スージー (sujiko) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
I solved the problem. I can show not the URL of xxx but that of yyy.
It is the same problem as the one listed below.

修正後
The problem is solved. It can't be displayed with the URL xxx but can with yyy.
It was the same problem as the one listed below.

元の翻訳
1. Sometimes translation is not good and we need to correct it (what is specifically necessary is to check the error message alerted from the browser and error message that is usually not shown, etc.)
2. The meaning of down report such as history of use, etc. is not correct (The column of data base is not set appropriately, etc.)
3. Sometimes whiteout and blackout appear suddenly.
4. As SP is necessary, we cannot provide a service to dealer and customers.
5. It is extremely difficult to upload (The logic whether the column of supplier and user is input or not such as appropriate picture, etc. is wrong. Yes or no of the 1st line)

修正後
1. Sometimes translation is not proper and needs to be corrected (what is specifically necessary is to check those message alerted from the browser and those abnormal error message, etc.)
2. The meaning of down report such as history of use, etc. is odd. (The column of data base is not set appropriately, etc.)
3. Sometimes the screen gets whiteout or blackout suddenly.
4. Since equipment of SP is indispensable, we cannot provide the service to dealers and customers.
5. It is extremely difficult to upload (The right pictures etc., Its logic whether those column of supplier and user is input or not, is wrong. [Presence or absence of the 1st line.])

元の翻訳
We heard that the item is damaged. We are going to handle it immediately.
Could you take a picture of it and send it to us by e-mail?
May we suggest you to refund part of 20 dollars depending on the condition of the item?
If you cannot use it by 100 percent, we will claim an insurance and send it to you again.
You do not lose anything in this trade, so please stop worrying.
We apologize to have made you worried.
A.M a person in charge of customers

修正後
We heard that the item is damaged. We will correspond to it immediately.
Could you take a picture of it and send it to us by e-mail?
May we suggest you partial refunding of 20 dollars depending on the condition of the item?
If you cannot use it at all, we will claim an insurance and send it to you again.
You do not lose anything in this trade, so please do not worry..
We apologize to have made you worried.
A.M a person in charge of customers.

元の翻訳
Ⅰ．銀行へ貴方の全個人口座の新住所及び電話番号の更新を促すため、↵
口座開設に使用された書類の全ID番号を明記してください。
さもなければ、特殊IDにより開設された本口座の情報のみが更新されます。

Ⅱ．上記の変更に合同の署名を要する合同口座が含まれる場合、関連する全当事者↵
は署名しなければなりません。

１．間違いの同行への報告は９０日以内に行われなければなりません。さもなければ、↵
本明細が正しいと目されます。本件に関し、貴口座の諸条件を、随時、ご確認ください。

修正後
Ⅰ．銀行へ貴方の全個人口座の新住所及び電話番号の更新を促すため、口座開設に使用された書類の全ID番号を明記してください。
そうでなければ、特定のIDにより開設された本口座の情報のみが更新されます。

Ⅱ．上記の変更に共同の署名を要する共同口座が含まれる場合、関連する全ての当事者は署名しなければなりません。

１．間違いがある場合、同行への報告は９０日以内に行われなければなりません。そうでなければ、本明細が正しいと目されます。本件に関し、貴口座の諸条件を随時ご確認ください。

元の翻訳
The information of the card was stolen from your website when I ordered last time. As the card was used illegally, it was issued again.
After I ordered from your website this time, the card was used illegally again and I am
making a preparation for issuing the card again.
The card information on your website has been stolen.

Order number 5 this time
I would like to order, but I do not want to have this kind of trouble again.
Could you solve it for me?
I appreciate your understanding.

I completed the arrangement of sending 10,000 dollars yesterday.
Would you send it as soon as possible?
I finished testing of processing for engraving the name for 00.
It was completed well. I am looking forward to receiving the item.

修正後
The information of my card was stolen at your website when I ordered last time. As the card was used illegally, it was reissued.
After I ordered from your website this time, the card was used illegally again and I am
making a preparation for reissuing the card again.
A huge data leakage of card information is occurring at your website.

Order number 5 this time
I would like to order, but I do not want to have this kind of trouble again and again.
Could you correspond?
↵
I appreciate your understanding.

↵
I am done with transferring 10,000 dollars yesterday.
↵
Would you send it as soon as possible?
↵
I finished testing of processing for engraving the name for 00.
↵
It was completed well. all I do is to await arrival of the item.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your inquiry.
We are going to send the item tomorrow.
After sending it, we will let you know the inquiry number.
May we ask you a little patience?

修正後
Thank you for your inquiry.
We are going to send the item tomorrow.
After sending it, we will let you know the inquiry number.
May we ask a little patience?

元の翻訳
We were told suspension of account by Amazon.
The reason is that we listed your item A to which we have no right of sales.
We have neither listed nor sold A.
If you have other problems, would you let us know?
We are going to work on it immediately.
We cannot sell at the Amazon and cannot receive money.
It caused us a tremendous damage.

