Kaho Legradi (oyama_k) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
There are many other favorite shops in Shimokitazawa. It's a great fun to walk in this city to seek for many different kinds of shops such as an unique shop which is only selling stickers. In Tokyo, there are many individualistic shops which has lots of unique items you can only buy there. Therefore I am definitely sure that you can have a wonderful experience in Tokyo. This is why I like Tokyo.

修正後
There are many other favorite [of whom?] shops in Shimokitazawa. It's great fun to walk in this city to seek many different kinds of shops such as a unique shop only selling stickers. In Tokyo, there are many individualistic shops which has [s-v agreement] lots of unique [repetitive] items you can only buy there. Therefore, I am definitely sure that you can have a wonderful experience in Tokyo. That is why I like Tokyo.

元の翻訳
I would recommend Shimokitazawa next.This was the most favorite place in Tokyo while I lived there therefore I visited there many times. One of the best place in Shimokitazawa is a variety shop called Village Vanguard. Their items vary in a very different types: Useful, Cute and Unique. For instance, there is a case which is only for putting a tupet or a cup shaped as a camera lens. (Tupet: Juice filled in the plastic bottle, common food to eat in the summer) It's a lot of fun for me to stay there, therefore I can enjoy the shop for long hours.

修正後
I would recommend Shimokitazawa next. This was the most favorite place in Tokyo while I lived there therefore I visited there many times. One of the best place in Shimokitazawa is a variety shop called Village Vanguard. Their items vary in very different types: Useful, Cute and Unique. For instance, there is a case which is only for putting a tupet or a cup shaped as a camera lens. (Tupet: Juice filled in the plastic bottle, common food to eat in the summer) It's a lot of fun for me to stay there, therefore I can enjoy the shop for long hours.

元の翻訳
郵便局へ行き、郵便局員の方に小包について問い合わせたところ、以下のような回答が得られました。
「ジブラルタルでは、小包はすべて識別番号と住所により区分されています。しかしながら、住所記入が不十分であるため、こちらの郵便局では住所によってあなたの小包を見つけることは出来ません。しかし、識別番号があればその小包を特定することが出来ます。」

あなたが小包を郵便局へ持っていったとき、レシートを受け取ったかと思います。そのレシートに小包の識別番号が記載されています。お手数をおかけしますが、その時に受け取ったレシートを確認し、識別番号を私に教えていただけませんか？その番号さえわかれば、小包が届いたときに受領することが出来ます。

申し訳ありませんが、どうぞよろしくお願い致します。

修正後
郵便局へ行き、郵便局員の方に小包について問い合わせたところ、以下のような回答が得られました。
「ジブラルタルでは、小包はすべて識別番号と住所により区分されています。しかしながら、住所記入が不十分であるため、こちらの郵便局では住所によってあなたの小包を見つけることは出来ません。しかし、識別番号があればその小包を特定することが出来ます。」

あなたが小包を郵便局へ持っていき、SAL便で送った時に、レシートを受け取ったかと思います。そのレシートに小包の識別番号が記載されています。その時に受け取ったレシートを確認し、識別番号を私に教えていただけませんか？その番号さえわかれば、小包が届いたときに受領することが出来ます。

申し訳ありませんが、どうぞよろしくお願い致します。

元の翻訳
The product you purchased is imported item from Japan so that 1 year manufacturer's warranty is only valid in Japan.
Therefore, you need to send the product to our shop first and then we will contact the manufacturer to fix it.
We are very sorry to trouble you, but shippng charge is to be taken care by you because it has been about 6 months since you have bought the product.
When the product will be repaired, shipping charge for sending the product back to you will be taken care by us.
If you would like to have it repaired by our service, please contact us in order to tell you the addressee.　

修正後
1 year manufacturer's warranty is only valid in Japan since the product you purchased is an imported item from Japan.
Therefore, you need to send the product to our shop first and then we will contact the manufacturer to fix it.
We are very sorry to trouble you, but we have to ask you to borne the shipping charge because it has been about 6 months since you have bought the product.
Once the product is repaired, we defray the shipping charge to send it back.
If you would like to have it repaired by our service, please contact us in order to tell you the addressee.