Susumu Fukuhara (susumu-fukuhara) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
I inquired to the server company, and they said that permission was 600 by default.
They also said that if we changed the script of PHP, it was going to work.

May I ask you the support?

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I inquired the server company, and they said that permission was 600 by default.
They also said that if we changed the script of PHP, it was going to work.

May I ask you for the support?

元の翻訳
I will also order Bearing Mount and screw of A which I asked for in the previous e-mail.
The used product will be fine as you suggested.
There is no problem with the parts used in returned A.
Please sell it as cheap as possible.
Please enter the amount of money in the invoice.

Has B been arrived?
I would like you to ship them together with the products of this order, if possible.

修正後
I will also order Bearing Mount and screw of A which I asked for in the previous e-mail.
The used product you have suggested will be fine.
There is no problem with the parts used in returned A.
Please show me your best quote,
and let us have the invoice attached with a price list.

Has B been arrived?
I would like you to ship them together with the products of this order, if possible.

元の翻訳
I also would like to order the bearing mount and screw of A as I requested previous email.
The used one is all right for me as you suggested.
There is no problem if it is the returned parts used for A.
Please give me at lower price as much as possible and indicate it on the invoice.

Have you obtain B?
If it is possible, I would like to request you to ship them together with items I ordered this time.

修正後
I also would like to order the bearing mount and screw of A as I requested in our previous email.
The used one you have recommended is all right for me.
There is no problem if they are the returned parts used for A.
Please give me your best quote as much as possible and show me on the invoice.

Have you obtained B?
If it is possible, I would like to request you to ship them together with the items I ordered this time.

元の翻訳
I will order Bearing Mount and screw of A as I asked by a previous mail.
It is OK for the used one as you suggested.
There is no problem with a part which was used for the returned A.
Please sell it as cheap as you can. Please show the price in an invoice.

Has the B already delivered?
If it is possible, I hope you to send it with the product together of this time.

修正後
I will order Bearing Mount and screw of A as I asked by a previous mail.
It is OK for the used one as you recommended.
There is no problem with a part which was used for the returned A.
Please sell them at your best price. Please quote us the price in an invoice.

Has the B already delivered?
If it is possible, I hope you to send it with the product together of this time.

元の翻訳
I place an order of bearing mount and screw of A that I had asked in the last email.
The used one that you had suggested is fine.
The parts that had been used by A and returned is fine.
I ask for you to sell it as inexpensive as possible, and list the sales amount in the invoice.

Have you received B?
If you can, I would like you to send it with the item that I order this time.

修正後
I place an order of bearing mount and screw of A that I had asked in the last email.
The used ones that you had recommended will suffice.
and so will the parts that had been used by A and was returned.
I ask for you to sell them as inexpensive as possible, and list the sales amount in the invoice.

Have you received B?
If you can, I would like you to send it with the item that I order this time.

元の翻訳
Today I heard about the damage compensation from post office in Japan.
Although post office in Japan has already contacted the post office in USA, the Japanese post office said that the post office in USA worked slowly for the damage compensation.
You must go to the post office to make the payment of the compensation faster.

If you compensate for me via Ebay, you will lose 492 dollars as sales amount of the item.
But if the post office compensate for me, you do not lose it.
You will receive a large benefit in this matter, so I ask you to go to the post office and negotiate to make the arrangement of the damage compensation faster.

If this is solved, I would be glad to feed back to you positively.

修正後
Today I heard about the compensation for damages from post office in Japan.
Although post office in Japan has already contacted the post office in USA, the Japanese post office said that the post office in USA is slow in working for the compensation.
You must go to the post office to make the payment of the compensation faster.

If you compensate for me via Ebay, you will lose 492 dollars as sales amount of the item.
But if the post office compensate for me, you do not lose it.
You will receive a large benefit in this matter, so I ask you to go to the post office and negotiate to make the arrangement of the damage compensation faster.

If this is solved, I would be glad to feed back to you positively.

元の翻訳
Today, I heard the status of the damages from the Japan Post Office. The United States Post Office has been already contacted by the Japanese side, but it seems that the United States post office work is slow when it comes to damages.
In order to get the payment soon, it is necessary that you go to the US post office.
If you claim for compensation through ebay, you will lost the $ 492 sale money, but if you claim compensation from me through the post office, you will not lost the sale money.
I think this method is better for you, so I would recommend you that you go to the US post office and carry out the procedure to get compensation for damages.
Once this is resolved I will be glad to give you a good feedback.

