スージー (sujiko) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
We ask you to cancel all our order.
We made a mistake in the volume of purchasing.

We will purchase it again after reducing the volume.
At that time, we will provide an identification card to you.

We appreciate your understanding.

修正後
We ask you to cancel the entire order.
We made a mistake in the volume of purchasing.

We will purchase it again after reducing the volume.
At that time, we will provide an identification card to you.

We appreciate your understanding.

元の翻訳
The talk show of Chiaki Ito that is going to be held on February 8th (Sunday) in Osaka was decided.

We decided to hold a talk show of Chiaki Ito in KKR Hotel Osaka on February 8th (Sunday).

(Schedule)
February 8th (Sunday) 2015
Part 1: Opening at 12: 30 and starting at 13:00
Part 2: Opening at 16:30 and starting at 17:00.

(Venue)
2-24 Baba-cho, Chuo-ku, Osaka City, Osaka Prefecture
KKR Hotel Osaka 3rd floor Ginganoma Party Hall

修正後
The talk show of Chiaki Ito on February 8th (Sunday) in Osaka has been decided.

We decided to hold a talk show of Chiaki Ito in KKR Hotel Osaka on February 8th (Sunday).

(Schedule)
February 8th (Sunday) 2015
Part 1: Opening at 12: 30 and starting at 13:00
Part 2: Opening at 16:30 and starting at 17:00.

(Venue)
2-24 Baba-cho, Chuo-ku, Osaka City, Osaka Prefecture
KKR Hotel Osaka 3rd floor Ginganoma Party Hall

元の翻訳
Thank you for asking a question.

1. The attachement is only the one that you saw in the picture.
The strap is not attached.

2. We sent it on December 1st.
You will usually receive it around 5 days in the United States.
We will also send the URL.
We hope that you check it.

3. We do not know the number of the years and the history of the binoculars.
We ask that you understand it.

We appreciate your little patience.

修正後
Thank you for your inquiry

1. The attachement is only the one that you saw in the picture.
The strap is not attached.

2. We sent it on December 1st.
You will usually receive it around 5 days in the United States.
We will also send the URL.
We hope that you check it.

3. We do not know the number of the years and the history of the binoculars.
We ask that you understand it.

We appreciate your little patience.

元の翻訳
Good day!
We appreciate that you have contacted us several times.
May we suggest our idea?

As we do not want to give an inconvenience to you for the arrangement
of the international mail, etc., may we issue a refunding for the price of the item for you?
You can dispose the item that you received.

By this way, you do not have to do anything complicatedly,
and we can repay the money that you had paid.

We are also glad that we can solve your problem immediately.
Please let us know if
we send the shipping charge to you and you return the item
or
we issue the refunding for you and close our business.

修正後
Good day!
We appreciate that you have contacted us several times.
May we suggest our idea?

As we do not want to give an inconvenience to you for the arrangement
of the international mail, etc., may we issue a refund for the price of the item for you?
You can dispose the item that you received.

By this way, you do not have to do anything complicatedly,
and we can repay the money that you had paid.

We are also glad that we can solve your problem immediately.
Please let us know if
we send the shipping charge to you and you return the item
or
we issue the refund for you and terminate our business.

元の翻訳
We asked a manufacturer to check the item comprehensively on November 21st, and found that there was no problem about how it works.

We do not know how many people have owned it in the past.
The serial number is ○○.

修正後
We asked the manufacturer to check the item comprehensively on November 21st, and found that there was no problem about how it works.

We do not know how many people have owned it in the past.
The serial number is ○○.

元の翻訳
貴方のお問い合わせを熟慮します。送料の６００ドルは弊社のクレジットとして使用できます。その理由は、電信による返金に対応できませんので。本クレジットを今回の注文に追加または次回以降の注文においてご使用ください。

貴方からの電信によるお支払いを受け取りましたので、商品を出荷します。海外の発送に関し、お早めにご連絡ください。

修正後
弊社は、貴方のご懸念を非常に重んじます。送料の６００ドルは弊社のストア・クレジットとして使用できます。その理由は、電信による返金に対応できませんので。本クレジットを今回の注文に追加または次回以降の注文においてご使用ください。

貴方からの電信によるお支払いを受け取りました。商品は出荷準備ができております。国際貨物に関し、お早めにご連絡ください。

元の翻訳
We cannot save money if we live alone.

I am also learning while I commute.
I have a movie application used for studying, and I can recommend it to you.
We can select among the subtitle, Japanese and without the subtite while we are watching it. We can also search a word we do not know when we are watching it.

We can laugh at it.
I made a worse mistake.
A couple of days ago, my friend asked if his or her Japanese was rude.
I replied that I did not mind it because you had been rude for a long time.
I was the worst.

修正後
We cannot save money if we live alone.

I am also learning while I commute.
I have a movie application used for studying, and I can recommend it to you.
We can select among the subtitle, Japanese and without the subtite while we are watching it. We can also search a word we do not know when we are watching it.

It's funny.
I made a worse mistake.
A couple of days ago, my friend asked if his or her Japanese was rude.
I replied in English that I did not mind it because you had been rude for a long time.
I was the worst.

