スミス　マーク Mark Smith (ozsamurai_69) — 付けたレビュー

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You can choose the sizes from small, medium, and large.

If you're paying through PayPal, in the message area please include the size that you wished.

Because this is a popular item, it may be sold out very soon.

If it is out of stock. new stock will arrived only after 1 to 2 months, so it is recommended that you place your order as fast as possible.

I am looking forward to your order.

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You can choose from sizes small, medium, and large.

If you're paying through PayPal, in the message area please include the size that you require.

Because this is a popular item, it may be sold out very soon.

If it is out of stock. new stock will arrived only after 1 to 2 months, so it is recommended that you place your order as fast as possible.

I am looking forward to your order.

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1. Thank you for your trying to understand my clumsy English.
2. I often post comments without checking (if those are the right English sentences), thinking it’ll be ok if I can somewhat convey.
3. Is my English understandable?
4. The way she gets delighted is cute.
5. He slashes (touches?) nearby people when he’s excited is cute.
6. When I see this scene, I remember that time.
7. Her way of talking slowly makes me feel healed.
8. May you be in my dream!
9. Which kind of pastry do you like? Would you mind to take those?

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1. Thank you for your trying to understand my clumsy English.
2. I often post comments without checking (if those are the right English sentences), thinking it’ll be ok if I can somewhat convey.
3. Is my English understandable?
4. The way she gets delighted is cute.
5. That he hits (touches?) nearby people when he’s excited is cute.
6. When I see this scene, I remember that time.
7. Her way of talking slowly makes me feel relaxed
[8. May you be in my dream!]????
9. Which kind of pastry/sweets do you like? Would you accept some of them from me?

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I have received 2 items
For one of them, there are lack of a manual and a vanity case (outer case).
Please send those lacking vanity case and manual immediately.
If you don’t have vanity case and manual, please give me a refund for those.

Thanks in advance.

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I have received 2 items
One of them, was missing a manual and the vanity case (outer case).
Please send the missing vanity case and manual immediately.
If you don’t have vanity case and manual, please give me a refund for that item.

Thank you in advance.

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- Copy the entire GD order numbers and paste on the management DB paste tab.

- Filter by using the no inventory extract tab. Select only those with #N/A in the purchase status and date in the date inspected (this is the portion of a new order).

- Select the new order portion between the range of the date inspected and Phone number (Column Q). Paste them on GD.

- Drag the formula in column B of GD all way down and check the duplication. If the value 2 is repeated consecutively it is not a problem as they are packaged together. If the value 2 is entered at intervals, pay attention as another order may be mentioned again.

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- Copy all the GD order numbers and paste them in the management DB tab.

- Filter it by using the no inventory extract tab. Select only those with #N/A in the purchase status and date in the date inspected (this is the portion of a new order).

- Select the new order portion between the range of the date inspected and Phone number (Column Q). Paste them on GD.

- Drag the formula in column B of GD all way down and check the duplication. If the value 2 is repeated consecutively it is not a problem as they are packaged together. If the value 2 is entered at intervals, pay attention as another order may be mentioned again.

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[Tour Dates]
11/10 (Mon)
Sendai Rensa
19:00 Curtain raising

11/15 (Sat)
Fukuoka DRUM LOGOS
19:00 Curtain raising

11/26 (Wed)
Nagoya Club Quattro
19:00 Curtain raising

11/27 (Thur)
Osaka BIGCAT
19:00 Curtain raising

12/4 (Thur)
Tokyo Akasaka BLITZ
19:00 Curtain raising

More details here ↓
http://uratanaoya.com/live/tour.php?id=1000102

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[Tour Dates]
11/10 (Mon)
Sendai Rensa
19:00 Curtain raising
[Begins, Opens At, Starts At etc...]↵

11/15 (Sat)
Fukuoka DRUM LOGOS
19:00 Curtain raising

11/26 (Wed)
Nagoya Club Quattro
19:00 Curtain raising

11/27 (Thur)
Osaka BIGCAT
19:00 Curtain raising

12/4 (Thur)
Tokyo Akasaka BLITZ
19:00 Curtain raising

More details here ↓
http://uratanaoya.com/live/tour.php?id=1000102

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We are collecting packages at forwarding company to import the items.
As the forwarding company is strict about us recently, we cannot forward if we
do not submit an invoice where address, telephone number, details of the items and purchase
price of the seller are listed sometimes.
For this reason, I would like you to put the invoice in the packages or send the invoice to me by email.
You can send an invoice issued by Paypal.

We request that you enclose the invoice where address, telephone number, details of the items and purchase price of the seller are listed or send it by jpg or pdf by email.