修正後
We were told our account was suspended by Amazon.
The reason is that we listed your item A to which we have no right of sales.
We have neither listed nor sold A before now
If you have other problems, would you let us know?
We are going to work on it immediately.
We cannot sell on Amazon and cannot receive any payments.
It's causing us tremendous damage.

元の翻訳
We apologize that we did not contact you.

Our part time worker sent the item.
He or she sent it to the wrong address and↵
it was returned to us by reason of unknown address.

As this is our mistake, we will issue a refund to you for ↵
shipping charge and give the pamphlet of DVD as our service.
We will send the item by EMS again today.
The inquiry number is xx.
May we ask you a short patience?

修正後
We apologize that we did not contact you.

Our part time worker sent the package.
They sent it to the wrong address, and it was returned to us because the address was unknown.

As this is our mistake, we will refund you shipping charges and give you a DVD pamphlet for free.
We will send the item by EMS again today.
The inquiry number is xx.
Please wait a little longer.

元の翻訳
間違ったバージョンをお送りしたこと申し訳ございませんでした。
過去の発送先（米国内の住所）へ代替の発注を行うことができます。

日本へ代わりの商品を送ることはできません。
全額返金のためご友人へ安価な航空便により元のピレロプロ・
ラック・マウント・ワイヤレスをお送りくださるようお知らせください。
さらに、弊社へ返品の送料をご教示ください。本送料を返金させていただきます。


返金をお受け取られた後、アップグレードされた方法により再度ご注文ください。
今回おかけしたご迷惑のため、送料を返金させてください。
本方法により問題が解決すれば幸甚です。
近日中の再会を楽しみにしております。

修正後
間違ったバージョンをお送りしたこと申し訳ございませんでした。
過去の発送先（米国内の住所）へ代替の発注を行うことができます。

日本へ代わりの商品を送ることはできません。
全額返金のためご友人へ安価な航空便により元のピレロプロ・
ラック・マウント・ワイヤレスをお送りくださるようお知らせください。
さらに、弊社へ返品の送料をご教示ください。本送料を返金させていただきます。


返金をお受け取られた後、アップグレードされた配送方法により再度ご注文ください。
今回おかけしたご迷惑のため、送料を返金させてください。
本方法により問題が解決すれば幸甚です。
近日中の再会を楽しみにしております。（またのご利用をお待ちしております）

元の翻訳
We apologize to have given you much work.
We will refund you 35.95 dollars for returning the item from Paypal today in advance.
As for the amount that you paid, we will issue a refund immediately after we receive back the item.
We appreciate your cooperation.

修正後
We apologize to have caused you trouble.
We will refund you USD 35.95 for returning the item through Paypal today in advance.
As for the amount that you paid for the item, we will issue a refund immediately after we receive back the item.
We appreciate your cooperation.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your inquiry.
The limited items mean that the design of that year is its special specification.
The performance between the watches is not different much.
As for altimeter, it has only the measurement by meter.
We do not handle the strap, and do not know where the strap is sold.
For details of the items manufactured by Casio, please refer to the website below.

修正後
Thank you for your inquiry.
The limited items mean that the design of the year is its special specification.
Their performance of the both watches doesn't differ much.
As for altimeter, it has only the measurement by meter.
We do not handle the strap, and do not know where the strap is sold.
For details of the items manufactured by Casio, please make an inquiry in the website below.

元の翻訳
これらの２つの時計の違いは何ですか。カシオの工場において製造されたリミテッドエディションの方が品質管理に優れているのですか。両方とも日本のモデルです。いずれも測定の基準をキロ及びメートルから英語のポンド及びフィートへ変換しなければならないのでしょうか。また、このカシオ製の商品の米国版を買わなければならないのですか。

本品またはこれらの内の一方を購入します。支払いの目的を知りたいのです。
ところで、このモデルにシリコン/カーボンファイバーが挿入されたストラップが↵
組み込まれていますか。もしそうであれば、本ストラップの同工場の注文番号↵
及び本品の在庫を有するベンダーをお知らせください。

修正後
これらの２つの時計の違いは何ですか。カシオの工場において製造されたリミテッドエディションの方が品質管理に優れているのですか。両方とも日本のモデルです。いずれも測定の基準をキロ及びメートルから英語のポンド及びフィートへ変換できますか。それとも、このカシオ製の商品の米国版を買わなければならないのですか。

本品またはこれらの内の一方を購入します。ただどのようなものに支払うのか知りたいのです。
ところで、このモデルのシリコン/カーボンファイバーが挿入されたストラップは購入可能ですか。もしそうであれば、本ストラップの同工場の注文番号及び本品の在庫を有するベンダーをお知らせください。

元の翻訳
Today I arranged for making a payment, but I did not know name of the account.
Would you let me know name of the account?
I attached a photo. Could you delete a hole inside? If you can, could you delete it?
The card is shaved like a picture.
May I ask you to issue the invoice of 00?

I completed a new box. It is completed in high quality.
I will send 1 box to you.. Please see it. 1 box is 3 dollars.
I found a company that offers the best technology to engrave the name of 00.
As titan makes the characters black as much as possible and carbon is engraved deeply, the characters are clear. Why don't you see the photo?

