Tearz (tearz) — もらったレビュー

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Lisa, I just checked your post (on Facebook), and it made me very happy.
What a nice and pleasant surprise that you wrote it in Japanese!
Thank you for providing an opportunity for exposing Olivia to Japanese from miles away.
I think the artistic sense of your friend who made it is nice~♪ The white shelf is looking really good♪
You will have more books to fill the shelf. From Japan, I will send a couple of recommendable books, too!

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Lisa, I just checked your post (on Facebook), and it made me very happy.
What a nice and pleasant surprise that you wrote it in Japanese!
Thank you for providing an opportunity for exposing Olivia to Japanese from even though you are miles away.
I think the artistic sense of your friend who made it is nice~♪ The white shelf is looking really good♪
You will have more books to fill the shelf. From Japan, I will send a couple of recommendable books, too!

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I apologize for the belated response. Since the offer comes with a free shipping, we are not unable to apply $300 discount. The best we could offer is $2,150. We have relisted the item after marked down the price, so please purchase it if you like. Also, please be aware that this item is set with an option that when you settle the payment via PayPal, you could bid it simultaneously (in other words, you cannot bid the item unless the payment is settled).

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I apologize for the belated response. Since the offer comes with a free shipping, we are unable to apply the $300 discount. The best we could offer is $2,150. We have relisted the item after we marked down the price, so please purchase it if you like. Also, please be aware that this item is set with an option that when you settle the payment via PayPal, you could bid it simultaneously (in other words, you cannot bid the item unless the payment is settled).

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2 questions for you.

1. Could the default setting be changed? For example, leaving the items XYZ ticked in the initial condition when a new table is created... and the like.
2. Would the speed of page display related to the capacity of the importing EXCEL file?

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2 questions for you.

1. Could the default setting be changed? For example, leaving the items XYZ ticked in the initial condition when a new table is created... and the like.
2. Would the speed of page display be related to the size of the imported EXCEL file?

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（フランス語と混ざってしまっているので憶測も含めた和訳となります。予めご了承下さいませ。）↵
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何故それが通らなかったのかがわかりました。
申し訳ありません、この入札に関して私は過ちを犯していました。銀行に自分の残高を照会した際、1800ユーロあったのですが、残念ながら今回の購入金額には足りません。もし差し支えなければそちらでこの販売を中止して頂いても構いません。何故なら私が間違えてしまったため初回はその合計を調整することができなかったので、2度目のお願いをしている次第です。
お返事お待ちしております。
宜しくお願い致します。
Claude

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何故それが通らなかったのかがわかりました。
申し訳ありません、この入札に関して私は過ちを犯していました。銀行に自分の残高を照会した際、1800ユーロあったのですが、残念ながら今回の購入金額には足りません。もし差し支えなければそちらでこの販売を中止して頂いても構いません。何故なら私が間違えてしまったため初回はその合計を調整することができなかったので、2度目のお願いをしている次第です。
お返事お待ちしております。
宜しくお願い致します。
Claude

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We have been running this business for 5 years now, and its operation and administration are conducted under this address.
X

Among those several sales channels we have, the main website of the channel we sell the most is follows:
X

We are the member of the following wholesale website, and it is the main supplier we purchase our items from. We purchase required quantity of items from this supplier in advance, take care of the inventory at our end, then ship to customers accordingly.
X

We use Japan Post for shipments, and a tracking number is provided each time we ship an item. Cheap items does not come with a tracking number. The below is an example.

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We have been running this business for 5 years now, and its operation and administration are conducted under this address.
X

Among those several sales channels we have, the main website of the channel we sell the most is as follows:
X

We are the member of the following wholesale website, and it is the main supplier we purchase our items from. We purchase required quantity of items from this supplier in advance, take care of the inventory at our end, then ship to customers accordingly.
X

We use Japan Post for shipments, and a tracking number is provided each time we ship an item. Cheap items does not come with a tracking number. The below is an example.

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Thank you for your support.
Would you please wait for 4 more days?

We deeply apologize for the inconvenience that has been caused to you for this matter.

Due to our mistake, we are sorry to make ○ and ■ feel worried and uncomfortable.

As we support international transactions, we shall make sure to complete our through support till the shipment is completed in order for regaining your trust.

Thank you and kind regards,

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Thank you for your support.
Would you please wait for 4 more days?

We deeply apologize for the inconvenience that has been caused to you for this matter.

Due to our mistake, we are sorry to make ○ and ■ feel worried and uncomfortable.

As we support international transactions, we shall make sure to complete our thorough support till the shipment is completed in order for regaining your trust.

Thank you and kind regards,

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Thank you for your reply.
I have chacked the inventory chart.

Please allow me to ask you, what are the discount rate from the prices listed here?
To me they all appear more expensive than those sold on Amazone. If Amazon sells them cheaper, we will order from there. However in that case the handling fee will be charged, so I don't see the merit for both of us.
Currently from the company we have business with, I purchase 8926OB as 50 pcs per case for $70.
We would like to purchase for a better price than this from you.

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Thank you for your reply.
I have checked the inventory chart.

