イザベル (provost-isabelle) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
I returned to Tokyo the day before yesterday.
I was very happy to have met both of you in New York a few days ago.
I was also very grateful that I explained the situation where I am restricted and discussed it.
I am excited that I can contribute to your development in Japan step by step.
I am looking forward to discussing the alliance strategy for exploring Japanese market with Tom in Tokyo
at the end of this month.

修正後
I returned to Tokyo the day before yesterday.
I was very happy to have met both of you in New York a few days ago.
I was also very grateful that I explained the situation where I am restricted and discussed it.
I am excited that I can contribute to the development of your company in Japan step by step.
I am looking forward to discussing the alliance strategy for exploring Japanese market with Tom in Tokyo
at the end of this month.

元の翻訳
A way for English progress

Participation in a lot of meetings, and communication with the national staff are increased,
with training the listening comprehension, and at the same time terminology is learned

修正後
Method to improve English

Participate in a lot of meetings, increase communication with the local staff,
remember technical terms while building up listening skills