Austien (t1314m) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
こんにちは、祝日のため、いろいろな商品の在庫が切れたので、私はパッケージの中にいくつかの余分を送った。↵
工場では２週間程度の休業があるので、今日もある商品が取り扱えない。ご了承ください。

修正後
こんにちは、祝日のため、いろいろな商品の在庫が切れたので、私はパッケージの中にいくつかの追加を送りました。工場は２週間程度の休業しているため、今日もまだあるモデルが取り扱えません。ご了承ください。

元の翻訳
It is the same temperature here in Tokyo. I do not have the cycling gear that is suitable for mid winter. The only winter gear that I have are Swobo Merino Beanie and DeFeet. Are you going to New York? I went to New York this June. It was raining most of the days and it was really cold. But I still think New York is a good place and want to live there. During the time when I was in New York, I went to Whole Foods Market like 10 times. The market has a lot of things that I like. (Laugh)

修正後
It's the same temperature here in Tokyo. I don't have cycling gear that is suitable for midwinter! The only winter gear that I have is a Swobo Merino Beanie and DeFeet. Are you going to New York? I went to New York this June. It was raining most of the days and it was really cold. But I still think New York is a good place and want to live there. During the time when I was in New York, I went to Whole Foods Market like 10 times. They have a lot of things that I like. lol

元の翻訳
To obtain the exact location
1) Use GPS
2) There are two settings to detect the network (Wifi and mobile base station)
In order to use kiss more convenience, checking both settings are highly recommended.

When Wifi setting is connected successfully, the exact location can be detected.
When you checked the box of the wifi setting, even the wifi connection is at off status, just turned it on when you need to know the location and you can turn it off afterwards

修正後
To obtain location information
1) Use GPS
2) There are two settings to detect the network (wi-fi and mobile base station)
In order to use kiss more conveniently, checking both settings is highly recommended.

When the wi-fi setting is set to on, location can be detected more accurately.
If you check the box of the wi-fi setting, even if the wi-fi connection is set to off, it will change to on while acquiring location information then return to off afterwards

元の翻訳
To obtain the exact location
1) Use GPS
2) There are two settings to detect the network (Wifi and mobile base station)
In order to use kiss more convenience, checking both settings are highly recommended.

When Wifi setting is connected successfully, the exact location can be detected.
When you checked the box of the wifi setting, even the wifi connection is at off status, just turned it on when you need to know the location and you can turn it off afterwards

修正後
To obtain the exact location
1) Use GPS
2) There are two settings to detect the network (Wifi and mobile base station)
In order to use kiss more convenience, checking both settings are highly recommended.

When Wifi setting is connected successfully, the exact location can be detected.
When you checked the box of the wifi setting, even the wifi connection is at off status, just turn it on when you need to know the location and you can turn it off afterwards

元の翻訳
それはおかしいと思います。ギターの表を写真で送っていただきませんか？

修正後
それはとてもおかしいと思います。ギターの表全体が見える写真を送っていただけませんか？