翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

荷物が届いたようで良かったです。メールも読みました。お口に合うか分かりませんが、食べてみてください。私もあなたの健康と良い人生を願います。これからもよろしく！

英語

I am glad that it arrived safely.I also read your e-mail. I'm not sure if you'll like it or not, but please enjoy it.
I wish your good health and good life.Keep in touch!

レビュー ( 2 )

tani1973はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/12/11 14:47:27

元の翻訳
I am glad that it arrived safely.I also read your e-mail. I'm not sure if you'll like it or not, but please enjoy it.
I wish your good health and good life.Keep in touch!

修正後
I am glad that it arrived safely.I also read your e-mail. I'm not sure if you'll like it or not, but please enjoy it.
I wish you a good health and good life.Keep in touch!

wishですが「wish+人+物（～のために…を祈る）」という形をとるため修正いたしました。

naokiaoki2013はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/12/11 14:51:32

元の翻訳
I am glad that it arrived safely.I also read your e-mail. I'm not sure if you'll like it or not, but please enjoy it.
I wish your good health and good life.Keep in touch!

修正後
I am glad that it arrived safely.I have read your e-mail. I'm not sure if you like it or not. I hope you enjoy it.
Wishing you a happy healthy long life. Keep in touch!