翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

備考: アルファベットのAとBには商品名が入ります。

日本語

前回のメールでお願いしたAのBearing Mount and screwも注文します。
提案いただいた、中古品のもので良いです。
返品されたAに使用されていたパーツで問題ありません。
できるだけ安価で販売して下さい。INVOICEに金額を記載して下さい。

Bは入荷しましたか？
できれば、今回の注文商品と一緒に発送して欲しいです。

英語

I will order Bearing Mount and screw of A as I asked by a previous mail.
It is OK for the used one as you suggested.
There is no problem with a part which was used for the returned A.
Please sell it as cheap as you can. Please show the price in an invoice.

Has the B already delivered?
If it is possible, I hope you to send it with the product together of this time.

レビュー ( 1 )

susumu-fukuharaはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/10/08 12:36:51

元の翻訳
I will order Bearing Mount and screw of A as I asked by a previous mail.
It is OK for the used one as you suggested.
There is no problem with a part which was used for the returned A.
Please sell it as cheap as you can. Please show the price in an invoice.

Has the B already delivered?
If it is possible, I hope you to send it with the product together of this time.

修正後
I will order Bearing Mount and screw of A as I asked by a previous mail.
It is OK for the used one as you recommended.
There is no problem with a part which was used for the returned A.
Please sell them at your best price. Please quote us the price in an invoice.

Has the B already delivered?
If it is possible, I hope you to send it with the product together of this time.

cheapはネガチブなイメージを与える場合もあり、あまり商用文では見かけません、それに代わる言葉としてaffordable, reasonable, inexpensive, best quote, best price, inexpensiveなどがビジネスでは使われます。

[tommy18]

ご指摘ありがとうございます。今後の参考にさせて頂きます。