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Display period: Tue. Mar.4. 9:00am --Thu.Mar.6. 7:00pm

Place: Shinjuku station square

Address: 3-900-1, Shinjuku, Shinjuku-ku, Tokyo (1-minute's walk from the JR Shinjuku Station east )

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Display period: Tue. Mar. 4 9:00am --Thu. Mar .6 7:00pm

Place: Shinjuku Station Square

Address: 3-900-1, Shinjuku, Shinjuku-ku, Tokyo (1-minute's walk from the JR Shinjuku Station east )

元の翻訳
The memorial of "TREE"release! a huge visual Ad appears in Shinjuku!
In commemoration of release of NEW ALBUM "TREE", the member's huge visual Ad and the monument of the cherry blossoms and flowers telling the coming of spring in advance appear to the Shinjuku station square!

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The anniversary of the "TREE" release! A huge visual ad appears in Shinjuku!
In commemoration of the release of the NEW ALBUM "TREE", a huge visual of the members and a monument of cherry blossoms and flowers marking the coming of spring will appear in Shinjuku Station Square!

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it8731
it7163
おはようございます。「専売セット」に関する説明文に問題があることを、いち早くご指摘いただいてありがとうございます。説明分によるとバスト寸法には3種あるとなっております。
「専売セット」のモデルは、まだ受け取っていませんが、150ドルもの商品価値があると思います。
発送費と関税の分担分を戻すよう払い戻しの手続きをいたしましょうか？
お客様側の勘違いによる疑問や留意不足であっても私どもは一部返金に応じます。
よろしくお願いいたします。

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it8731
it7163
おはようございます。「専売セット」に関する説明文に問題があることを、いち早くご指摘いただいてありがとうございます。説明文によるとバスト寸法には3種あるとなっております。
「専売セット」のモデルは、まだ受け取っていませんが、150ドルもの商品価値があると思います。
発送費と関税の分担分を戻すよう払い戻しの手続きをいたしましょうか？
お客様側の勘違いによる疑問や留意不足であっても私どもは一部返金に応じます。
よろしくお願いいたします。

元の翻訳
I'm really sorry that my reply was a lit bit late, because I referred to the Amazon.

I'm afraid to say that you misunderstand this problem.
This product is sold in one of them not a case.
I cannot understand why you make an assertion as case sale.

I guess if you requested this item from the different page before.
Please look at the page you requested once again.
This product is not sold with a case.

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I'm really sorry. I made an inquiry to Amazon so my reply was a bit late..

I'm afraid to say that you misunderstand this problem.
This product is sold individually and not as a case.
I don't understand why you believe it's sold as a case.

Perhaps you requested this item from a different page before.
Please look at the page you requested from once again.
This product is not sold as a case.

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Do you know a Japanese nail artist is attracting the most attetion now in New York?
Her custmers are Lady Gaga, Alicia Keyes and etc.
She is famous for her fresh ideas and techiiques.
Then, look at this!

Amazingly, this is a nail art of icedream and hotdog.
Can you imagine how her costmer had orderd?
Look at the answer by this movie.

That Newyorker's nail request is also interesting and nover, isnt’ｔ　it!

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Do you know a Japanese nail artist who is attracting the most attetion now in New York?
Her custmers are Lady Gaga, Alicia Keyes, etc.
She is famous for her fresh ideas and techiiques.
Then, look at this!

Amazingly, this is a nail art of icedream and hotdog.
Can you imagine how her costmer ordered?
Look at the answer in this video.

That Newyorker's nail request is also interesting and novel, isn’t it!