the year.
I am considering to place an additional order,
so your prompt actions are appreciated.

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I am sorry to bother you in the midst of your [busyness] (not a word), but I hope to get in touch with you more [frequently].

I am sorry to bother you even though I know you must be busy......↵
↵
I get very anxious if I do not hear any news from you.

Also, regarding the item, I accept your request ( no request was made) ↵
Regarding the items, I have understood about them.

Please ship it as soon as [you] receive it.

I would like them/it to make it by November somehow.

I am glad to know that you are arranging additional 4 pieces for the inconvenience.

I have faith in you.

As for those inventories you have received already, please ship them today.

The item sells well towards the end of the year.
I am considering placing an additional order,
so your prompt actions are appreciated.

元の翻訳
ノーノーを受け取り24時間充電しました。
電源が入らず、電源プラグにさして電源ボタンを押しても青いライトが点滅するだけです。

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ノーノーを受け取り、24時間充電しました。
電源が入らず、電源プラグにさして電源ボタンを押してもライトが青く点滅するだけです。

元の翻訳
毎週３こずつ購入する場合、販売して頂けますか？skx007腕時計購入が月単位ですと12個となります。

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毎週３個ずつ購入する場合、販売して頂けますか？skx007腕時計購入が月単位ですと12個となります。