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Today, I heard the status of the damages from the Japan Post Office. The United States Post Office has been already contacted by the Japanese side, but it seems that the United States post office work is slow when it comes to damages.
In order to get the payment soon, it is necessary that you go to the US post office.
If you claim for compensation through ebay, you will lose the $ 492.00 sales money, but if you claim compensation from me through the post office, you will not lose the sales money.
I think this method is better for you, so I would recommend you that you go to the US post office and carry out the procedure to get compensation for damages.
Once this is resolved I will be glad to give you a good feedback.

元の翻訳
Today, I heard the situation of the compensation for damages from the Japanese post office. We, the Japanese side, have already contacted the American post office, but the Japanese post office says, post offices in the United States are low in working of the compensation for damages.
It is necessary for you to go to the post office to let payment of the compensation complete early.
You would lose your 492 dollars of proceeds of the product when you pay to me through ebay, but you would not lose proceeds if compensation is completed by the post office to me.
I want you to go to the post office and talk them to complete the procedure of the compensation for damages immediately because there is also a great merit for you.

If this is settled, I will give a good feedback for you with pleasure.

修正後
Today, I heard the situation of the compensation for damages from the Japanese post office. We, the Japanese side, have already contacted the American post office, but the Japanese post office says, post offices in the United States are slow in working of the compensation for damages.
It is necessary for you to go to the post office to expedite the payment of the compensation.
You would lose your 492 dollars of proceeds of the product when you pay to me through ebay, but you would not lose proceeds if compensation is completed by the post office to me.
I want you to go to the post office and talk them to complete the procedure of the compensation for damages immediately because there is also a great merit for you.

If this is settled, I will give a good feedback for you with pleasure.

元の翻訳
This item is a Japanese item, the manual is in Japanese. It is a SEIKO radio clock it a model that can be exported to US, Germany and China.

修正後
This item is made in Japan and its manual is in Japanese. It is a SEIKO radio clock model that can be exported to US, Germany and China.

元の翻訳
This is a Japanese production. The mannul is only Japanese. Seiko radio control watch is available to use in Japan, America, Germany, and China.

修正後
This is a Japanese product. The manual is only in Japanese. Seiko radio control watch is available to use in Japan, America, Germany, and China.

元の翻訳
1. There is a trace of a leakage in the battery chamber of the grip.
A part of the shutter speed dial is missing. It has no practical problem when in use.

2. The appearance of the body and the part inside the lens are like new, but there is an error message when pressing the shutter button. Please purchase this item if you can fix the problems or need the parts.

修正後
1. There is a trace of a leakage in the battery chamber of the grip.
A part of the shutter speed dial is missing. It has no practical problem when in use.

2. The appearance of the body and the part inside the lens are like new, but there is an error message when pressing the shutter button. Please purchase this item if you can fix the problems or take the parts you need out of it.

元の翻訳
以下のアイテム

MOQ: 20個から100個
価格: 　各30ドル×20　600ドル＋35ドル (DHL またはTNT Express)＋　20ドル ( 手数料 ) = 655ドル
準備ができて、在庫を持っています。決済が確認出来次第、次の営業日に出荷させていただきます。
パイパルにてお支払いいただきます。パイパルのメールを教えて頂いたら、請求書を送ることができます

何かわからないことがありましたら、遠慮なく連絡してください
お返事を待ちしております

修正後
以下のアイテム

MOQ: 20個から100個
価格: 　各30USドル×20　600USドル＋35USドル (DHL またはTNT Express)＋　20USドル ( 手数料 ) = 655USドル
準備ができて、在庫を持っています。決済が確認出来次第、次の営業日に出荷させていただきます。
パイパルにてお支払いいただきます。パイパルのメールを教えて頂いたら、請求書を送ることができます

何かわからないことがありましたら、遠慮なく連絡してください
お返事を待ちしております

元の翻訳
下記の商品：

最小注文数量：２０－１００ｐｃｓ

価格：USD３０．００／ｐｃｓｘ２０＝USD６００．００＋USD３５．００（DHLかTNTエクスプレス）＋USD２０．００（手数料）＝USD６５５．００

商品は入庫しました。入金次第次の平時に発送します。
Paypalで支払いできます。貴方のPaypalメールアドレスを教えてください、そしたらPaypalを通じて”リクエストマニー”を送ります。

