Samuel (naokiaoki2013) — 付けたレビュー

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I searched for the way to get a SIM card, but found none was sold in either used shops or auctions. I heard that Docomo likely to have banned sales of SIM cards.
Although it is a very small amount, let me offer you a refund for the prepaid SIM price.

My two elder sisters have married to the eldest sons, I am always told to marry somebody who is willing to marry in our family. My father and grandma believe that my hobby is the obstacle to keep me away from marriage, and my father sometimes come into my room in my absence to throw away my hobby goods. The goods I sell on eBay are stored in Amazon warehouse, so they are safe.↵

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We searched the way of getting a SIM card, but it was not sold in second-hand shops or auctions. Docomo possibly has banned the sale of prepaid SIM cards.
We're sorry about that, and we will refund the prepaid SIM.

My two elder sisters both married with the first-born sons. Therefore I am always told to marry someone who is willing to marry into my family. My father and grandma believe that my hobby is the obstacle which keeps me away from marriage. Sometimes, my father come into my room and discard my goods without my permission as I am absence. The goods selling in eBay are stored in Amazon warehouse, so they are safe.

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A Happy New Year,

When will you start accepting an order this year?

Also, I have not received the item I ordered Dec. 9 yet.
In spite of paying expensive shipping charge for the express delivery, what happens to it?↵

I will be waiting for your reply.

Thank you and regards.↵

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A Happy New Year,

When will you start accepting the order this year?

Also, I have not received the item I ordered on Dec. 9 yet.
In spite of paying expensive shipping charge for the express delivery, I still didn't receive the goods. What's wrong with the shipping service ?
I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Best Regards

元の翻訳
ドーナツに砂糖衣をかける作業が見られる機械を彼らは持っていますか？

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ドーナツに砂糖衣をかける機械を見せられたか？

元の翻訳
The product seems to be delivered at around your vicinity.

Please return the product unopened within three days if it has arrived.
(please choose registered mail delivery.)

I will refund the product and the postage after confirmation of the arrival.

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As I checked the track, the product seems to have been delivered to your vicinity.

Please return the product unopened within three days after it arrive.
(please choose registered mail delivery.)

I will refund the product and the postage after confirmation.

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Firstly I would like to thank you for purchasing the product which we had on sale.
However, I have disappointed you because the product was different from the impression the photograph gave you.
It is difficult to take a photograph of the clock face that represents the real item most closely, but please understand that I am not trying to make an excuse.
I want to do my best to prevent such problems as much as possible.
Thank you for pointing this out.

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At first, I would like to thank you for purchasing our product.
However, we have disappointed you because the product was different from the impression the photograph gave you.
It is difficult to take a photograph of the clock face that perfectly represents the color as the real item, but we understand that there is no excuse.
We'll do our best to prevent such problems as much as possible.
Thank you for pointing it out.

元の翻訳
Aybangはプラットフォームにいる約500人のアクティブな家政婦とともに、北京で1日約350件の受注を記録した。

タクシーアプリDididacheのチームによって開発された同様のアプリeJiajieが、ちょうどTencent　Industory　Win-Winファンドからシード資金の$400万ドルをこの9月に調達した。

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Aybangはプラットフォームにいる約500人のアクティブな家政婦とともに、北京で1日約350件の受注を記録した。

タクシーアプリDididacheのチームによって開発された同様のアプリeJiajieが、ちょうど9月にTencent　Industory　Win-Winファンドからシード資金400万人民元を調達した。

元の翻訳
Hey?
What you have said even it's lie I'd like to believe.

Stop the time,
I wanted to be immersed forever,
Have gathered casual words,
Hey?
I'd love whatever you like,
In a shocked degree

Love is uncertain thing,
I can't understand,
But these feelings are so true
Mellowly
This much is true

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Hey?
Your words are lie. ↵
I believe you, ↵
'Cause I love you.

Stop the time,
I wanted to be alone forever,
gathering casual words,
Hey?
I love whatever you are,
More than you know.

Love is an uncertain thing,
I can't understand,
But these feelings are so true
Mellowly
This much is true

元の翻訳
Thank you for the answer to our enquiry from the other day.

There was some delay at customs, but now they are close by.

Those are great articles and I think I will enjoy handling their sales,
I feel there will be a big response to market expansion in Japan.

We plan on making the main order in the course of next week.

There are the goods you sent, but there was a mistake with the liquids.
There were 2 of ＊＊, and none of ## and ##.
For the main order, the quantities are going to be larger too.
Please do a thorough check before shipping.

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Thank you for the answer to our inquiry from the other day.

There was some delay at customs, but now they are close by.

Those are great articles and I think I will enjoy handling their sales,
I feel there will be a big response to market expansion in Japan.

We plan on making the main order in the course of next week.

The goods you had sent have an error in the liquids.
There were 2 of ＊＊, and none of ## and ##.
For the main order, the quantities are going to be larger too.
Please do a thorough check before shipping.

元の翻訳
Thank you for accepting my suggestion the other day.
Also, I apologize for disturbing you again.
The item is planned to be shipped today. I will get back to you after shipping the item so please wait a short while.

Because it is busy season now and the order volume is increasing, we may request you waiting for a short while until shipping, but please be at ease as we are sure to ship the item before the shipping deadline on Dec. 12.↵

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Thank you for accepting my suggestion the other day.
Also, I apologize for disturbing you again.
The item is planned to be shipped today. I will contact with you after shipping the item, please wait for a while.

Because the order is increasing in busy season now , we need some time to deal with shipping. But please be at ease as we are sure to ship the item before the shipping deadline on Dec. 12.

元の翻訳
I am glad that it arrived safely.I also read your e-mail. I'm not sure if you'll like it or not, but please enjoy it.
I wish your good health and good life.Keep in touch!

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I am glad that it arrived safely.I have read your e-mail. I'm not sure if you like it or not. I hope you enjoy it.
Wishing you a happy healthy long life. Keep in touch!

元の翻訳
Thanks for your inquiry.
This is an old item and it looks a bit used.
However, it's a good item as in the standard of used item sold in Japan.
And I'm listing it at a very reasonable price despite of its good condition.
There are less of this item available in Japan.
Considering the quality and price, it's a great buy.
I had the expert check its operation, so please do not worry about it.
I will clean it as much as possible before sending it.

Of course I'll be happy to negotiate, so please feel free to ask when you win the bid.

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Thanks for your inquiry.
This is an old item and it looks a bit used.
However, it's a good item as in the standard of used item sold in Japan.
And we list it at a very reasonable price despite of its good condition.
This item is also becoming less available in Japan.
Considering the quality and price, it's a great buy.
Please don’t worry about the operation which has been confirmed by professional.
We will clean it as much as possible before the shipment.

Of course we'll be happy to negotiate, so please feel free to contact us when you win the bid.

元の翻訳
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Barrier-free information.
I want to see the toilet pictures.
I want to check the toilet function.
How to inspect the station having ostomy toilet.
How to inspect the station having assistance bed toilet
How to inspect the toilets having baby bed.
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How to see a bulletin board.
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How to change the pictures has already posted.
How to register as a contributor.
How to change your password as a contributor.
Forgot your password?
Send a message to admin without disclosing.