岡山　太一 (oolongtee) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
承知しました。 注文三つ分を同送致します。一方で、注番2013120330490と2013120434899のご入金がまだ確認できておりません。注番2013120434899と注番2013120330490を一緒にし、発送費用を再計算した所、新費用は61.42ドルとなります。注番2013120434899分のみお支払頂ければ、結構でございます。

注番2013112922173につきまして、短い商品の QJ131107414-1は13.49ドルで、郵送料は9.58ドルとなり、合計で13.49+9.58=23.07ドルとなります。この合計を注番 2013120434899分として用いますので、お支払い頂きたい金額は61.42-23.07=38.35ドルとなります。

修正後
承知しました。 注文三つ分を同送致します。一方で、注番2013120330490と2013120434899のご入金がまだ確認できておりません。注番2013120434899と注番2013120330490を一緒にし、発送費用を再計算した所、新費用は61.42ドルとなります。注番2013120434899分のみお支払頂ければ、結構でございます。

注番2013112922173につきまして、在庫のない商品 QJ131107414-1は13.49ドルで、郵送料は9.58ドルとなり、合計で13.49+9.58=23.07ドルとなります。この合計を注番 2013120434899分から差し引かせていただきますと、お支払い頂きたい金額は61.42-23.07=38.35ドルとなります。

元の翻訳
Japan Tourist Agency and Japan National Tourism Organisation entrusted "MICE Ambassador" to 8 persons who internationally and domestically have connections and influences to industrial and academical world.
They try to improve the ability enough to compete on inviting MICE to Japan by their publicity and attracting work to find out potential demands of MICE.

* Inviting and holding of international conventions etc. (MICE) is recognized as a important way that Japan acquires a lot of knowledge and investment on "The Formulation of "Japan Revitalisation Strategy-Japan is Back-" and " Action Program toward the Realization of Japan as a Tourism-oriented Country".

修正後
Japan Tourist Agency and Japan National Tourism Organisation entrusted "MICE Ambassador" to 8 people who internationally and domestically have connections to and influences on industrial and academical fields.
As representatives of Japan, they try to improve the ability to compete on inviting MICE to Japan by public and attractive activities to find out potential demands of MICE.

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* Inviting and holding of international conventions etc. (MICE) is recognized as an important tool for Japan to acquire a lot of knowledge and investments on The Formulation of "Japan Revitalisation Strategy-Japan is Back-" and " Action Program toward the Realization of Japan as a Tourism-oriented Country".

元の翻訳
You have some items that you're biting now. Do you mind if I dispatch the pending items together? Please wait to make remittance for items you're biting now in case you'll win the bits until your receiving of invoice.

修正後
I see you are currently bidding for some items, so do you mind if I dispatch the pending items together? Also for the payment for any successful bids you have among the items you have bid for, please wait until you receive the invoice.

元の翻訳
-Play with your friends!
Your friends in LINE or GAME CENTER makes you more fun! You can compete for the ranking of the maximum flying height which displayed with the icons of your friends during gaming.

-Regarding with heart
Heart is necessary to play the game and it's recovered for a regular time one by one. "PIYO-UP" can be played free of charge until its end, however, you can buy the hearts as a charged item when the hearts are not enough to play this game. Please invalidate of a function of charging to inside-application from the setting of your device when you want to switch off this function.

修正後
-Play with your friends!
Playing with your friends in LINE or GAME CENTER makes you more fun! You can compete for the ranking of the maximum flying height which is displayed with the icons of your friends during gaming.

-Regarding heart
Heart is necessary to play the game and it's recovered for a regular time one by one. "PIYO-UP" can be played free of charge until its end, however, you can buy the hearts as a charged item when the hearts are not enough to play this game. Please invalidate the function of charging to inside-application from the setting of your device when you want to switch off this function.

元の翻訳
I'm really impressed that you truly understand value of a Japanese sword.

Japanese sword is not simply a ingot of iron or well-cutting blade, but it have to be understood that the sword contains spirituality and philosophy.

Namely, it contains philosophy and sense of beauty of SAMURAI, Japanese warrior, who used always to be a neighbor of death.

We have seriously felt misgivings about a tendency that the sword is regarded as only a work of art for admiration.

It is quite natural that you understand the spirit of SAMURAI in faraway country of far east because you are a honorable and revered soldier and living always with munitions.

修正後
I'm really impressed that you truly understand value of a Japanese sword.

Japanese sword is not simply a ingot of iron or well-cutting blade, but it has to be understood that the sword contains spirituality and philosophy.

Namely, it contains philosophy and sense of beauty of SAMURAI, Japanese warrior, who used always to be a neighbor of death.

We have seriously felt misgivings about a tendency that the sword is regarded as only a work of art for admiration.

It is quite natural that you understand the spirit of SAMURAI in faraway country of far east because you are a honorable and revered soldier and living always with munitions.