もし他に何か問題があれば教えてください
ご返事をお待ちしております

修正後
下記の商品：

最小注文数量：２０－１００個

価格：USD３０．００／個ｘ２０＝USD６００．００＋USD３５．００（DHLかTNTエクスプレス）＋USD２０．００（手数料）＝USD６５５．００

商品は入庫しました。入金次第次の営業日に発送します。
Paypalで支払いできます。貴方のPaypalメールアドレスを教えてください、そしたらPaypalを通じて”請求書”を送ります。

もし他に何か問題があれば教えてください
ご返事をお待ちしております

元の翻訳
以下の商品について：

MOQ 20～100個
価格：30USドル×20＝600USドル＋35USドル（DHLもしくはTNTエクスプレス）＋20USドル（手数料）＝総合計655USドル

在庫はあります。一度支払いが完了すると、翌営業日までに発送します。
支払いはPaypalが利用可能です。Paypal口座のメールアドレスをお知らせいただければ、Paypalで「代金のリクエスト」をお送りします。

その他ご質問などありましたらお気軽にお問合せください。
良いお返事をお待ちしています。

修正後
以下の商品について：

MOQ（最低注文数量） 20～100個
価格：30USドル×20＝600USドル＋35USドル（DHLもしくはTNTエクスプレス）＋20USドル（手数料）＝総合計655USドル

在庫は十分あります。お支払い完了後、翌営業日までに発送します。
支払いはPaypalが利用可能です。Paypal口座のメールアドレスをお知らせいただければ、Paypalで「代金のリクエスト」をお送りします。

その他ご質問などありましたらお気軽にお問合せください。
良いお返事をお待ちしています。

元の翻訳
I have paid a total of $ 567.55, why refund is only $ 492?
(I accepted $492 because I thought the return of the product was not required. But I found it out the needs of the product return after accepted your offer.)
If the product to be returned, you should return full amount of $567.55.
※ I understand the rules of ebay that I have to pay the return shipping fee, however it is the negligence of the seller, I cannot agree to pay the shipping cost at the time of purchase.
I am also a seller, and I always refund in full if there was a problem with the goods.

修正後
I have paid a total of $ 567.55, why refund is only $ 492.00?
(I accepted $492.00 because I thought the return of the product was not required. But I found it out the need of the product return after I accepted your offer.)
If the product to be returned, you should return full amount of $567.55.
※ I understand the rules of ebay that I have to pay the return shipping fee, however it is the negligence of the seller, I cannot agree to pay the shipping cost at the time of purchase.
I am also a seller, and I always refund in full if there was a problem with the goods.

元の翻訳
Although I paid the amount at $567.55, why the amount of refund was $492.99?
(I accepted your offer of the refund at $492.00 because I thought it was not necessary to return the item. I noticed it was necessary to return the item after accepting your offer for the refund.)
If it is necessary to return the item, should you pay back the amount at $567.55 I paid?
* I do understand that buyers are responsible for the return shipping charge under the eBay rule, but it is not a business practice that I absorb the return shipping charge because of seller’s negligence.
I am also a seller and I issue a full refund including the shipping charge if there is a problem about items.

修正後
Although I paid the amount at $567.55, why the amount of refund was $492.00?
(I accepted your offer of the refund at $492.00 because I thought it was not necessary to return the item. I noticed it was necessary to return the item after accepting your offer for the refund.)
If it is necessary to return the item, should you pay back the amount at $567.55 I paid?
* I do understand that buyers are responsible for the return shipping charge under the eBay rule, but it is not a business practice that I absorb the return shipping charge because of seller’s negligence.
I am also a seller and I would issue a full refund including the shipping charge if there is a problem about items.

元の翻訳
Why I only get the refund of $492, while I payed $567.55 totally.
(No return of the item is needed, that is why I accepted offer wiht the refund of $492. However, I note that the item need to be returned after I accept the offer)
Is there no doubt that full amount $ 567.55 I paid should be refund ,as long as necessary item return?
※I understand I should pay the shippment fare to return the item, which is specified by Ebay rule. However, it doesn't make any sense the shippment fare of buyying it, due to the seller's mistake.
If I were the seller, full amount should be refund, if it is an item issue.

