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Hello!

I am considering to purchase the product listed below.
Can you send it to Japan?

URL

I request that you check my question above.

Thank you.

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Hello!

I am considering purchasing the product listed below.
Can it be sent to Japan?

URL

I request that you check my question above.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
Business Guide Company and its Shanghai-based affiliate will hold "Gift Show in Shanghai" at Shanghai international exhibition center(Index Shanghai) for 3 days from 10th to 12th December.

As they have held trade shows 9 times in total in China(7 times in Shanghai and twice in Suzhou ) so far, they have the list of 500,000 chinese distributers. They take advantage of this performance to invite them to this trade show.

They explained, "The reason why the date is set in December is that trading market is most active in December in Chinese. Addition to that, yen has been still weak, so this is the good chance for Japanese attendees to expand their business there."

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Business Guide Company and its Shanghai-based affiliate will hold "Gift Show in Shanghai" at Shanghai International Exhibition Center (INTEX Shanghai) for 3 days from 10th to 12th December.

They have held trade shows 9 times in total in China (7 times in Shanghai and twice in Suzhou ) so far, and have a list of 500,000 Chinese distributors. They are making use of these performance results to draw people to this trade show.

They explained, "The reason why the date is set in December is that the trading market is most active in December in China. In addition to that, the yen is still weak, so this is a good chance for Japanese attendees to expand their business."

元の翻訳
Let you wait so long time.

I want to order thatTour Issue S200 40.5(2 iron) 1 piece, $29.

I will ship this for the customer who had a complain, thus please make sure there is no mistake about this commodity.
I will very appreciate you ship this commodity as soon as possible.

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I am sorry to have kept you waiting.

I want to order that Tour Issue S200 40.5(2 iron) 1 piece, $29.

I will ship this to a customer who made a complaint, so please make sure there are no mistakes with this item.
It will be much appreciated if you could ship this commodity as soon as possible.

元の翻訳
If this product has not been certified in Japan, this would become troublesome so please remove the logo from the package design.

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If this product has not been certified in Japan, it may cause problems so please remove the logo from the package design.

元の翻訳
Hello.

I have checked the tracking number and dound that the number was wrong.

The shippment was held up at the carrier.

I am very sorry for the trouble.

I have put in a correct tracking number. Please check if it works.

Thank you!

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Hello.

When I checked the tracking number I found that the number was wrong.

The shipment was held up at the carrier.

I am very sorry for the trouble.

I have put in a correct tracking number. Please check if it works.

Thank you!

元の翻訳
Greetings,

We are taking part in imports and sales in Japan with our group, SB Import Service. We would like to begin selling A in Japan. And in the future there will be a need to stock large amounts of A in Japan. Therefore we would like to become your business partner and stock your products.

First as a test we would like to buy ten units. At what discount would you be willing to sell them to us?

In the future the number of lots will undoubtedly rise. We anticipate stocking about 75 units per month eventually.

Regards

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Greetings,

We are taking part in imports and sales in Japan with our group, SB Import Service. We would like to begin selling A in Japan, so in the future there will be a need to stock large amounts of A. Therefore we would like to become your business partner and stock your products.

First as a test we would like to buy ten units. At what discount would you be willing to sell them to us?

In the future the number of lots will undoubtedly rise. We anticipate stocking about 75 units per month eventually.

Regards

元の翻訳
I will also consider covering a part of the publishing costs with the sponsor profits.

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I will also consider covering a part of the publishing costs with the earnings from sponsors.

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We are considering covering a part of publishing expense with proceeds from sponsors.

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We are considering covering a part of the publishing expenses with proceeds from sponsors.

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I made a same order twice.
The total number of the item is 30.
I do not have any issue for this, so that please proceed your shipment procedure.

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I made the same order twice.
The total number of items is 30.
I do not have any issue with this, so please proceed with your shipment procedure.

元の翻訳
Thank you for the purchasing.
Please eat snacks such as a chocolate product after you cool it in a refrigerator.