修正後
Today I arranged for making a payment, but I did not know the name of the account.
Would you let me know the name of the account?
I attached a photo. Could you delete a hole inside? If you can, could you delete it?
The card is shaved like a picture.
May I ask you to issue the invoice of 00?

I completed a new box. It is completed in high quality.
I will send 1 box to you.. Please see it. 1 box is 3 dollars.
I found a company that offers the best technology to engrave the name of 00.
As titan makes the characters black as much as possible and carbon is engraved deeply, the characters are clear. Why don't you see the photo?

元の翻訳
Is the website compatible only with xxx.com, or also compatible with yyy.com?
My request is that an option where the items are simply shown on the same level is set.
As others indicated, the function of the category is necessary.
It is good if we can see the history of answer that we make and history of grades.

修正後
Is xxx.com the only compatible website? Is yyy.com compatible?
My request is that an option where the items are simply shown on the same level is set.
As others indicated, the function of the category is necessary.
It is good if we can see the history of answer that we make and history of grades.

元の翻訳
ZIP-FM "PEACHY"

March 27th (Friday) 9:00 to 11:00
KUMI KODA is going to perform in the ZIP-FM "PEACHY".

Official website of the program
http://zip-fm.co.jp/program/peachy/

*The program is subject to change due to some reason. We appreciate your understanding in advance.

修正後
ZIP-FM "PEACHY"

March 27th (Friday) 9:00 to 11:00
KUMI KODA is going to perform in the ZIP-FM "PEACHY".

Official website of the program
http://zip-fm.co.jp/program/peachy/

*The program is subject to change due to certain reasons. We appreciate your understanding in advance.

元の翻訳
貴方が本件を解決した場合、複数のメリットがあります。

購入者の評価の高い経験を提供、これにより評価の良いフィードバックとなり販売者の詳細な評価が上がります。
本件は、貴方の業務の基準において「販売者の解決によらず終了したケース」としてカウントされません。
本件が開示された際保留となったペイパルのファンドの保留が解除され、、返金に適用されます。
貴方による返金において、イーベイ及びペイパルの手数料が自動的に貴方のアカウントへ加算されます。
保留の解除以前に貴方が本件を解決しない場合、イーベイが以下を執行します。

修正後
貴方が本件を解決した場合、複数のメリットがあります。

よりよい購入者体験を提供、これにより評価の良いフィードバックとなり販売者の詳細な評価が上がります。
本件は、貴方の業務の基準において「販売者の解決によらず終了したケース」としてカウントされません。
本件が開示された際保留となったペイパルの資金の保留が解除され、、返金に適用されます。
返金すると、イーベイ及びペイパルの手数料が自動的に貴方のアカウントへ加算されます。
保留の解除以前に貴方が本件を解決しない場合、イーベイが以下を執行します。

元の翻訳
We apologize to have caused you an inconvenience since you have not
received the item yet.
The zip code when we listed the address to which the items are sent was not listed.
It is our mistake. We apologize to you again.
You can check the status in the following website. It was returned to us.
We hate to say, but as it takes long time if we send the item to you again↵
after we receive it, we would like to refund the full amount that you had paid to you.↵
Would you agree to it?
We appreciate your understanding.

修正後
We apologize to have caused you an inconvenience since you have not
received the item yet.
It appears that we missed the zip code when we wrote your shipping address.
It is our mistake, and we apologize for this.
You can check the status in the website below. It appears that it has been returned to us.
We hate to say this, but as it will take a long time if we send the item to you again after receiving it back, we would like to give you a full refund for it. Would you agree to this?
We appreciate your understanding.

元の翻訳
The total amount of the items that you are going to order this time is 286.76 dollars, but we are going to sell them at 270 dollars by discounting 16.76 dollars.
The shipping charge is free, which is the same as the last time, and change
the shipping to Expedited.
For this reason, we have to know the item that you would like to purchase in advance
when we sell by providing a discount.
It is difficult for us to sell all the items at the price that is lower than other sellers.
However, we promise that we will give you the maximum discount that we can give
to you at that time and the service. We hope that you like it.

修正後
The total amount of the items that you are going to order this time is 286.76 dollars, but we are going to sell them at 270 dollars by discounting 16.76 dollars.
The shipping charge is free, which is the same as the last time, and we will upgrade
the shipping to Expedited.
For this reason, we have to know the item that you would like to purchase in advance
when we sell by providing a discount.
It is difficult for us to sell all the items at the price that is lower than other sellers.
However, we promise that we will give you the maximum discount that we can give
to you at that time and the service. We hope that you like it.

元の翻訳
Thank you for inquiring us.
The following is a list that is compatible with this converter, which↵
is on the website of a manufacturer of Sigma.
As this converter can handle only the lenses that are↵
listed in this list, your lens cannot be handled.

修正後
Thank you for your inquiry.
Below is a compatible list of converters that is on the website of a manufacturer of Sigma.
Since this converter supports only the lenses that are in the list, your lens is not supported.