Justin Silverstein (redtones) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Thanks for your bid.

Please accept my sincerest apologies, but↵
just to avoid any trouble, I will ship to the address that is registered with the PayPal account.↵
I do hope you'll understand.

Your item has been shipped.↵
I used Japan Post EMS.↵
The tracking number is below.

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I'm truly sorry to bother you, and I thank you very much for your efforts.

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Thank you for your bid.

Please accept my sincerest apologies, but just to avoid any problems, I will ship to the address that is registered with the PayPal account. I do hope you'll understand.

Your item has been shipped. I used Japan Post EMS. The tracking number is below.

I'm truly sorry to put you through the trouble.↵
↵
Best regards,↵

元の翻訳
Hello,
my name is ○○。

I've recently ordered from your company in large quantities.
I'd love to keep ordering from you--is your Net-Shop being actively maintained?
If it's quite alright, I just wanted to contact you to see if you might inform me on this matter.

My e-mail address is：abc123★gmail.com（Please change "★" to "@"）

Thank you in advance.

修正後
Hello,
my name is ○○。

I've recently ordered from your company in large quantities.
I'd love to keep ordering from you--do you have an online store?
If it's quite alright, I just wanted to contact you to see if you might inform me on this matter.

My e-mail address is：abc123★gmail.com（Please change "★" to "@"）

Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
I've also included a screenshot of the mail I received from Paypal when I e-mailed you last time.
Please return the three packages to the above address at your earliest convenience; the recipient is waiting.
Please respond with the tracking number as soon as possible. The tracking number is required to receive a refund from Paypal.
There is a considerable sum of money involved ($4400), so there will be serious consequences for not receiving a refund.
I understand it's a tall order, but as I'm getting desperate I really do require your assistance as quickly as possible.

修正後
I've also included a screenshot of the email I received from Paypal when I mailed you last time.
Please return these three packages to the above address at your earliest convenience; the recipient is waiting.
Please respond by email with the tracking number as soon as possible. The tracking number is required to receive a refund from Paypal.
There is a considerable sum of money involved ($4,400), so there will be serious consequences for not receiving a refund.
I understand it's a tall order, but as I'm getting desperate I really do require your assistance as quickly as possible.

元の翻訳
The serial number of the guitar is *.
The photo of the guitar is not a sample, but the actual item.
It's a beautiful model, featuring the new finish and made in Y Co.'s factory in Japan.


I apologize for any misunderstanding.
Please send your review to my gmail address.
I'll publish it in the appropriate section of the e-Mall website.

Satisfied customers who have previously purchased guitars from me in this manner↵
have written reviews for me.

For example, the parts in No. 86 (tail lamp, a meter, muffler, etc.) should be able to be shipped via EMS.
It's just that I don't have the specifics on the car, so please contact me with any further inquiries.

修正後
The serial number of the guitar is *.
The photo of the guitar is not a sample, but the actual item.
It's a beautiful model, featuring the new finish and made in Y Co.'s factory in Japan.


I apologize for any misunderstanding.
Please send your review to my gmail address.
I'll publish it in the appropriate section of the e-Mall website.

Customers who have previously purchased guitars from me↵
have written reviews in this manner for me.

For example, the parts in No. 86 (tail lamp, a meter, muffler, etc.) should be able to be shipped via EMS.
It's just that I don't have the specifics on the car, so please contact me with any further inquiries.