鈴木美香 (mika_t) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
I ask you about this deal many times via e-mail and chat.
I can't understand why you found that there is no stock available more than three weeks after I had ordered.

when can I get this Rug? Could you arrange to make it possinble for me to get it in a week?

I experienced this kind of situation 6 times.
Nothing has been improved.
Please confirm that there is no items in this kind of situation.

This deal must be canceled.
Please refund immediately.Thank you.

修正後
I ask you about this deal many times via e-mail and chat.
I can't understand why you found that there is no stock available more than three weeks after I had ordered.

when can I get this Rug? Could you arrange to make it possinble for me to get it in a week?

I experienced this kind of situation 6 times.
Nothing has been improved.
Please confirm whether there is any other item in a similar situation.

This deal must be canceled.
Please refund immediately.Thank you.

元の翻訳
I am afraid but I am not available on 30th June.
6th or 7th July will be fine for me.
Please let me know if it is possible that you arrange translator at your side?
Thank you in advance for your confirmation.

修正後
I am afraid that I am not available on 30th June (Fri).
6th or 7th July will be fine for me.
Please let me know if you can arrange a translator.
Please confirm these matters.