Miyu (miyuchan412) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Hi John. Nice to meet you.
Thank you for ordering my product at amazon.
I am so sorry that a trouble of the system made the price $1, let me cancel this time.
I will send a present since I troubled you.
Please forgive me.
Thank you for your cooperation.

修正後
Hi John. Nice to meet you.
Thank you for ordering my product from Amazon.
I am so sorry that a system's error changed the price to $1. Allow me to cancel your order this time.
I will send you a present for your trouble.
Please forgive me.
Thank you for your cooperation.

元の翻訳
Today the product came me back.
You were away the time and didn't ask them redeliver again, so the product were sent me back after the retention period.
If you want, I will send the product again.
The shipping is free.
However, if you don't want me to send it again, I will refund your money in full.
I am sorry to trouble you, but would you contact to me about this?
Thank you for your time.

修正後
Today, the product came back. to me
It seems that you were away at the time of delivery, and didn't ask them to deliver it again, so the product was returned to me after the retention period.
If you want, I will send the product again.
The shipping is free.
However, if you don't want me to send it again, I will refund your money in full.
I am sorry to trouble you, but would you contact me about this?
Thank you for your time.