Please allow me to ask you, what is the discount rate from the prices listed here?
To me they all appear more expensive than those sold on Amazon. If Amazon sells them cheaper, we will order from there. However in that case the handling fee will be charged to your company, so I don't see the merit for both of us.
Currently from the company we have business with, I purchase 8926OB as 50 pcs per case for $70.
We would like to purchase for a better price than this from you.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
I have chacked the inventory chart.

Please allow me to ask you, what are the discount rate from the prices listed here?
To me they all appear more expensive than those sold on Amazone. If Amazon sells them cheaper, we will order from there. However in that case the handling fee will be charged, so I don't see the merit for both of us.
Currently from the company we have business with, I purchase 8926OB as 50 pcs per case for $70.
We would like to purchase for a better price than this from you.

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Thank you for your reply.
I have checked the inventory chart.

Please allow me to ask you, what is the discount rate from the prices listed here?
To me they all appear more expensive than those sold on Amazon. If Amazon sells them cheaper, we will order from there. However in that case the handling fee will be charged, so I don't see the merit for both of us.
Currently from the company we have business with, I purchase 8926OB as 50 pcs per case for $70.
We would like to purchase for a better price than this from you.

元の翻訳
* Re: Inventory shortage issue

We will perform a major revision on our inventory management system. As for our inventory, we shall revise our inventory confirmation based upon shipment from every three days to every day. By verying with the inventory report, we will strive to minimize the order cancellation, too.

Please let us know should there be any areas of improvement.

We deeply apologize for the inconvenient that has been caused. We will further endeavour to attain our customer satisfaction, so your kind understanding is appreciated.

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* Re: Inventory shortage issue

We will perform a major revision on our inventory management system. As for our inventory, we shall revise our inventory confirmation based upon shipment from every three days to every day. By verifiying with the inventory report, we will strive to minimize the order cancellations, too.

Please let us know should there be any areas of improvement.

We deeply apologize for the inconvenience that has been caused. We will further endeavour to attain our customer satisfaction, so your kind understanding is appreciated.

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I am sorry it has taken ~ days to reply to your last e-mail. As I am leaving this job at the end of the month, I was tied up with the related works.

It has been completely cold in Japan, and wearing a coat is a must nowadays. How about your country?

Reading your English e-mail is informative for me. In particular I didn't know the expression ~. Such a wonderful terms, so I kept them in the memo, lol.

The best gift that flattered me the most was an expresso machine. It has brought me a joy to make a cappuccino every morning. It doesn't go as good as the one they make at a cafe, though.

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I am sorry it has taken ~ days to reply to your last e-mail. As I am leaving this job at the end of the month, I was tied up with the related works.

It has been completely cold in Japan, and wearing a coat is a must nowadays. How about your country?

Reading your English e-mail is informative for me. In particular I didn't know the expression ~. Such wonderful terms, so I kept them in the memo, lol.

The gift that flattered me the most was an expresso machine. It has brought me a joy to make a cappuccino every morning. It doesn't go as good as the one they make at a cafe, though.

元の翻訳
2014年11月末前にイギリスの住所に宛てた配送をアレンジしてください。
もし追加配送費用が生じるようであれば勿論お支払します。
いろいろとありがとうございます。あなたのサポートとお心遣いに感謝しております。
敬具。

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2014年11月末前にイギリスの住所に宛てた配送を手配してください。
もし追加配送費用が生じるようであれば勿論お支払します。
いろいろとありがとうございます。あなたのサポートとお心遣いに感謝しております。
敬具。

元の翻訳
こちらのLes Paulを本日受け取りました。単刀直入にいいますと、返品もしくは一部返金を希望します。
ご存知の通り、主軸台はLes Paulの部品の中でも最も壊れやすい箇所です。腕利きのディーラーやバイヤーであればまずこの部分に目を向けるでしょう。

このギターをケースから取り出した時、主軸台の背面に修理痕があるのをすぐに見つけました。低い側の主軸台の基礎の部分から主軸台をまたいで６弦のチューナーのすぐ真下のところまで続くおよそ２インチ（約5.08cm）の長さのはっきりとわかるひびです。
中古ギターを購入する際、ベルトのバックルの痕や錆び、あるいはその他通常の使用によりついてしまった印であれば良しとしています。破損した主軸台の場合は、セラーが販売の際事前に言及していない限りは承服いたしかねます。

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こちらのLes Paulを本日受け取りました。単刀直入にいいますと、返品もしくは一部返金を希望します。
ご存知の通り、ヘッドはLes Paulの部品の中でも最も壊れやすい箇所です。腕利きのディーラーやバイヤーであればまずこの部分に目を向けるでしょう。

このギターをケースから取り出した時、ヘッドの背面に修理痕があるのをすぐに見つけました。低音弦側のヘッドの基礎の部分からヘッドをまたいで６弦のチューナーのすぐ真下のところまで続くおよそ２インチ（約5.08cm）の長さのはっきりとわかるひびです。
中古ギターを購入する際、ベルトのバックルの痕やフレットの磨耗、あるいはその他通常の使用によりついてしまった傷/汚れであれば良しとしています。ヘッドの破損の場合は、セラーが販売の際事前に言及していない限りは承服いたしかねます。