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BinumiのCEOであり創立者であるAnthony氏によるコメント:

True Click LIfeによる全国規模のネットワークを通じて、このパートナーシップはタイにおける生徒と先生にグローバルで競争するためのツールを提供する。我々はこのクラスルーム改革に参加できることに大きく興奮している。

参加する学校の数は明らかにされていないが、True Click Lifeは全国で数百に及ぶ学校から数千人の生徒をパートナーとしている。このパートナーシップによりTrue Click LifeはBinumi.comに対してプラットフォームおよびソリューションを提供するライセンス発行に関して支払をする。

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BinumiのCEOであり創立者であるAnthony氏によるコメント:

True Click LIfeによる全国規模のネットワークを通じて、このパートナーシップはタイにおける生徒と教師にグローバルで競争するためのツールを提供する。我々はこのクラスルーム改革に参加できることに大きく興奮している。

参加する学校の数は明らかにされていないが、True Click Lifeは全国で数百に及ぶ学校から数千人の生徒をパートナーとしている。このパートナーシップによりTrue Click LifeはBinumi.comに対してプラットフォームおよびソリューションを提供するライセンス発行に関して支払をする。

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True, タイの教育システムを改善するためにBinumi.comと提携

True Digital Conten and Mediaの子会社であり、タイにおける通信会社True Corporation所有のTrue Click Lifeは教育ビデオシステムのプラットフォームであるBinumi.comと提携することになった。

True Click LifeはTrueのプロジェクトであり、タイランドで学校と協力し創造的なコンテンツ、クリーンコミュニティおよび双方向学習を促進する。同時に教育に関するマルチメディアのリーダーであることを目指す。

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True, タイの教育システムを改善するためにBinumi.comと提携

True Digital Conten and Mediaの子会社であり、タイにおける通信会社True Corporation所有のTrue Click Lifeは教育ビデオシステムのプラットフォームであるBinumi.comと提携することになった。

True Click LifeはTrueのプロジェクトであり、タイの学校と協力し創造的なコンテンツ、クリーンコミュニティおよび双方向学習を促進する。同時に教育に関するマルチメディアのリーダーであることを目指す。

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Although I am just before 40 years old, he has young appearance and heart (People I have met often surprised and said "Are you really Engineer"). I believe I am co-operative and have high communication skill ( I keep sending lots of idea and opinion ).

I have not yet have experience but I can easily handle presentation and so on in official places without any issue.

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Although I am not yet 40 years old, i has young appearance and heart (People I have met often surprised and said "Are you really Engineer"). I believe I am co-operative and have high communication skill ( I keep sending lots of ideas and opinions ).

I have not yet had experience but I can easily handle presentation and so on in official places without any issue.

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I am currently working as a development engineer, but I would like to change my carrier by April/2014.

My career goal is that after having experience as an engineering leader; develop skill of management, presentation and English communication, then aiming position such as CTO or executive management in Internet Company with global business.

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I am currently working as a development engineer, but I would like to change my job by April/2014.

My career goal is that after having experience as an engineering leader, developing skill of management, presentation and English communication, then aiming position such as CTO or executive management in Internet Company with global business.

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For Japanese, it would be easier to access booth with Japanese person, so I believe this program has good effect for you.
(We will make the adjustment to schedule based on the number of students and companies. Cost is included in the JAPANTEX VIDEO budget. )

We are hoping we can help to expand your products in the Japanese market with IT and people.

Thank you for your consideration.

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For the Japanese, it's be easier to stop by a booth with a Japanese person, so I believe this program will produce good effects on you.
(We will adjust the schedule based on the number of students and companies. The cost is included in the JAPANTEX VIDEO budget.)

We are hoping we can help to expand your products in the Japanese market with IT and people.

Thank you for your consideration.

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Thanks for your notification despite holiday.

This EMS delivery item is hold at customs in China. This is result from investgation by Paypal.
Can you send item as quickly as possible.
Please let us know shipping date and tracking number.

We have long relationship over two years, so I believe we can resolve this issue soon.

Regards,

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Thanks for your contact even in a holiday.

This EMS delivery item was hold at customs in China. This is the result from investgation by Paypal.
Can you send item as quickly as possible.
Please let us know shipping date and tracking number.

We have long relationship over two years, so I believe we can resolve this issue soon.

Regards,

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I am sending this email since I have received below notification from fowarding company.

We have delivered to Mr xxxx's place as of 5/Oct however none is available at that place.
It seems like Mr xxxx sent wrong telephone number, please send us Mr xxxx's telephone number in Japan.
Please confrim below address is correct, this is for double check.

I would appreicated your quick respone.
Once I have received your reply, I will notity to forwarder.

Regards,

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I am sending this email since I have received below notification from a forwarding company.

We tried to deliver the item to Mr xxxx on October 5, however we couldn't deliver it due to absence.
It seems that Mr xxxx's telephone number is wrong. Please send us Mr xxxx's correct telephone number, available in Japan.
Please confirm below address is correct, this is for double check.

I would appreicate your quick respone.
Once I receive your reply, I will notify to the forwarder.

Regards,