萩原祥平 (shoheihagiwara) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
The DVD includes the music videos for all 3 songs. This is the ONE and Only album to enjoy the colorful charms of Koda Kumi.

修正後
The DVD includes the music videos for all 3 songs. This is the ONE and ONLY album to enjoy the colorful charms of Koda Kumi.

元の翻訳
If the payment of customs duty is required, is it a buyer's duty or a seller's duty?

Must a seller pay for the customs duty?

修正後
If the payment of customs duty is required, is it a buyer's duty or a seller's duty?

Must the seller pay for the customs duty?

元の翻訳
I have started sending out WireStrippingGauge!

I think the arrival time will change depending on the area, but it is expected to reach to your hand in 1-2 weeks
If you do not receive it even in July, I am sorry to trouble you, but please contact us by message.

I will start the next project if all the shipment is completed!
In the next project, I will create the solderless breadboards with a new design!
The new design has improved the point that users often have felt frustrated until now, we have developed what is more user-friendly.

I hope you will enjoy BreadBoardManiac!

修正後
I have started sending out WireStrippingGauge!

I think the delivery estimate depends on your location, but it is expected to reach to your hand in 1-2 weeks
If you do not receive it even in July, I am sorry to trouble you, but please contact us by message.

I will start the next project if all the shipment is completed!
In the next project, I will create the solderless breadboards with a new design!
The new design has improved the points that users often have felt frustrated about until now, we have developed what is more user-friendly.

I hope you will enjoy BreadBoardManiac!

元の翻訳
【San Francisco】 J-POP SUMMIT

Date: 7/19/2014 (Sat)
Place: San Francisco Union Square (Live Performance)

Date: 7/20/2014 (Sun)
Place: San Francisco Pagoda Stage, Japantown (Live Performance)

TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE will be performing at the J-pop summit in San Francisco! The two films they've starred in will also be shown at the film festival!

修正後
【San Francisco】 J-POP SUMMIT

Date: Jul 19th (Sat), 2014
Place: Union Square, San Francisco (Live Performance)

Date: Jul 20th (Sun), 2014
Place: Pagoda Stage, Japantown, San Francisco (Live Performance)

TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE will be performing at J-POP SUMMIT in San Francisco! The two films they've starred in will also be shown at the film festival!

元の翻訳
Thank you indeed for such wonderful feedback, my daughter loved it and that made me extremely happy. I'm glad we got your new product. If you need anything from me please feel free to contact me.

I can ship products to your country, however, I can only use a tracking number/ID for products shipped from Japan, once it arrives in your country I can no longer track it. I can not guarantee items that may get lost during domestic postal processing in your country,is that OK?

修正後
Thank you very much for such a wonderful feedback, your daughter loved it and that made me extremely happy. I'm glad you got our new product. If you need anything from me please feel free to contact me.

I can ship products to your country, however, I can only use tracking numbers/IDs while the packages are still in Japan. Once they arrive in your country, I can no longer track them. I can not guarantee that items never get lost during the domestic postal processing in your country. If it is all right with you, I can make a shipment. Thank you.

元の翻訳
The design concept is to pursuit a universal beauty of function, and, at the same time, to express the identity of Asia, Japan, and Kyushu, in a sophisticated measure.

Therefore, this is really original finishing with the combination of the material of cutting edge technology, the material developed through years, and the skill of craftsman.

The specific part of the facade is the light of oblong form.
It has three dimensional curved form and convex cute eyes.(The first form for a coach.)

You can see the space filled with consideration in the coach.

修正後
The design concept is to pursue a universal beauty of function, and, at the same time, to express the identity of Asia, Japan, and Kyushu, in sophisticated form.

Therefore, this is really original finishing with the combination of the material of cutting edge technology, the material developed through years, and the skill of craftsmen.

The specific part of the facade is the light of oblong form.
It has three dimensional curved form and convex cute eyes.(The first form for a car.)

You can see the space filled with consideration in the car.

