Kumi (kumim) — もらったレビュー

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Other stove thermometers' paint might melt at the heat of over 250 degrees.
Using ceramic decal print, this print will not melt by heat.

Can exactly measure from 40 degrees to 400degrees
Easy to set, using magnets
Ceramic decal print will not melt by heat
Products by other companies often get difficult to observe at intense heat

Easy to see scales using large fonts and vivid colors
Easy to set using magnets

Displays only the range from 40 to 400 degrees, easy to see and very exact measurements

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Other stove thermometers' paint might melt at 250 degrees or more.
Use ceramic decal print to ensure it will not disappear at this heat.

Exactly measures from 40 degrees to 400 degrees
Easy to set, using magnets
Ceramic decal print does not melt with heat
The scale on competitor products often is hard to see in intense heat

Easy-to-see scales using large text and vivid colors
Easy to set via magnets

Displays 40 to 400 degrees only - makes it easy to see and achieve exact measurements

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We are arranging an interpreter at the moment.
But, we were told that this application code is unacceptable.
I want to confirm Mr./Ms. Murata, is the given name correct?

Thank you.
I will ask Mr./Ms.Murata and move forward.

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We are arranging an interpreter at the moment.
However, we were told that this application code could not be used.
I'd like to confirm with Mr./Ms. Murata, is the given name below correct?

Thank you.
I will ask Mr./Ms.Murata and move forward.

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Thank you for arranging the samples!

As for the schedule for the meeting next week, how about meeting at the office of Tokyo Trade Group at 3PM in Feb.15th?
I will arrange a Chinese interpreter.
If the date is inconvenient for you, please let me know a better date.
Also, please let me know how many people will be coming to the office.

In addition, in order to make the brochures for the Tokyo Gift Show, could you provide an image material with high resolution?
Please provide instructions that explain the product specifications, too.

Thank you for your cooperation.

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Thank you for arranging the samples!

As for the schedule for the meeting when you come to Japan, how about at the office of Tokyo Trade Group at 3PM in Feb.15th?
I will arrange a Chinese interpreter.
If the date is inconvenient for you, please let me know your availability.
Also, please let me know how many people will be coming to the office.

In addition, in order to make the brochures for the Tokyo Gift Show, could you provide an image material with high resolution?
Please provide instructions that explain the product specifications, too.

Sorry to ask this of you when you are busy, but I appreciate your cooperation.

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You do not have to return the product, and I will refund you $250.
I agree to solve this problem by this way.

So , I want to refund you $250, but eBay system is already in the process of returning the product, and I don't know the way to cancel this.↵
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I think that, if you cancel the returning process, I can refund you.

I'm sorry to trouble you, but could you cancel the returning process, or ask eBay how to what the necessary process is?

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I agree to solve this problem by giving you a $250 refund.
You don't have to return the product.

However, the eBay system is already in the return process, and I'm afraid I can't issue a refund until you cancel the return process.

I'm sorry to trouble you, but could you cancel the return process, or ask eBay for the necessary procedures?

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Hi.
I just purchased your license just now, but I bought the regular version by mistake.
I meant to buy the Pro version.
Could you give me a refund, or I can pay you the difference so could you upgrade mine to the Pro version?
Thank you in advance.

・Trading conditions
・payment methods
・Trading ID
・Amount paid

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Hi.
I just purchased your license just now, but I bought the regular version by mistake.
I meant to buy the Pro version.
Could you give me a refund, or I can pay you the difference so could you upgrade mine to the Pro version?
Thank you in advance.

・Trading conditions
・Payment methods
・Trading ID
・Amount paid

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I will buy one. By the way, I have bought some posters from you about 10 years ago. Do you remember me?
If you have any posters of the 70s that you can sell to me besides 〇〇, please let me know. If there are any that I like, I will buy them together with 〇〇.

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I will buy one. By the way, I bought some posters from you about 10 years ago. Do you remember me?
If you have any other posters of the 70s to sell besides 〇〇, please let me know. I will buy the ones I like alongside 〇〇.

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How are doing?
Do you have any plans to go to the melee the show starting from August 10th?
One of the tenants is a Japanese company called ［AD］. They have the world's first technology to weld diamonds and metals together, and they want your observation and opinion.
If you have any plans to visit the show, please stop by their booth.

I went to a jewelry shop in Aoyama and Ginza.
The best seller price range is around 1000USD, so I find it difficult.

I will contact you again soon.

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How are you doing?
Do you have any plans to go to the melee the show starting from August 10th?
One of the tenants is a Japanese company called ［AD］. They have the world's first technology to weld diamonds and metals together, and they want your observation and opinion.
If you have any plans to visit the show, please stop by their booth.

I went to a jewelry shop in Aoyama and Ginza.
The best seller price range is around 1000USD, so I find it difficult.

I will contact you again soon.