津雲 (nashinya) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
If I ordered the product, will the pillow in the set of it？or only pillow cover?

I just want to know it can be used immediately or not.

And could you direct delivery it to Japan?
Please reply as soon as possible, thank you.

修正後
If I ordered the product, will the pillow case come with the pillow?

I would like to confirm it the product will be delivered ready-to-use.

Also, I would like to know if the product can be shipped directly to Japan.
Please reply as soon as possible. Thank you.

元の翻訳
If I ordered the product, will the pillow in the set of it？or only pillow cover?

I just want to know it can be used immediately or not.

And could you direct delivery it to Japan?
Please reply as soon as possible, thank you.

修正後
If I order the product, will the pillow [verb missing] in the set of it or only [article missing] pillow cover?

I just want to know it can be used immediately or not.

And could you ship directly it to Japan?
Please reply as soon as possible. Thank you.

元の翻訳
偉いギタリストには実験的な傾向があります。

驚異的な範囲　-　あなたが想像できるほとんどすべてのサイズの部屋をエミュレートするように設定することができます。
　
変調効果は単純な暖かいヴィンテージコーラス回路を使用しています。

修正後
実験的な演奏をする傾向のあるギタリストにお勧めです。

驚異的な範囲　-　あなたが想像できるほとんどすべてのサイズの部屋をエミュレートするように設定することができます。
　
変調効果は単純な暖かいヴィンテージコーラス回路を使用しています。

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting me.
I understand it.
If you can refund me $ 200 to my PAYPAL account, I will give you 5 stars positive feedback.
Refund procedure please.

I got my refund.
Thank you all.
Please confirm my evaluation.

修正後
Thank you for contacting me.
I understand it.
If you can refund $ 200 to my PAYPAL account, I will give you a good evaluation (positive feedback) with 5 stars.
Please proceed to the refund process.

I confirmed the refund.
Thank you.
Please confirm my evaluation.