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元の翻訳
We are very sorry for our miss in marking the wrong price on the item you have ordered.
We would have shipped the item to you if it was at a lower price, but we cannot because of the big difference in the price.
Could you please cancel this purchase? We would send you a little gift as our apology if you wish to.
Please note that we will cancel the purchase if you cannot cancel it by tomorrow.
Sorry for taking your time.

修正後
We are very sorry for our mistake in marking the wrong price on the item you ordered.
We would have shipped the item to you if it was at a lower price, but we cannot because of the big difference in the price.
Could you please cancel this purchase? We would send you a little gift as our apology if you wish to.
Please note that we will cancel the purchase if you cannot cancel it by tomorrow.
Sorry for taking your time.

元の翻訳
こんにちは　yamahaya88102012 ,
以下の取引に問題が起こされまして申しし訳ございません。ケース見直しをしたところ、買い手の決定に従い、以下の結論にたどり着きました。

詳細:
結論:
買い手の決定のままに

コメント:買い手がアイテムをお返しするように要求されました。お客様にアイテムが届いたと追跡が指し示した次第、買い手に全額の払い戻しを発行するとなります。

解決センターでケースの詳細を読むことができます。

Power Rangers DX Muteki Shogun (KAKURANGER) 1994 Rare!
パワーレンジャーDX無敵将軍（カクレンジャー）1994　レア！
アイテム番号: 261218428705
価格: $200.00
数量: 1
取引日付: May-24-13 07:21:09 PDT
買い手: luigi101811
ケース番号: 5030317091
ケース日付:が開かれたの Jun-17-13 09:45:45 PDT
商品を見る

修正後
こんにちは　yamahaya88102012 ,
以下の取引に問題が起こされまして申し訳ございません。ケース見直しをしたところ、買い手の決定に従い、以下の結論にたどり着きました。

詳細:
結論:
買い手の決定のままに

コメント:買い手がアイテムをお返しするように要求されました。お客様にアイテムが届いたと追跡が指し示した次第、買い手に全額の払い戻しを発行するとなります。

解決センターでケースの詳細を読むことができます。

Power Rangers DX Muteki Shogun (KAKURANGER) 1994 Rare!
パワーレンジャーDX無敵将軍（カクレンジャー）1994　レア！
アイテム番号: 261218428705
価格: $200.00
数量: 1
取引日付: May-24-13 07:21:09 PDT
買い手: luigi101811
ケース番号: 5030317091
ケース日付:が開かれたの Jun-17-13 09:45:45 PDT
商品を見る

元の翻訳
We apology for the inconvenience.

It is confirmed that there were trouble occured duing the delivery, which have led to unsuccessful delivery of the goods.

We are now looking into the matter.
Could you please wait for our contact to you?

Would you like to recieve the refund or have another same product delievered to you?

修正後
We apologize for the inconvenience.

We confirmed that there was some trouble during shipping, which led to the unsuccessful delivery of the goods.

We are now looking into the matter.
Could you please wait a bit longer until we contact you again?

Would you like to receive a refund or have another one of the same product delivered to you?

元の翻訳
Thank you for your support.
I want to purchase all three units of this item. But under your setting, I cannot purchase the item as the following message is shown when I try to purchase.

"AAAAAA"

Please change your setting to enable my purchase. Thanks.

修正後
Thank you for your support.
I want to purchase all three units of this item. But because of your current settings, I cannot purchase the item as the following message is shown when I try to purchase.

"AAAAAA"

Please change your setting to enable my purchase. Thanks.

元の翻訳
Hi everyone, it's been a long time! I'm one of the member Hanako~

Because of the season, Japan has become hot and has been raining cats and dogs.

If we get over this season, summer comes and new animes will start boardcasting!

Personally I plan to watch

・Anime
・Free!

I am really looking forward to watching not only Anime but also Free! .
Kyouto Animation has been having female characters as the title role, but it seems that Free! will be a sport anime talking about boys in swimming club...Ah, I hope July can come soon.

So again, I'm bringing new information to everyone!

修正後
Hi everyone, it's been a long time! I'm one of the member Hanako~

Because of the season, Japan has become hot and has been raining cats and dogs.
(たぶんこれでは今の季節のことを表現しているのではないと思われるでしょうから、because of this season's nature, it become sometimes very hot and it rains cats and dogs sometimes あなたの訳にそって）
↵
If　（whenだろうと思います。もし、ということはありえない。必ず夏が来ます。 we get over this season, summer comes and new animes will start （for がいるのでは？）boardcasting!

Personally I plan to watch

・Anime
・Free!

I am really looking forward to watching not only Anime but also Free! .
Kyouto （これならローマ字表現です。Kyotoです。）　Animation has been (having） (focusing onと思います）female characters as the title role, but it seems that Free! will be a sport anime （talking about）　（targettingのほうがいいです) boys in swimming club...Ah, I (wish July would comeと思います。仮定法) (hope July can come) soon.

So again, I'm bringing new information to everyone!