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元の翻訳
Would you sell through our agent company A?
if you would yo like to deal directly, we will require to pay full in advance or L/C because this is the first time to make a deal with you.
We can issue our bond.
Moreover, we can accept the condition which are already given if you use our agent company.
There will be no increase from the estimated quotation because agent fee is included your payment.
A might help you because they are familiar with the polymer industry in China.
Also we can reduce about 10% cost from current price.

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Would you like to sell through our agent, Company A?
If you would yo like to deal directly with us, we will require the full amount to be paid in advance or LC as this would be the first time transaction.
We can issue bonds.
We also can accept the conditions you presented if you go through Company A.
There will be no increase from the estimated quotation because the agent fee is included the payment.
Company A might be also able to assist as they are familiar with the polymer industry in China.
A reduction of about 10% of the current price is also possible.

元の翻訳
Please translate upon playing this game once and understand overall.
You need to use the website for translation.
The name of items should be standardized through the whole game because it is equal to a proper noun.
Translation should be written from a first-person perspective and colloquial style.

Over the word count
go over the character limit in the memo

Fix a bug
Available for English
Adapt English
Less than 30 word limits including blanks
Escaping from the fantastical garden
Let's escape from the fantastical garden
Escaping from the mysterious garden
Let's escape from the mysterious garden
Let's escape from the world of books.

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Please translate upon playing this and understanding this game overall.
Please use the website for translation.
The names of items should be standardized throughout the whole game because they are akin to proper nouns.
The translation should be written from a first-person perspective and in a colloquial style.

Over the word count
Exceeds the character limit in the memo

Fix a minor bug
Available for English
English now supported
Limit of 30 characters including blanks
Escape from the mystical garden
Let's escape from the mystical garden
Escape from the mysterious garden
Let's escape from the mysterious garden
Let's escape from the world of books.

元の翻訳
Could we have a discussion with you on the matter of shipping?
glass eye has not gone through customs yet.
Therefore can you send head of Anming ,limbs and suede body?↵
We are going to work on in Japan.

Also, please send two sets of glass eye with a next ordered doll if you receive them.

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Could we have a discussion with you on the matter of shipping?
The glass eye has not gone through customs yet.
Therefore can you send the head, limbs, and suede body for Anming? ↵
It is assembled in Japan.

*Also, please send two sets of glass eyes which have arrived with the next doll you order.

元の翻訳
I send you "glass eyes" by Express mail.
The number of tracking service is "EN2852".
Also I send two sets to be on the safe side.
One of the packages attached pink memo says "small?" is small iris.
please check it out actually.

Best Regard.

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I sent you glass eyes by Express mail.
The tracking number is EN2852.
I also sent two sets to be on the safe side.
Of the packages I sent, I feel that the one with an attached pink memo saying "small?" is the small iris.
Please actually install it and check.

Best Regards.

元の翻訳
Cocone ; flower pod plants shears You would never lost your shears . Strong stands , The excellent sharpness , Made in Japan

You could put crips and Post-it in the shallow part of a pot plant stand.
furthermore, you could put pens and rulers in the deep part .

This product is designed as young children would clean up their desk.
They would be good at cleaning up by using Cocone.

Cocone is unprecedented haling character stationery makes your desks gorgeous.
This is the best present for important people as you give them bouquets.

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Product name↵
Cocone. Flower pot shaped garden shears. Never lose your shears! Strong pen stand. Excellent sharpness. Made in Japan

Paper clips and sticky notes can be stored in the shallow tray of the pot stand.
You could even store pens and rulers in the deeper parts.

This product is designed so that even young children can clean up their desk.
Everyone can be good at cleaning through Cocone!

Cocone is a unique, characteristic piece of stationery that brightens up any desk.
This is an ideal best present for that someone special - its just like giving them flowers!