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We are collecting packages at our forwarding company to then import the items.
As the forwarding company is being strict recently, we cannot forward items if we
do not submit an invoice where the address, telephone number, details of the items and purchase
price of the seller are listed.
For this reason, I would like you to put the invoice in the packages or send the invoice to me by email.
You can send an invoice issued by Paypal.

We request that you enclose invoices where the address, telephone number, details of the items and purchase price of the seller are listed or send it by jpg or pdf by email.

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I received three sheets of document from Union Bank by mail.

I can't read English well, but do you mean that my account balance became 0 yen.

If it become 0 yen, please close the bank account, thanks.

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I received a 3 page document from Union Bank by mail.

I can't read English well, but do you mean that my account balance became 0 yen.

If it become 0 yen, please close the bank account, thanks.

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Thank you for the discount you made.

We would eagerly like to purchase it.
There are our storehouses in Florida and California, so would you please send the merchandise we bought to the
One in Florida.

If you send it inside the U.S, could you make its shipping cost free?
Please let me know the shipping cost in case of sending to Florida and to California.

We will pay through paypal, so please give me an Invoice.

Could you give us your contact to know the cost? Hopefully we would like to keep in touch with you to know details.

By the way, do you own another shop?↵

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Thank you for the discount you gave us/offered.

We would eagerly like to purchase it.
We have warehouses in Florida and California, could you please send the merchandise we bought to the
one in Florida.

If you send it inside the U.S, could you ship it free of charge?
Please let me know the shipping cost in case of sending to Florida and to California.

We will pay through PayPal, so please send me a payment request.

To what level can we expect your cooperation with the pricing?↵
We would like to discuss this in detail, could you please provide us with your contact information please.

Do you have any other shops?

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I mainly to manage and develop web sites for Smart phone users as my job.

Several languages are available for clients; for example ~ and ~. Also, we can develop apps for iPhone or Android users.

I checked out Japanese sentences you wrote, which was nice. Most Japanese speakers are probably to understand them. You hardly made any mistakes, but later, I will send you a picture with which you can figure out several wrong grammars and phrases of the sentences.

By the way, would you write messages in Spanish, hopefully with simple sentences? I would like to read them with dictionaries I have and Google.

Thank you.

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My main job is to develop web sites for Smart phone users and game development.

Several languages are available for clients; for example ~ and ~. Also, we develop apps for iPhone or Android users.

I checked out Japanese sentences you wrote, which was nice. Most Japanese speakers will be able to understand it. You hardly made any mistakes, but later, I will send you a picture with corrections to the grammar and phrases in the sentences.

By the way, can you write emails to me in Spanish? Just with simple sentences? I would like to read them with dictionaries I have and Google etc.

Thank you.

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Hello.
Thank you for your interest.
I have the link on ebay and Japan Post.
The product has been shipped on September 20th 2014 at 3:59 pm safely.
Please do not worry.
Also, I used EMS for shipping this time, so it will arrive to you within a few days.
The tracking number is EG311716418JP, as stated on eBay.
Thank you for your patience until the item arrives.
Thank you for using my store this time.
If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me anytime.

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Hello.
Thank you for your interest.
I have checked the link on ebay and Japan Post myself.
The product has been shipped on September 20th 2014 at 3:59 pm safely.
Please do not worry.
Also, I used EMS for shipping this time, so it will arrive to you within a few days.
The tracking number is EG311716418JP, as stated on eBay.
Thank you for your patience until the item arrives.
Thank you for using my store this time.
If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me anytime.

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Selling and selecting items

Selling items (How to place items)

Amazon allows not only ourselves to place items, but also individuals and people who belong to other companies to sell items.

You can sell items freely at our secured site named Amazon seller central.

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Regarding: Selling and selecting items

Selling items (How to list items)

Amazon allows not only [you] to list items, but also individuals and people who belong to other companies to sell items.

You can sell items freely at our secured site named Amazon seller central.

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Push the button "Sell yours" to put up it for sale.
The next page is ready for that.

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Push the button "Sell yours" to put up it for sale.
The next page is ready for that.
[The next page is the listing screen]↵

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•Delete the list of item from「Delete product and listing」in「Action」

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•Delete the (applicable/appropriate) item from the [Delete product and listing] in the [Action] menu.

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The sales price in USD at Amazon.com (including shipping fee) ×80-1000 ＞ The sales price in JPY at Amazon.co.jp.
If the the sales price at Amazon.com is 70USD, not more than 4600JPY is fine.
You can search the respective selling sites by entering ASIN.