Once you open the package, saving it in a cold dark place to avoid direct sunlight, please eat as soon as possible.

■　Thank you for the contacting. Is there anything I can do for you?
I will send you the invoice by email if necessary.
I am sorry that this happened even though you kindly contact me.
Please let me know if a product is not delivered.

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Thank you for your purchase.
Please eat snacks such as chocolates after they have been cooled in a refrigerator.

Once you open the packet, please eat as soon as possible keeping it in a dark place away from direct sunlight, high temperatures and humidity.

■　Thank you contacting me. Is there anything I can do for you?
If necessary, I will send you the invoice by email.
I am sorry that this happened even though you have been kindly contacting me.
Please let me know if the product is not delivered.

元の翻訳
UK
Thank you for your message. Please be assured as this is a model gun and no problem.
This is very high quarity!

FU
Thank you for youre message.
I will send it today.
Best Regards,

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UK
Thank you for your message. Please be assured as this is a model gun so there will be no problem.
It's very high quality!

FU
Thank you for your message.
I will send it today.
Best Regards,

元の翻訳
1. Simply the seal is attached.
2. It's a fake gloss, low quality printing
3. The review is not trustworthy.
4. Another account was suspended for listing because received a bad review.

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1. The seal is just attached.
2. It's low quality printing with fake gloss
3. The review is not trustworthy.
4. Another account was suspended from listing because it received a bad review.

元の翻訳
Seven days have passed since I completed payment.
When will you ship out the item of your warehouse ?
Please let me know the status of shipment.

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Seven days have passed since I completed payment.
When will you ship out the item from your warehouse ?
Please let me know the status of the shipment.

元の翻訳
7 days have been past since I made a payment.
When will you dispatch the item from the warehouse?
Please let me know the status.

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7 days have passed since I made the payment.
When will you send out the item from the warehouse?
Please let me know the status of the item.

元の翻訳
If you could discount it to half price, I will make a purchase. Please send me an invoice of S400. It will be $160 in 16 items of each $10.

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If you could discount it to half price, I will make a purchase. Please send me an invoice for the S400. It will be $160 for 16 items at $10 each.

元の翻訳
I will purchase this product if you half the price.
Please send an invoice of $400.
$10x16 will be $160.

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I will purchase this product if you halve the price.
Please send an invoice for the S400.
16 items at $10 each will be $160.

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Is it possible to purchase 10 pieces of this product? It's okay even if it takes until January 2014. If we purchase 10 pieces, can you give us a volume discount to make the price cheaper? We would be glad if we get a reply from you as soon as possible. Thank you in advance.

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Is it possible to purchase 10 pcs of this product? It's okay even if it takes until January 2014. If we purchase 10 pieces, can you give us a volume discount to make the price cheaper? We would be glad if we get a reply from you as soon as possible. Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
Am I able to purchase tens units of this product? I don`t mind if they are delivered by January next year. Also, would I receive a volume discount if I purchase ten units at once? I`d like an answer as soon as possible. Thank you for your cooperation.

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Am I able to purchase tens units of this product? I don`t mind if they are delivered any time up until January next year. Also, would I receive a volume discount if I purchase ten units at once? I`d appreciate an answer as soon as possible. Thank you for your cooperation.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.

I understood. Thank you very much.

I am glad very much for taking care of me.

I will request you when I am ready.

Thank you in advance.

Thank you very much

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Thank you for your reply.

I understand. Thank you very much.

I was very happy to be so kindly looked after by you..

I will make a request when I am ready.

Thank you in advance.

Thank you very much

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uk
1. Thank you for the e-mail.
We are sorry to inform you that next date of delivery is unplanned.
We will cancel the order as you suggest.
The item did not ship out so there is no invoice to worry about!

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uk
1. Thank you for the e-mail.
We are sorry to inform you that the next date of delivery is yet to be decided.
We will cancel the order as you requested.
The item hasn't been shipped out yet so there is no invoice to worry about!