Tobias (sputnik) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
I am aware, that your company's application is being downloaded alot, even in Japan.
I have made myself a career for 8 years in the japanese mobile market.
Therefore, I was able to accumulate alot of Know How concerning Japan's Googleplay ranking and I can give various advice , like which category would fit your company best and how to go about translating titles to japanese.

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I am aware that your company's application is being downloaded a lot, even in Japan.
I have made myself a career for 8 years in the Japanese mobile market.
Therefore, I was able to accumulate a lot of know-how concerning Japan's Googleplay ranking and I can give various advice, like which category would fit your company best and how to go about translating your titles to Japanese.

元の翻訳
Good day.

I made a replacement request with you before.
The product has been sent, so please send the new one as soon as you confirm that.

Thanks in advance.

GO

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Good day.

I filed a replacement request with you earlier.
The product has been sent, so please send me the replacement one as soon as you have received it.

Thanks in advance.

GO

元の翻訳
Thank you for sending me the invoice so fast.
Just now I placed the order. Although you already sent me the invoice, can I perhaps ask you to add the goods I just ordered to it and resend it?
I will pay instantly after receiving your confirmation.

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Thank you for sending me the invoice so quickly.
Just now I placed another order. Although you already sent me the invoice, can I perhaps ask you to add the goods I just ordered to it and resend it?
I will pay instantly after receiving your confirmation.