Justin Silverstein (redtones) — 付けたレビュー

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Stock for that product is still readily available in Japan, however they currently only ship domestically within Japan.

Since there is no other way, what do you think about me buying it for your in Japan and then sending it to your country?

I can purchase the product at the cheapest company in Japan and send it to you.

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Stock for that product is still readily available in Japan; however, they currently only ship domestically within Japan.

Since there is no other way, what do you think about me buying it for you in Japan and then sending it to your country?

I can purchase the product in Japan from wherever would be least expensive and send it to you.

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I attached to my earlier email a captured image from the email sent from PayPal.
They are also waiting for the packages, so please ship them to the above address as soon as possible.
Also, please be sure to let me know the tracking number once you ship them out. I need the tracking number to get refunded by PayPal.
As these total as much as $4400, I will be in trouble if I fail to receive the refund.
I am sorry to give you an extra job, but would appreciate your reaction at your earliest convenience.
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Thank you.

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I attached to my earlier email a screen capture from the email sent from PayPal.
They are also waiting for the packages, so please ship them to the above address as soon as possible.
Also, please be sure to let me know the tracking number once you ship them out. I need the tracking number to get a refund from PayPal.
As these total as much as $4400, I will be in trouble if I fail to receive the refund.
I am sorry to give you an extra job, but would appreciate your reply at your earliest convenience.

Thank you.

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The cancellation of contract removes only the account of the seller, the account of the purchaser is left.
Best regards.

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The cancellation of the contract removes only the account of the seller; the account of the purchaser is left open.
Best regards.

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The return merchandise has not yet reached my home. I will contact you once the parcel arrives. Should the parcel of return articles have to be sent a second time, would you please pay the shipping costs?

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The returned merchandise has not yet reached my home. I will contact you once the parcel arrives. Should the parcel of return articles have to be sent a second time, would you please pay the shipping costs?

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I tested the following URL's submissions.
The javascript for the display of old submissions doesn't work.
There is no management screen.
The following URL mentions the existence of a management screen.
There nearly no translation to english.
There are also a lot of small bugs.

The question is: did AAA test the functionality accurately before marketing?

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I tested the following URL's submissions.
The JavaScript for the display of older submissions doesn't work.
There is no management screen.
The following URL mentions the existence of a management screen.
There is nearly no translation to English.
There are also a lot of small bugs.

The question is: did AAA test the functionality accurately before marketing?