元の翻訳
更に、もしヨーロッパの銀行口座をお持ちでない場合は、もし必要であるならば、バーチャル銀行口座を作成可能な二つのリンクをお伝えください。

修正後
更に、もしヨーロッパの銀行口座をお持ちでない場合は、もし必要であるならば、オンラインの銀行口座を作成可能な二つのリンクをご提案させていただきます。

元の翻訳
2、3質問がございます。
1）たくさんのフォルダをミラーリングするのでしょうか。または、主にファイルをアップロードするのでしょうか。
2）デスクトップのソフトウェア無料のアカウントを新規作成してログインしてください。迅速に初期化できますでしょうか。

ほとんどミラーリングせず無料のアカウントが迅速に初期化できる場合は、あなた様のアカウントをリセットし新規のアカウントへのファイルのインポートを検討いたします。下記の質問にご回答くださいませ。

修正後
2、3質問がございます。
1）たくさんのフォルダをミラーリングするのでしょうか。または、主にファイルをアップロードするのでしょうか。
2）デスクトップソフトウェアで無料アカウントを新規作成してログインし、迅速に初期化できますでしょうか。

ほとんどミラーリングせず無料のアカウントを迅速に初期化できる場合は、あなた様のアカウントをリセットし新規のアカウントへのファイルインポートを検討いたします。上記の質問にご回答くださいませ。

元の翻訳
2013年11月19日の不在中に配達され、手数料と関税で£12.95の追加料金が請求された！！
購入時にこんなことは提示されていない！！

この店長はAmazonの配達ポリシーを満たしていなかった。私は11月2日に注文したときに"3～5日で配達"を選択した。現在の配達予想はなんと11月15日～12月5日だ！！

修正後
2013年11月19日の不在中に配達され、手数料と関税で£12.95の追加料金が請求された！！
購入時にこんなことは提示されていない！！

この業者はAmazonの配達ポリシーを満たしていなかった。私は11月2日に注文したときに"3～5日で配達"を選択した。現在の配達予想はなんと11月15日～12月5日だ！！

元の翻訳
Please accept my apologies. I will make sure to share any rules with you from now on. I appreciate your co-operation and understanding.

- I will send the manual at earliest stage.

- According to the management officer from A company, the rules to be kept as it is, unless it is against the local law.

- We will discuss on the comments.

修正後
Please accept my apologies. I will make sure to share any rules with you from now on. I will greatly appreciate your co-operation and understanding in establishing new rules.

- I will send the manual in a few days.

- According to the internal control officer at A company, the rules are to be kept as they are, unless they are against the local law.

- We would first like to review the comments at our company.

元の翻訳
I have some questions about the "price" before the shipment.

・Should I only put the exact amount for the product on "Price"?
If there's any extra fee for domestic shipping, will it be added up on "price"?

・If I agree without clicking the "confirm" button, any disadvantage or penalty?

・After I fixed the ”Price", this message below came out.



Please let me know how should I handle it.
Would you like me to send a photocopy of the bill by e-mail?

修正後
I have some questions about the "price" before the shipment.

・Should I only put the exact amount for the product in "Price"?
If there's any extra fees for domestic shipping, should it be added to "price"?

・If I agree without clicking the "confirm" button, is there any problem or penalty?

・After I modified the ”Price" upwardly, this message below came out.



Please let me know how I should handle it.
Would you like me to send a photocopy of the bill by e-mail?

元の翻訳
はい、これが正しいリンクです。当社のコレクションをご覧いただけます。

価格に関してですが、どのモデルをご所望ですか？　お教えいただければ価格をお送りします。
たとえば新モデルのLAMBO012やFE09であれば235ユーロ、LAMBO07であれば225ユーロです。

発送までの期間は変動します。ご所望のモデルによります。たとえば、LAMBO012 は3週間でお送りできますが、LAMBO013 の納期は冬になります。

修正後
はい、これが正しいリンクです。当社のコレクションをご覧いただけます。

価格に関してですが、どのモデルをご所望ですか？　お教えいただければ価格をお送りします。
たとえば新モデルのLAMBO012やFE09であれば235ユーロ、LAMBO07であれば225ユーロです。

発送までの期間は変動します。ご所望のモデルによります。たとえば、LAMBO012 は2週間でお送りできますが、LAMBO013 の納期は冬になります。