修正後
Why did I only get the refund of $492, while I paid $567.55.
(I thought no return of the item is needed, that is why I accepted offer with the refund of $492. However, I noticed that the item need to be returned after I accepted the offer)
Isn't it evident that full amount $ 567.55 I paid should be refunded now that the necessary item was returned?
※I understand I should pay the shipment fare to return the item, which is specified by Ebay rule. However, it doesn't make any sense the shipment fare of buying it, due to the seller's mistake.
If I were the seller, I would refund the full amount if there's something wrong with the item.

元の翻訳
BIRTH is the birth-of-the-universe-theme sugoroku game.
Players earn points by moving the pieces with the dice to put the dice in five areas.
Let's win the highest score by the sum of the relative and absolute scores!

2) Make change to the calculation rule of relative score as follows.
After compares the number of dice of each color in each area, the player who has the largest number of same colored dice earns points as the sum of the dice.
If there are more than one player having the largest number of dice a player with the lowest total of the dice wins the points.

修正後
BIRTH is the birth-of-the-universe-theme sugoroku game.
Players earn points by moving the pieces with the dice to put the dice in five areas.
Let's win the highest score by the sum of the relative and absolute scores!

2) We have changed the calculation rule of relative score as follows.
After comparing the number of each colored dice in each area, the player who has the largest number of same colored dice earns points as the sum of the dice.
If there are more than one player having the largest number of dice a player with the lowest total of the dice wins the points.

元の翻訳
In case of a tie game, all the players are able to get the points.
Example: the number and color of the dice in each area is as below.
Area 1: red 3, blue 3, yellow 4
Area 2: red 2, blue 3, yellow 3
Area 3: red 1, blue 3, yellow 0
The total value of the dice will be added as the number of the color dice the maximum number of thar in each area(in bold).
If there are more than one player who has the maximum number of dice, the point will be got by the player who has the minimum number of total value of the dice.
As a result, the relative number will be shown as the figure above. .

修正後
In case of a tie game, all the players are able to get the points.
Example: the number and color of the dice in each area is as below.
Area 1: red 3, blue 3, yellow 4
Area 2: red 2, blue 3, yellow 3
Area 3: red 1, blue 3, yellow 0
The total value of the dice will be added to the number of the color dice with maximum number in each area(in bold).
If there are more than one player who has the maximum number of dice, the point will be got by the player who has the minimum sum of the dice.
As a result, the relative number will be shown as the figure above. .

元の翻訳
In the event of a tie, every player will earn points.
ie: The number of dice of each color in each area are as follows.
Area 1：red ３、blue ３、yellow ４
　Area 2：red ２、blue ３、yellow ３
　Area 3：red １、blue ３、yellow ０
In each area, the color of dice with the highest number will have the sum of the dice added as points.
If many players have the same number on the dice , the player with the lower sum will have point added.
As a result, the relative score is the result of the above diagram.

修正後
In the event of a tie, every player will earn points.
ie: The number of dice of each color in each area are as follows.
Area 1：red 3, blue 3, yellow 4
　Area 2：red 2, blue 3, yellow 4
　Area 3：red 1, blue 3, yellow 0
In each area, the color of dice with the highest number will have the sum of the dice added as points.
If many players have the same number on the dice , the player with the lower sum will have point added.
As a result, the relative scores are shown in above diagram.

元の翻訳
On September 30 (Tue) NikoNiko Live Broadcast Special Sales site will open!

*NikoNiko Live Broadcast Special Sales site will open!
*It will start on 9/30 (Tue) 16:00↵

（PC）http://shop-stage.mu-mo.net/a/list1/?jsiteid=MDNI&categ_id=8002397
（MB）http://m-shop-stage.mu-mo.net/a/list1/?jsiteid=MDNI&categ_id=8002397

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On September 30 (Tue) NikoNiko Live Broadcast Special Sales website will be launched!

*NikoNiko Live Broadcast Special Sales site will be launched!
*It will start on 9/30 (Tue) 4 p.m.
（PC）http://shop-stage.mu-mo.net/a/list1/?jsiteid=MDNI&categ_id=8002397
（MB）http://m-shop-stage.mu-mo.net/a/list1/?jsiteid=MDNI&categ_id=8002397