If you have a different price range from other sellers and have a profit, follow the procedure of relist, and modify the price and place 1 for quantity.

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The sales price in USD at Amazon.com (including shipping fee) is ($)×80-1000 ＞ The sales price in JPY at Amazon.co.jp.
If the the sales price at Amazon.com is 70USD, not more than 4600 JPY is fine.
You can search the respective selling sites by entering the ASIN.

If you have a different price range from other sellers and have a profit, follow the procedure to re-list, and modify the price and place 1 in the quantity.

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The sales price in USD at Amazon.com (including shipping fee) ×80-1000 ＞ The sales price in JPY at Amazon.co.jp.
If the the sales price at Amazon.com is 70USD, not more than 4600JPY is fine.
You can search the respective selling sites by entering ASIN.

If you have a different price range from other sellers and have a profit, follow the procedure of relist, and modify the price and place 1 for quantity.

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The sales price in USD at Amazon.com (including shipping fee) ($)×80-1000 ＞ is the sales price in JPY at Amazon.co.jp.
If the the sales price at Amazon.com is 70USD, not more than 4600JPY is fine.
You can search the respective selling sites by entering ASIN.

If you have a different price range from other sellers and have a profit, follow the procedure of re-list, and modify the price and place 1 in the quantity area.

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I called your company and confirmed with the operator that there is no problem regarding papers. However it still has not been shipped and I am wondering why. Although He/she said she would take care of it as soon as possible I have not heard anything from him/her until this point. It passed one week since I requested the shipping. Please let me know when you did it. I cannot wait any longer. Please ship it according to what we talked on the phone yesterday.

I am asked to give the information by forwarding agent, which is essential to ship to Japan. I also need EIN code. In case you are not taking care of this case I will have to send it back to you.

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I called your company and confirmed with the operator that there is no problem regarding papers[documents]. However, it still has not been shipped and I am wondering why. Although he/she said she would take care of it as soon as possible I have not heard anything from him/her [as yet] until this point. It [has been over]passed one week since I requested the shipping. Please let me know when [it was done]you did it. I cannot wait any longer. Please ship it accordingly as we [discussed] talked on the phone yesterday.

I am [being] asked [by the forwarding agent] for the information by forwarding agent, which is essential to ship to Japan. I also need [the] EIN code. [If do not ] take care of this case [I will be forced to] send it back to you.

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Thank you for your message.

I fiiled out the 'Credit Card authorization form'.
I have attached the file, so please see it.

I confirmed the contents of Order sheet.
The number "888003" in itemNo is "16800", is it true?
If this is *** of 18600, it's no problem.

So please make procedure with this form.

Thank you.

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Thank you for your message.

I fiiled out the 'Credit Card authorization form'.
I have attached the file, so please [check] see it.

I confirmed the contents of Order sheet.
The number "888003" in itemNo is "16800", is it true?
If this is *** of 18600 [16800], it's no problem.

So please proceed with this [order].

Thank you.

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Thank you for your contact.

Our item are sold with PDF data only.
Your purchased item is available for download from the order history (i.e.: FAQ).
We accept payments via PayPal.

Please contact us if any.
Thank you and best regards.

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Thank you for your contact.

Our [store/shop] only sells PDF data.
Your purchased item is available for download from the order history ↵
[refer to the FAQ's] (i.e.: FAQ).
We accept payments via PayPal.

Please contact us if [there is anything else we can do for you].
Thank you and best regards.

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Thank you for shopping with us.
If you have received this letter, I guess the item was delivered to you without any issues.

I would be glad to hear from you with a feedback, etc.

Did you like the little gift sent from my shop to you?

Your child is very pretty, so I enclosed the Japanese sweets as a special occasion.

If you will be looking for Japanese items, please do let me know.

I sure will find it and let you know.

Hope to have you shopping with us again.

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Thank you for shopping with us.
If you have received this letter, I guess the item was delivered to you without any issues.

I would be glad to hear from you with feedback, etc.

Did you like the little gift sent from my shop to you?

Your child is very pretty, so I enclosed the Japanese sweets as a special [treat].

If you will be looking for Japanese items [in the future], please do let me know.

I will definitely find it for you and let you know.

Hope to have you shopping with us again.

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When a multiple images are uploaded, is there anyway I could set the image file name as alt or title of the image?
Also, it would be great if YouTube movies can be posted.
Please keep this for your reference as it may be just my personal opinion.

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When a multiple images are uploaded, is there any way I could set the image file name as alt or title of the image?
Also, it would be great if YouTube movies could be posted.
Please keep this for your reference as it may be just my personal opinion.↵
[This is only my personal opinion and for your reference only]