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I was gracefully finished the dress made of soft chiffon with pearl and lace. Big ribbon at the back is completely the feature of princess dress of empire! You put on less make-up but just as beautiful as Luna in "Sailor Moon".

Of course, there are many features like "Pullip" ! You can move eyes to the left and right, and make it wink or with various facial expressions, reproducing the poses that body with a wide range of motion in in various play is possible!

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I [wrong subject] was gracefully finished the dress made of soft chiffon with pearl and lace. Big ribbon at the back is completely the feature of princess dress of empire! You put on less make-up but just as beautiful as Luna in "Sailor Moon".

Of course, there are many features like "Pullip" ! You can move eyes to the left and right, and make it wink or with various facial expressions, reproducing the poses that body with a wide range of motion in in various play is possible!

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【Nagoya】Brand produced by Itou chiaki「Charming Kiss」Cosmetics series launched handshake session

Date:Sunday - December 7
Location:Nagoya hall
(Shop taking part in:イッツデモ、トルペ、ドンキホーテ栄、今池)

First batch:14:00~15:30
Second batch:16:30~18:00

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【Nagoya】Chiaki Ito produces "Charming Kiss" brand ↵
It is confirmed the shake-hands event will be held to celebrate a new release Make-Up Line!

Date:Sunday 7th December
Location:Nagoya Venue
(Shop taking part in:ITS'DEMO,tulpe,Don Quijote Sakae, Imaike)

First part:14:00~15:30
Second part:16:30~18:00

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I think they are good friend though they said their relationship is not good enough to be close friend.

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I guess they are such good and close friends enough to say they are not each other's best friends.

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I think they are good friend though they said their relationship is not good enough to be close friend.

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I think they [plural] are good friend [singular] though they said [tense confusion] their relationship is not good enough to be close friend [singular].

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Hello, Maldives is not only just as you see in TV,↵
but it is a very popular place in Japan.
as products get ready, it will as soon as possible to deliver products promptly.
We will strictly package the products, do not worry.

■The power supply is Japan correspondence. It requires a transformer necessarily.
We are also selling transformers. If you have leisure, please come to see.
And if you purchase them together, We will give you a discount.

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Hello, Maldives is not only just as you see in TV [?], but it is a very popular place in Japan.
as products get ready, it will as soon as possible to deliver products promptly [?].
We will strictly [?] package the products, do not worry.

■The power supply is Japan correspondence [?]. It requires a transformer necessarily.
We are also selling transformers. If you have leisure, please come to see.
And if you purchase them together, We will give you a discount.

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you cannot pay because the information of postage seems not to be given.

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It seems like you cannot pay because the postage is not set.