元の翻訳
It is my opinion regarding this problem.
As you say, this problem does not have a problem in its function.
However, it is an item with defect subject to the Japanese standard.
As we understand the world standard, if you insist that it is an item without defect,
we will solve this problem within our company.
However, we have to reflect it to the sales price, so we would be glad if you consider a selection by improvement of the quality or inspection.

修正後
My opinion about the "name" is:
As you say, this a functional problem.
However, it is an item with defect subject to the Japanese standard.
As we understand the world standard, if you insist that it is an item without defect,
we will solve this problem within our company.
However, we have to reflect it to the sales price, so we would be glad if you consider a selection by improvement of the quality or inspection.

元の翻訳
Good day!
Thank you for your reply.
We apologize to have given an inconvenience as you have not received an item this time.
We will process this business by refunding.
We hope that you understand us.

Good day!
Thank you for supporting us all the time.
Regarding the business as is described below, we are going to handle by refunding.
We appreciate your understanding.

修正後
Good day!
Thank you for your reply.
We apologize to have caused an inconvenience as you have not received an item this time.
We will issue you a refund.
Thank you for your kind understanding.

Good day!
Thank you for supporting us all the time.
Regarding the below transaction, we would like to issue you a refund.
We appreciate your understanding.

元の翻訳
※ On the day, we ask you to follow the instruction and attention of the staff. If you do not follow them, we might refuse your participation. A sponsor is not responsible for the accidents that are caused as a result of not following their instruction and attention in the hall.

※ You are strictly prohibited from reselling, making a copy and counterfeiting. The ticket that is obtained as a result of reselling, etc. is invalid.

※ The contents of the event is subject to change or suspended due to some reasons on the day.
If it happens, you still cannot cancel the items that were reserved or purchased. We ask you to understand it in advance.

修正後
※ On the day, we ask you to follow the instructions and warnings of the staff. If you do not follow them, we might refuse your participation. A sponsor is not responsible for the accidents that are caused as a result of not following their instructions and warnings in the hall.

※ You are strictly prohibited from reselling, making a copy and counterfeiting. The ticket that is obtained as a result of reselling, etc. is invalid.

※ The contents of the event is subject to change or suspended due to some reasons on the day.
If it happens, you still cannot cancel the items that were reserved or purchased. We ask you to understand it in advance.

元の翻訳
※ On the day of the event, a cameraman might be in the hall for reporting the event. You might be taken in the film. We ask you to understand it in advance.
※ You are prohibited from sitting from the previous day of the event as it causes a nuisance to those in the neighborhood.

We appreciate your understanding and cooperation.

修正後
※ On the day of the event, the camera crew might be in the hall to report the event. Please take note that You may be included in the film. We ask you for your understanding it in advance.
※ You are prohibited from waiting outside the day before the event, as it cause nuisance to residents in the neighborhood.

We appreciate your understanding and cooperation.

元の翻訳
We would like to handle the items of your company.
(The shipping charge to Japan is included).

Can you ship the items to Japan?

We will start sales in the Japanese market.
Then we are going to handle your items in Japan.
There are a number of customers who use this item in Japan, and it is highly demanded.
Could you please sell it at wholesale price?

At how much are you going to sell it?↵

修正後
We would like to handle the items of your company.
(The shipping charge to Japan is included).

Can you ship them to Japan?

We will start sales in the Japanese market.
Then we are going to handle your items in Japan.
There are a number of customers who use this item in Japan, and it is highly demanded.
Could you please sell it at wholesale price?

What [How much] are you asking for this?

元の翻訳
I made ann inquiry.
What does the following e-mail mean?

修正後
I made an inquiry.
What does the following e-mail mean?

元の翻訳
A delivery man will call you before he delivers this item to you.
He is going to tell the time when he delivers it by telephone.
If he cannot contact you by telephone, he does not deliver it to you.
When you place an order, please input the telephone number that he can contact you by telephone.
We appreciate your cooperation.

修正後
A delivery man will call you before he delivers this item to you.
He is going to tell the time when he delivers it by phone.
If he cannot contact you by phone, he does not deliver it to you.
When you place an order, please put the phone number you can be contacted.
We appreciate your cooperation.

元の翻訳
We attach the following 3 documents.
Receipt of the post office(receipt of SAL)
Delivery slip of manufacturer
Copy of the slip for your company
Can we use them?
You will receive the item.
We hate to ask, but could you please talk wth a staff in the post office over there again?

Thank you for your support all the time.
Please let us check the fee.
We believe that there will be no fee as we agreed with a buyer to cancel it.
However, we checked it now and found that the fee was calculated.
Could you please check it again?↵

修正後
We attach the following 3 documents.
Receipt of the post office(receipt of SAL)
Delivery slip of manufacturer
Copy of the shipping slip for our company
Can you use them?
We delivered the item at the default address at ebay this time.
We hate to ask this, but could you please talk wth a staff in the post office over there again?

Thank you for your support all the time.
Please let us clarify with the fee.
We believe that there will be no fee as we agreed with a buyer to cancel it.
However, we checked it now and found that the fee was calculated.
Could you please check it again?