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I manage to change the price to 30$.
Merchandise name and gift cannot be changed.

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I managed to change the price to $30.
Merchandise name and gift cannot be changed.

元の翻訳
It really is an Original Full Album long awaited by the fans.

And for the official AYUMI HAMASAKI "TeamAyu" member limited edition, there are interview video of AYUMI HAMASAKI about behind the scenes story and explanation about the songs. Furthermore, "Milenas Boutique Aroma Candle", the one that is the favourite AYUMI HAMASAKI for a long time and is incredibly popular among celebrities all around the world is included inside the Luxurious Box set.

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It really is an Original Full Album long awaited by the fans.

And for the official AYUMI HAMASAKI "TeamAyu" member limited edition, there are interview videos of AYUMI HAMASAKI about a behind the scenes story and explanation about the songs. Furthermore, "Milenas Boutique Aroma Candle", the one that is the favourite AYUMI HAMASAKI for a long time and is incredibly popular among celebrities all around the world is included inside the Luxurious Box set.

元の翻訳
I want to confirm the following 2 points.

1. Will this script work in iPhone or Android?
2. In the manual it is written that it is using YouTube API, is this statement correct?

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I want to confirm the following 2 points:

1. Will this script work on iPhone or Android?
2. In the manual it is written that it is using YouTube API, is this statement correct?

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
The merchandise will be a new one.
The merchandise will be sent in a cardboard.
Thanks for your understanding.

Thank you for your message.
Have the merchandise arrived?
We are very sorry. There is a possibility that it is missing or being held by customs.
We will resend the merchandise as soon as possible.
We will send the tracking number for the merchandise by today.

Thank you for your message.
The tracking number is given below.
We are sorry that it would take sometime before it will arrive.

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Thank you for your message.
The merchandise is brand new.
The merchandise will be sent in a cardboard.
Thanks for your understanding.

Thank you for your message.
Hasn't the merchandise arrived?
We are very sorry. There is a possibility that it is missing or being held by customs.
We will resend the merchandise as soon as possible.
We will send the tracking number for the merchandise today.

Thank you for your message.
The tracking number is given below.
We are sorry that it would take sometime before it arrives.

元の翻訳
Is it well known among overseas fans that A is not sure on wether to continue XYZ group or not?(B and C agrees immediately)
I don' t know what makes A confused on to continue or not, but maybe A just want to continue as a pure idol.
If A did not agree to continue, XYZ group would be over at that time. So I am grateful that A decides to continue.
This is only my guess, I think even right now A might still wants to continue as a pure idol.

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Is it well known among overseas fans that A is not sure on wether to continue XYZ group or not? (B and C agreed to continue immediately)
I don' t know what confused A to continue or not, but maybe A just wanted to continue as a pure idol.
If A did not agree to continue, XYZ group would have been over at that time. So I am grateful that A decides to continue.
This is only my guess, but I think even right now A might still have a strong will to continue as a pure idol.