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This is to inform you about shipping of the item.

Unfortunately, we have found a defect on the fender gig case which comes along the bass. As we have ordered a new one, shipping to you will be delayed until Sep.1. We apologize for the inconvenience this may cause you.

The bass guitar is brand new without any issue. We will let you know the tracking number as soon as it is available.

We appreciate your patience.

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This is to inform you about the shipping of the item.

Unfortunately, we have found a defect on the fender gig case which comes along with the bass. We have ordered a new one, so shipping it to you would take until September 1. We apologize for the inconvenience this may cause you.

The bass guitar is brand new and has no problems. We will let you know the tracking number as soon as it is available.

Thank you for your patience.

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I see, you are using the Malaysian eBay. Is it easier to use compare to the American eBay?
We are thinking of moving to Southeast Asia over the next three years. The most likely to move to Johor Bahru, Malaysia. Once we move, we will stay there for a long time.
What I'm thinking is to sell cars. There are many models that you can only get in Japan, and it is difficult to sham those.
I'm also interested in food businesses as well. As a couple, we are thinking of running some restaurant business, such as a sushi restaurant and a gelateria.

Thank you for your valuable comment.

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I see, you are using the Malaysian eBay. Is it easier to use compared to the American eBay?
We are thinking of moving to Southeast Asia over the next three years. We would most likely move to Johor Bahru, Malaysia. Once we move, we will stay there for a long time.
I'm thinking is of selling cars. There are many models that you can only get in Japan, and it is difficult to imitate them.
I'm also interested in food businesses as well. As a couple, we are thinking of running some restaurant businesses, such as a sushi restaurant and a gelateria.

Thank you for your valuable comment.

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People in Kyoto have some green tea naturally,and Many of them enjoy having some powdered tea.
They make some powdered tea at their home informally,and offer them to the guests.

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People in Kyoto have some green tea, and many of them enjoy having some powdered tea.
They freely make some powdered tea at their home, and offer them to the guests.

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Hello, how are you?
I would like a catalog of the automobiles that your company deals with. Would you be able to send this to me? If possible, I would like three copies of catalogs displaying each of the makers and models. I am, of course, willing to pay for the postage and the catalogs.
Thank you for your consideration and assistance.

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Thank you for your assistance.
I would like a catalog of the automobiles that your company handles. Would you be able to send this to me? If possible, I would like three copies of catalogs displaying each of the makers and models. I am, of course, willing to pay for the postage and the catalogs.
Thank you for your consideration.

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Hello, I am (名前),and you purchased (商品名) from me in the past.
This time, new ○○ went on sale.

The detail about it was uploded to my ebay store, so please look.
There are three colours, red, black and white, and four sizes, S, M, L and XL(Japanese size)

Like this, there are many kinds of products.

Please glance at it.

Thank you for reading my notice.

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Hello, I am (Name), and you purchased (Product Name) from me in the past.
This time, a brand new product called, ○○ has been released.

It has been uploaded to my ebay store, so please check it out.
It is available in three colors; red, black and white, and four sizes, S, M, L and XL (Japanese size).

There are a lot of other products like this.

Please check it out.

Thank you for reading this.

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I understand for the 3 boxes of the hot mask(Kao).
If you add the product A, I will ask you only the balanace of transportation fee after I bundle them up.
But, I can't make estimate as the product haven't arrived yet and I don't see the weight and the size of it.
At first, I will send you the invoice of the product A, so please pay for it.
After the arrival of the hot mask, I will send you the invoice of the balance of transportation fee before I bundle.

Best Regards,

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I understand for the 3 boxes of the hot mask (Kao).
If you add the product A, I will ask you only the balance of transportation fee after I bundle them up.
But, I can't make estimate as the product haven't arrived yet and I don't see the weight and the size of it.
At first, I will send you the invoice of the product A, so please pay for it.
After the arrival of the hot mask, I will send you the invoice of the balance of transportation fee before I bundle.

Best Regards,